Night Punishment

In a sense... A very unique book The protagonist is cheap, stupid, perverted, and ugly. If he is a bitch and lecherous but has a bright mind and a chivalrous heart, then he becomes Wei Xiaobao; if he is ugly but has some integrity and kindness in his heart, then there is an old-timer like Quasimodo. However, the protagonist who is punished at night is a fool, a lowly person, and a greedy and lustful person. Even if the author labels him as "ugly," it does not prevent him from plundering others. And all the female characters are often attracted to each other and have secret feelings, and there is no rejection or alienation at all. Li... This "ugliness" can only be said to be "superficial" without pun intended... But such a character cannot be said to be unique. Putting aside the fate of the protagonist such as love and romance, we can often see it in other stories. A pig teammate who is stupid, cheap and lustful, and has repeatedly brought a team into danger due to his various suffocation operations... If you see this kind of pig teammate elsewhere, most of the readers' reactions are that they wish they would die soon But Shifang is the destiny child of this book. Even if he makes all kinds of tossing and operations, he can "just" advance the plot... He can even make the female protagonists fall in love with him due to some strange combination of circumstances... It's hard to describe in a word. But if you think about it carefully, maybe it can also be explained by the old school? Aren't Linghu Chong, Li Xiaoyao, etc. A bit ruffian and a bit bad? But these older martial arts protagonists don't have the shamelessness of Shi Fang... Under the world view of their time, Shi Fang can almost be regarded as a prostitute. Occasionally, he forgets his life when he is in love, which also gives people a sense of dignity in contrast to his usual performance. The deliberate feeling of the memorial arch is also reflected in the scene where the original owner of the Six Soul Banner is not killed by throwing a knife at the beginning. Of course, I also read the author's post that almost spoiled the story and also explained Shifang's character design. If it is for foreshadowing, it is not impossible to come back with the weird personality. But the character design is one thing, and the plot arrangement is another. For example, when I watched Yuhou Village, I racked my brains and couldn't see that Shifang poured feces and urine on Ling Feng, and took advantage of Dan Xing, which was a shocking foreshadowing. After thinking about it, could this be a small episode to adjust the atmosphere and serve the readers? Maybe you will suddenly realize it after watching it at the end, but I personally don't appreciate this kind of plot. Although I want to believe that the author said that the puzzle solving after the foreshadowing must be enjoyable, all for the sake of Hou Yang's present suppression, but the reading process in the middle can only be said to be difficult. The "torture" of reducing my holdings... ================================== However, after revealing the character of the protagonist and returning to the plot itself, this book can be said to have ups and downs. When the conflict of interests in the temple in the background comes to the protagonist's side, only the remaining waves can set off a bloody storm. In the story, the grievances and hatreds in the rivers and lakes also have motives other than profit, which makes it a little more pyrotechnic. The entire plot is made up of various characters intertwined for their own purposes or desires. This is much richer than the facial expressions of Long Aotian and others who either give benefits to the protagonist or go against the protagonist and are killed. In fact, most books with the purpose of upgrading and developing the protagonist cannot do without this seemingly cliché routine, while suspense novels with the purpose of solving puzzles can focus on the story itself without leveling up. As for this book, many characters appear vivid and vivid (even far more likable than the protagonist) Like the Blood Puppet, which most book reviews praised by name, almost every character has two sets of personalities, the identity of the victim and the perpetrator, and the constantly reversing plot is both abrupt but traceable. Various smoke bombs are both distractions and reminders. When the final mystery is revealed, it can be regarded as interlocking. It's just that compared to serious detective novels, the detective Shifang is more like a "sleeping xxx" who is possessed by refreshing spirits from time to time than Sherlock Holmes ( The author himself is also quite approachable, and from time to time I see personal replies and explanations in book reviews. However, despite complaining so much, I still think that after opening the book, the author can base his thoughts on it rather than the opinions of one or a few readers. The best is the story that is written in one go, because only the author knows the whole story before it is finished. Maybe the author and the readers may not necessarily agree with each other, but the book that is patched up based on the reader's one-sided view is basically not good But I still hope that if there is a next book, the protagonist will not be so annoying (

In fact, the author has written very well both in terms of writing and plot, but the only problem is that the character of the protagonist is really unpleasant. Readers don't like this kind of child either in terms of temperament or behavior. Moreover, his strength deliberately suppresses the protagonist, which leads to not many people watching it. The author can consider writing fantasy or mystery genres, and the protagonist must be mentally mature, and he will definitely get good results.

Author, please stop writing fantasy novels, it's really not suitable. Go write suspense, the plot is too nmnb, the part about the snow puppet is really well written, I won't be able to sleep until I finish reading it. But there is really no need to portray the protagonist as ugly, just average-looking, so why bother. To be honest, the quality of the book is really too high. The large group of parallel importers on the list who have nothing but routines should just give in. Md What kind of world is it now, it is rare to have a good book to read.

Let me talk about the key points first: This book is not a fantasy novel, nor a crime novel, nor a romance novel. This book is a suspense and mystery novel. This book is a suspense and mystery novel. This book is a suspense and mystery novel. Important things should be said three times. What is suspense? Baidu explains that it is full of suspense and the inability to see the truth of things clearly, resulting in a state of doubt and incomprehension. Puzzle solving is to solve the mystery, reveal the truth, and finally be able to justify it. The biggest and most fundamental mystery in this book is the origin and life experience of the protagonist Shifang. All other mysteries, big and small, are caused by this. Regardless of the people walking in the border, the six soul flags, the three flowers, the five spirits, the world is in chaos, all the causes and effects of this world all have their roots in the mystery of Shifang's life experience. This book describes the entire process of Shifang exploring the mystery of his life experience. That's why the author Juncai in the opening chapter deliberately expresses these extremely unreasonable appearances: Why is Shifang in Huangjue Temple, why is he ugly, why is he stupid and crazy at one moment, and calculating and shrewd at the other, why does his character have both good and evil sides, why is he sometimes timid and cowardly but sometimes hot-blooded and fearless, why is he sometimes mean to death and sometimes righteous and heroic, etc. These extremely contradictory characteristics. Don't you, the author, know how to make the protagonist look like a character, who is handsome, smart and humorous, possesses special skills and is kind-hearted and righteous, which is more lovable? In fact, it is much simpler to write like this. It is nothing more than adding a few adjectives such as Yushu Linfeng, handsome and unrestrained, looking like Pan An, looking in the mirror can make you suffocate with your handsomeness. If Shifang is transformed into a time-travel rebirth of Li Changyu and Bruce Lee, wouldn't they be smart and possess unique skills? After that, if you catch a few harmful monsters at random, the NPC will either surrender or respect them with great respect. They will eliminate violence, be benevolent, righteous, propriety, wise and trustworthy, and even pretend to be aggressive (corpse monster, isn't this the case with Ling Feng in the book Apricot and Peach? It's not that the author doesn't know how to write such characters). But in this way, this suspenseful story that took the author a lot of effort has become a stereotyped article. Moreover, the first and third volumes written by the author are also logic-oriented unit stories. How could it be unclear how illogical and self-contradictory Shifang is if it is just the rebirth background of a simple little monk? But I believe that some readers will think about why Shifang is so contradictory and whether there is any unsolved mystery in him that leads to this. It is like the protagonist in the masterpiece "Roger's Mystery" by Agatha, the Queen of Suspense. When I read it, the author felt that this protagonist was very strange and had all kinds of honeyed behaviors. It was not until the end that he was deeply shocked. Of course, the author is just a little kid, so he is not qualified to compete with the Queen of Suspense. As for why Shifang has such a strange setting, and what his origin and identity are, the author Junzhen cannot spoil it at the beginning, otherwise the book will be completely meaningless, but he can write a rough metaphor. Shifang is like an empty bottle. If it contains perfume, it will naturally smell good; if it contains urine, it will naturally smell bad. But if the owner is lazy and only has one bottle but never washes it, he will use the bottle to hold milk in the morning, use it as a perfume bottle to hold perfume after drinking it, and use it as a chamber pot to hold urine when he needs to urinate at night. When he gets up the next day, he will continue the cycle of milk, perfume, and urine... What will that bottle smell like? One more word, the second volume introduces the Six Soul Banners in a long way, but it is really not an instruction manual for Goldfinger, it is about milk, perfume, urine... Otherwise, the Six Soul Banners are the souls of the people who sacrificed themselves, such as Zhang Junzuo, and Silver Wolf Wufeng is his own corpse dog soul. They are not actual monsters captured from the outside, but why did they become the ancient demon king Shuijie Cangqiong who is an individual existence in Shifang? Of course, if the reader just wants to watch the protagonist pretend to be a slap in the face, and all NPCs are just tools to gain experience points and slap the protagonist in the face, then this book is really rubbish and not worth your time at all. But if you want to see that both the protagonist and each NPC are a living person, with their own purposes, emotions and behavioral logic, and are the protagonists in their own stories, and finally converge into a suspenseful, interlocking, self-justifying story, with a bit of pretense and slap in the face, then this book will never let you down. There are two more questions: About the heroines: the three heroines are Bi Tao, Dan Xing, and Dai Mi. Bi Tao means the beginning of peach blossoms (revival of all things), Dan Xing means enchanting apricots (full of vitality), and Dai Mi means fragrance (fruitful). They are all taken from the custom of Jingzhe Three Marquises. Together they are Jingzhe, which means a new beginning and a promising future. The three heroines are not just for the harem. About the name of the dynasty: There is a detailed explanation in the setting of the work. Gold, silver, bronze, and black iron all come from Greek mythology. It is not that the author has trouble with metals such as gold, silver, copper, and iron. Finally, the author dares to pat his chest and set up a flag. Many readers have read Blood Puppet and think it is okay, but the Corpse Demon Volume and Rain After Volume may feel disappointed, but this is a necessary pavement for the mystery of the two heroines' life experiences, just like Volume 1 and Volume 2 are to pave the way for Shifang. Starting from the volume of Five Kings and Storm, the author can guarantee that it will be far better than Blood Puppet, and it will never collapse in the later stage. Welcome to slap in the face.

It's a good read. After reading the first volume, I feel that the problem is what most book reviews and reviews say. The protagonist has a personality problem. He is neither an invincible time traveler nor a native aboriginal. The identity of this time traveler is generally for the purpose of writing to keep up with current events. It doesn't matter if you make a few current jokes. Secondly, it provides a sense of immersion. Readers can quickly get into the state and have fun following the protagonist. But the character of the protagonist of this book cannot be considered too bad. After all, he was threatened by his master and lived precariously for many years. However, he is by no means a virgin, and he is not decisive enough. His actions and actions do not even shock the people around him. The shock of Ye Ti Xing is not because of how the protagonist is, but because of the fierceness of the plug-in. None of the above is actually very important. The key point is that this time traveler status does not bring any characteristics to the protagonist at all, or to put it bluntly, the protagonist has no so-called time traveler thinking in the first volume, and even his thoughts cannot be seen as an adult in the past life, let alone a modern monk who has become a monk, and he probably will not be there later. This is actually a pretty serious poisonous point. To summarize: Frankly speaking after reading the first volume, it would be better to just say that the protagonist is an aborigine. It really doesn't have the feeling of the soul thinking of an adult who travels through time. I wanted to give up many times in the middle of the book. I read the reviews and kept saying that the writing was good, so I persisted until I finished the first volume. Give a review. I feel that the author's writing is still very different from the well-known Internet writing routines now.

It's rare to encounter a protagonist who is still so anti-intellectual after more than 200 chapters... It is said that hardship makes people grow. The author assigned the protagonist's identity as a time traveler, the experience of entering the devil's cave at the beginning, and the experience of escaping from death many times. It is not seen that it has played any role in the protagonist. He still speaks unabashedly and acts absurdly. He has no strength but likes to challenge strong people. He is ugly and wants to take advantage of others. But the strong people can't do anything about him. He dares not even let out a fart when he says he is being showered with feces. Women are only verbally annoyed when they are taken advantage of, but they are actually a little bit happy? I really couldn't stand the book anymore, so I turned back to read the comments and found that the author explained in long paragraphs what long-term foreshadowing and what dark echoes. But this is really not a question of echo or not, but a question of whether the book is vague or not. I don't know how the author understands how cheap people's lives are in troubled times. I only know that even in today's peaceful times, the protagonist, who is so mean-mouthed and hot-tempered, doesn't have much to show for it, and has already been sanctioned in school.

The writing is good and the logic is online, but the character of the protagonist is unbearable. It's not that I don't want to read and use my brain, but that I really don't have a sense of immersion. In fact, there is no need to go against routines in order to write something. . Zhuhuo abandoned!

I've finished reading the story about making a puppet. The story is okay, but the protagonist's IQ fluctuates too much and the emotional scenes are too blunt. It's very tiring. I wonder if other readers feel the same way.

I only saw that the protagonist had just escaped from the temple, and I really liked the background setting and the plot in the temple at the beginning. But I really don't like the protagonist's character. Basically, he is just a naughty kid who takes advantage of everything. When he meets the heroine for the first time, he forces his flying head to fly behind his horse, begging for food, and exchanging insults with the opponent if he doesn't get it. This place is really disgusting. The first time someone said something nice to you, he refused to accept the monk's transformation, and then the protagonist continued to beg, and was scolded, and then he and the other party scolded each other... He was actually thinking about why the other party couldn't say no to him, but scolded him directly. I was thinking that the first thing someone said was to say no in a nice way, but in the end you had to continue begging for it, only to be scolded. How selfish do you have to have such an idea... In the end, I can only say that I am looking forward to the author's new work. I really don't like this protagonist.

Personally, I feel that the main problem with this book's lack of popularity is the positioning of the protagonist and the genre of the novel. The protagonist is an underage time traveler with an unlikable personality and low EQ and IQ, which inevitably makes people feel bored after watching it. After all, everyone hates naughty kids now. The novel category is the biggest failure of this book. Since the power system and the protagonist's acquisition of cultivation methods are written at the beginning, the expectation is shifted to cultivation and upgrade, which makes the real theme of solving puzzles become a drag. The Puppet Case is very exciting, but after reading the early stage and thinking it is fantasy, it is difficult to be interested in watching such a long process of solving the case. And those who like to see the solving of the case are dissuaded by the early fantasy part, so there are not many people who like the book. To be honest, in a world where the power system can carve out mountains and reclaim seas, it feels divisive to describe such an imaginary story of a conspiracy that has been laid out for more than ten years. Although the story written by the author is what a real world should be like, after all, the prevalence of fantasy novels has caused a powerful cultivation system that can defeat all kinds of methods to crush the flow and it is deeply ingrained in the hearts of readers. It is very inconsistent to look at this kind of approach that can obviously be killed directly but takes a long time to lay out.

Let's learn to do subtraction. There are too many things I want to express and it's a bit confusing.

It's well written, but the main character is too cheap. I can't stand it. I'm leaving.

This update always feels like a eunuch.

The more I write, the worse it gets, and my character has changed too much.

First of all, I like this book very much. It is suspenseful and scary, with a bit of fantasy, and it has the flavor of an exorcist. But after reading Blood Puppet, I felt that the plot was a little draggy. Although the long dialogues of some secondary characters can describe the characters more fully, they slow down the overall suspense pace and make readers feel tired. It is recommended that the author arrange the following chapters in order to make it clearer for readers, streamline some dialogues, and describe more actions and expressions, which will make it more brilliant. The above are all personal feelings. I hope the author will adopt them as appropriate. I am very optimistic about this novel 😌

They are all good reviews. Give me a chance. I am also short of money.

After reading the first two volumes, I happened to see Yuqian Village. Overall, the setting and plot are quite good. For example, the protagonist's training method is to sacrifice three souls and seven souls, but it has side effects. The first two volumes have a compact plot and look pretty good. However, during the three years of lurking in Yuqian Village, the protagonist has not made any progress, and the character of a child seems a bit burdensome. Most of the people who read the novel are adults, and a little foreshadowing of children's character is enough, and the plot feels complete. However, after two volumes, the plot slowly opens up, which makes people look very disgusting. The author also stresses the protagonist's cultivation for the subsequent plot, and at the same time sacrifices the protagonist's soul in the setting, resulting in memory loss. In this way, the protagonist is no different from the first chapter. It is equivalent to a waste of experience in the previous two volumes, and it is very dry and stiff for readers. The author should think about his audience before writing a book. This is really important. Looking forward to your next work, I will reward you with 1000 to encourage you, come on

All I can say is that the author has to make readers consider whether to continue reading this book every once in a while. I want to write a suspense story with a fantasy background, but the progress of the plot has been too slow in the past month. There are always some strange plots and emotional scenes, such as who is jealous again, who is unhappy, etc., Which is very outrageous. There is always a way that as long as some characters are unhappy, they will make a fuss no matter how big it is, which can be said to be very painful to watch. Even in the current plot, the protagonist and the people around him gave me a feeling of unsound mind, which is not something that a person over 14 years old can do. And the proportion of the plot is still too low. I always think that this is foreshadowing and that is a hidden thread. In the end, a lot of foreshadowing was completely unnecessary. We really didn't expect that certain places were foreshadowing, but whether or not it was written as foreshadowing didn't have an impact on the plot. What everyone wants to know is who is Li Shui Guanyin, who is a vampire, and what is the purpose of the mountain stone man? These are suspense that need to be revealed bit by bit. Nowadays, people who meet casually on the road have inseparable emotions, and great emotional sacrifices must be made to prevent this person's emotions from being hurt. No matter how I look at it, I don't think this kind of thing has any direct or indirect connection with suspense.