I Became a Planet

I finished reading it in one sitting yesterday, let me share my current views. It feels very fast to go from a desert star to multiple races in more than seventy chapters. After reading this, I want to write this type of article. However, the last dozens of chapters have been about "racial settings". Although there is combat mixed in, it is a bit too rigid. I think some more eye-catching things can be put together to increase reader stickiness (just suggestions): ①Each race creates a special individual (hero, first generation king, extremely smart young leader,...) Readers should be happy to go back and take a look at them every once in a while to witness their growth. [Civilization Change] Even empires will perish and collapse, not to mention tribes, not to mention conspiracy and scheming. Every character should have some thoughts. These tribes look like savages who can communicate with high-end weapons. Simply pitiful (The protagonist can witness the rise of some tribes, mainly the rise, not the defeat. It is understandable that readers want to see something good) (Occasionally add two psychological descriptions to the supporting characters, which can be more vivid) ②The shaping is more effective Meaningful legend (the plot of "throw away stone statues after use, and the protagonist doesn't care about it at all", so the impact of this plot on the subsequent plot has been manually minimized. This is definitely a pity) ③ Not all continents should have intelligent creatures and develop. In fact, there are always evolutions that are stagnant, eternal beasts, and intellectual evolution itself is also off track. The number is quite busy at present, and I feel that there can be one or two more, but no more will be difficult to carry in the later stage (this is some of my small opinions) ④ Strange and amazing landforms, unparalleled beauty. Everyone is a hidden landscape party. The scenery is well written and combined with the artistic conception can sublimate a plot. (For example: a sea of ​​flowers, a lake without any ripples that can reflect the sky, etc. My examples are already bad, so they should be) Correspondingly, there is a race that corresponds to the landforms, beautiful scenery and temperament. Although it is old-fashioned, it is easier to write and the effect is stable. ⑤The progress is too fast. If you have finished visiting the nine continents, what should the protagonist do? If we continue to develop technology, it is estimated that the steam age will begin in more than 150 chapters (the main reason is that the civilizations in each region are really different. Really big, the protagonist has only been around for a few months. Think carefully about the lizards and dwarves and the recently wiped out human tribe) And these creatures have not yet fully evolved. Referring to the small-brained humans in the article. Because it is really because of the influence of your book, the author, that I have some ideas for writing this kind of article. My thinking is active, and I hope for your understanding. There are really a lot of details to fill in, but there are no other problems at the moment. The above suggestions are what I can think of at the moment. (⑉ • •⑉) Just sauce

It's really heartbreaking to see a good subject written like this. Can you imagine the earth seeing humans using the name of God because of superstition, and then hating humans? Should centipedes be eliminated because they are ugly? Obviously it is written about a planet. Shouldn't the planet sit back and watch evolution without favoring or disliking it? So much so-called human nature is too much. I began to think that the book Becoming a Planet showed readers the charm of evolution, and that the will of the planet occasionally intervened to make evolution more diverse. Let readers see what primitive society looked like or write 10 million words on science or magic, etc. You are a planet, not a man, and don't want humanity. The good guys you think can die, and the bad guys you think can unify the world. Including destroying the environment is not the reason why you eliminate or hate the other party's existence. This kind of book will not make readers upset and has the potential to become a god. I write so much because I like this subject. Hope the author is popular

I'll take the first blood 😏

As a small fan, I know that the things written by the author are very easy to fool, and you may only be able to get into it with a full Qin. First of all, the different system in the later stage means that technology and super powers will be mixed together, and readers will not be happy. Down, down, left, right, and right, the ba keeps popping out, causing the protagonist to become an unnecessary thing. The positioning of the protagonist must be ensured. Secondly, it cannot be too messy and must be adjusted, otherwise it will be like me. I am obviously writing about rat people, but drifted to Homo sapiens. It is best to have an outline. Furthermore, the protagonist cannot be omnipotent and cannot create anything out of thin air. I was criticized to death by readers because of this point. ~~~~(>_<)~~~~(Don't delete book reviews)

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It's actually pretty good, but the description is too cumbersome. The more you listen, the less addictive you will be. The topic is written in a more advanced way. Nowadays, people just like to watch interesting things, as you describe in this language. Be funny, that's really beautiful!

If you are a fan, the author may not consider it. I am the leader of the lizard tribe. Our tribe lives a primitive life. Every time we go hunting, many people die. I don't want to go on like this anymore. I want to change. But my mind is empty and I can't think of anything. Until one day, our tribe lost two more warriors, and I stood on the high platform. Suddenly, my consciousness blurred, and a feeling I couldn't describe emerged. I feel like I am God and can control everything. This feeling was fleeting, and soon I was in darkness and fell silent. Later I woke up and found that there were some more weapons in the tribe that I never knew about. Sifu, the wise man of our tribe, told me the cause and effect, and then I realized that the feeling I just felt was the presence of God, and God is like this! The feeling just now that I couldn't help but want to kneel down. Our tribe has an object of worship. But I have always had a question in my mind: God, can He really be that good? Even lowering its dignity to befall an insignificant life? The fantastic scene that happened before. It seems like someone is manipulating it. All the timing was perfect, all the responses were expected. Could he really be that good? Humph, my current thoughts should have been understood by him by now. This planet seems to have been designed. What is his purpose in doing all this? When we develop rapidly, will we pose a threat to "God"? How will he destroy us once he is a ridiculous clown sitting on a pedestal? How should we treat him?

I'm a deadbeat kid. (Funny saves life.) Mianmianmianmian. I don't remember what my name was. I just remember that I seemed to be a ball! I'm so sleepy. I want to sleep for a while . I don't know when I fell asleep, but I suddenly woke up from hunger. I'm so hungry. I need to eat. What does it mean to eat something? Have no idea. Then go quickly! "Oh, when the food comes, eat it quickly." After saying this in his consciousness, the planet was concentrated in one direction by its own gravity. And that meteorite is heading towards the source of gravity. Slowly changing the angle. Slowly. The meteorite was slowly accelerated by gravity. Finally the meteorite finally hit the planet. "(oT-T) It hurts! But I'm not hungry anymore. I'm so sleepy. I want to sleep, huh? What is sleep? Forget it." In this way, this planet keeps eating, sleeping, eating, sleeping, eating, sleeping. It became the number one gas giant in this department. I don't know how long it has passed, but there are also stars in this system. There is almost no substance left. "I'm so hungry, why don't I have anything to eat? Hmm. What's that yellow glowing thing? What does glowing mean? What does the yellow thing mean? Forget it, run over there and eat it." In this way, this gluttonous planet slowly approached the star. Slowly the planet spiraled closer to the star. "He's so big, so scary. The temperature is so high. I don't want to get close to him, ahhh! Run! Oh, by the way, what does temperature mean? Ah, no matter, no matter, run! ヾ(>Д<;))))... Escape~~" However, the frantic escape of this gluttonous planet was of no use. It just delayed the time when he was hit by the planet. When it comes to impact, he sends it. "Ah!" "Well, what's wrong with me? Well, why is my body so bloated? Ah, I feel like I'm going to explode." After a supernova explosion, this gluttonous planet turned into a neutron star. "Well, I'm so sleepy. I want to sleep. Well, what does sleeping mean? Forget it, never mind, I'm going to sleep." I don't know how many billions of years have passed. The temperature of the neutron star slowly dropped. "It's so cold. Why is it so cold as soon as I get up? Well, what do you mean by getting up? Well, I don't want to think about it anymore. I don't want to think about it anymore. Well, is there any way to keep warm? Well, what is heating?..." The temperature got lower and lower. "What can we do as it gets colder and colder? What is the solution?" The temperature finally dropped to a certain critical value. "Well, it's so cold! Why do I have a bad feeling?" The neutron star finally turned into a black hole. "I'm so hungry! Why am I so hungry? I've never been so hungry. I want to eat. Well, what is the thing? Forget it, no matter what, I want to fill my stomach. What is filling my stomach? It's so difficult, I want to eat." In this way, the black hole eats away the surrounding stars one by one. Eating countless stars, it slowly approached the center of the galaxy. "Well, there's a lot of food here. Now you can eat until you're full. What do you mean by full? Forget it." Slowly, the black hole got closer and closer to the black hole in the center of the galaxy. And this black hole accidentally used too much force. Rushing towards the important black hole in the galaxy. "Ah, he is so big, run! ε=ε=ε=┌(；´°ェ°)┘" But the black hole's struggle is of no use. Still being sucked into that black hole. The two black holes merged perfectly. "Well, what's wrong? Well, I'm still hungry. I'm even hungrier than before. Wow, there's a lot of food around. Well, I'm going to eat something. Well, what is it? It has appeared several times and I can't figure it out! Why do you need to know so many things? Isn't it better to eat? Hmm? Why did it appear again?" Slowly. This is the only thing left in this galaxy. And this black hole has also set its sights on other galaxies. "Now I can eat to my fullness again. Hmm? What does it mean when I feel full again?" "It's so delicious." Slowly. The entire supercluster. He was also eaten. Oh! Most of the matter in the universe. They were all eaten by him. And the universe began to shrink. "Well, I'm so hungry. I have nothing to eat." "Ah!" The universe is getting smaller and smaller. Finally, it was sucked into a particle of unknown size by the black hole. "Well, why do you feel like you're going to explode?" …

Little fan (don't troll, be funny to save your life) Diary of the Sheep Tribe: Huh...

Made in the game, my handicap can only make this... (Don't spray)

What's most important about the new book issue? Recommended votes, students! If you have a lot of extra money and don't know where to invest it... There is a big gap in this book 😁 As for the signing issue, I asked. Due to the impact of the epidemic and the vacation during the Spring Festival, the editors are also working overtime to process the contract. I believe the status will be changed soon. If you don't invest, do it as soon as possible! I also want to say, thank you all for supporting this book! When you first read this book, some people may think it is the 4.6 Billion type. In fact, it is not the same, and even the plot development is very different. It is possible that when you are reading, you will sigh like "Oh my god, this is such a development." Hahaha. Thank you again for your support, I will definitely finish this book!

Meteorite (guess YY) What the cleaner is facing is a planet full of hope. The surface wrapped in green has already indicated the existence of this life. The thriving life makes the cleaner's heart that has been tempered into steel tremble slightly. It is not only the appearance of the planet, but its destiny. "How long has it been since I saw such a promising planet?" The cleaner sighed in his heart. During his long cleaning career, he witnessed the destruction of countless civilizations, not by himself, but by the cleaners looking at them from a distance and the cleaning tools casually thrown away. Life is beautiful, but it is also dangerous. The existence of any life is likely to develop civilization, and the only thing between civilizations is life and death. As usual, the cleaners silently switched out the locking system after confirming the existence of life. After confirming the orbit, the cleaners began to apply for permission to use weapons. Applying for weapons permission takes time, and this also gives him time to consider how to use the weapons. "You cannot use high-energy kinetic weapons - they are prepared for stars, and it is a huge waste to use them on a planet that has not even developed the ability to explore outer space." Thinking of this, the cleaner was actually a little relieved - the feeling of destroying a star system is different from destroying a planetary system. This is an emotion born after witnessing countless civilizations and cultures during a long cleaning career. Cleaners often learn about the other party's culture and history by eavesdropping on the electromagnetic gravitational wave signals of those civilizations. In front of the deciphering system, the encryption of these cleaned civilizations is as transparent as glass. This is also the greatest joy of the profession of cleaner. Many times, after the cleanup is completed, the cleaner has already obtained all the information. After a long analysis, he can see through the entire history, judge the merits and crimes of the past, and become the best historian. The cleaner chose a relatively mild low-level kinetic energy weapon, which was a meteorite with a considerable relative speed to the target. After confirming that the weapon entered orbit, the cleaner stopped detecting the planet. In just a few working days, he had already seen the evolutionary history of the planet. It was a bit strange, but it was not within his scope of concern. His main business was destruction, not creation, and the research was only for personal pleasure. The life of a cleaner is so simple, unpretentious, and boring. The meteorite slowly floated towards the planet, and the cleaner rushed to the next galaxy. The moment he closed his eyes, the trajectory of the meteorite... Changed.

Little fan (don't troll me) Hi everyone. I am that big dumpling. Initially I was a fourth class citizen. Then I got sucked off by the second dick in our group of fourth-class citizens. Became his satellite. Became a fifth-class citizen. ˚‧º·(˚ ˃̣̣̥᷄⌓˂̣̣̥᷅ )‧º·˚It's uncomfortable for shiitake mushrooms. And he doesn't protect me well either. You won't let me go yet, haha, I really want to cry. Who can come and save me? Set me free. I want to leave this stinky thing. You stinky planet. Anyway, I don't know when he became a third-class citizen. I became his fourth-class citizen. I want to leave you and go back. It turned out to be that big brother. He is the strongest, your ball is so weak. QAQ😭 This is the inner monologue of Big Dumpling.

Little fan: Baa (hello), baa ba (I am Yang Yang), baa baa baa (a brave sheep man), baa baa? (By the way, what do I want to write?) Baa baa baa (forget it, I won't write it) (Don't send the blade duck)

Lizard Man Concept Art

Bilibili UP made this novel into a video, which lasted nine hours

I like this theme very much, I hope I don't want eunuchs

I originally wanted to read it all in one go, but then I realized I didn't have enough coins. .

Little Fan: White Wolf Royal Family I am the 14th White Wolf King Acrisius III of the White Wolf Empire Today is the year 1792 of the White Wolf Calendar, and those birdmen who claim to be the servants of God have already broken through. On the north bank of the empire, the imperial general Oakley, who had saved the empire several times, has also fallen under the steel claws of those birdmen. Could it be that the country left by our ancestors will be destroyed in my hands? No, I see that the only way is to alliance with the lizardmen.

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It feels like there is no focus on development. It not only wastes time for biodiversity, but also lacks excitement. The protagonist can be a god. Alas, such a fun thing was simply abandoned later. The protagonist can completely play it. The destruction of civilization is just a matter of sleeping again. As a human race, we can definitely recommend human evolution. In the feudal period, you can play various games with Gods. If you feel that you are helping them too much, you will suck the blood of Gods. You will say that you are a god and then do nothing, which will make them disappointed in God. Anyway, after thousands of years, they will use science and technology to break this statement. You are just worshiping ancient people. Who knows that you really exist. And you can completely create your own body and travel to various key nodes in history. Please don't be too happy. In the later stage, I can just abandon science and pursue immortality. I just write novels for fun. I feel like reading the book is like being with a straight man, which is all kinds of uncomfortable anyway. 😭

Below is the flow of ocean currents. The painting is not good. Originally, the ocean currents around the two poles should be colored yellow. I neglected to use red before. Please be tolerant. Thanks!

Little Fan: The Emperor is Ruthless Nanqu Guancheng, "Your Majesty, your Majesty has a secret decree, why don't you hurry up and receive it." The person who came was a eunuch, with a red robe with gold patterns, a jade pendant with a gold ring, and a white face without a beard, which made people feel very noble. There was a man sitting at the main seat in the hall. The white silver armor robe on the man's body was already stained with blood and dust, and his temples were gray beside his sword eyebrows. "Brother Wang, accept the order!" The man on the main seat walked down and knelt on one knee. "You are so presumptuous that you will not kneel down when you see the order." After hearing this, Bai Haoan was so angry that he almost drew his sword, but was stopped by Bai Yulong. That man is the current guard of Nanquguan City, Shunping Wang Baijian, the commander-in-chief of the Shunping Army. Bai Jian also blocked it with his hands and knelt down, enduring the pain of the silver armor digging into his flesh. "I have ordered Zuozhuwei to find out. The birdman's idol of faith has been sent out with the army. If the statue is captured and placed on the city wall, Nanquguan City will be safe. The emperor's brother has ordered Lu Zongwei to come and guard the city. After you capture the statue, you will secretly hand it over to Bai Haoan and take it to Nanquguan City. You will lead the birdman to Broken Dragon Valley to hold on until Lu Zongwei rescues him. The emperor knows that his brother is a victorious general. Who in the White Wolf Empire is not the best? Who knows, haha, this time Brother Wang needs to stand in danger for up to three days. Lu Zongwei will make the statue negotiate with the Birdman Priest to save Brother Wang from danger, and our White Wolf Empire will be stable for twenty years. Please leave it to Brother Wang." After the eunuch read, he handed the secret order to Bai Jian and turned around and left. No one saw the meaningful smile on the corner of the eunuch's mouth... On the day of the expedition, Bai Jian looked at the more than 10,000 soldiers under the general stage. The soldiers' armors were all covered with knife marks. It was not difficult to see that they were all elite soldiers who had fought many battles. "Follow me to the battle!" Bai Jian drew out his sword and shouted, "King Shunping, Shunping army, Shunjun will quell the enemy and bring peace to the world! Victory! Fight! Fight!" The soldiers roared, and everyone had the heroic spirit of fighting in their hearts. ................................ "Your Majesty, we have good news about Nanquguan City. General Lu Zongwei drove back the barbarians and killed 140,000 enemies!" Emperor Bai Yun nodded and said nothing, and none of the eunuchs around him said anything. "What's important?" Emperor Bai Yun asked without raising his head as he continued to review the memorial. "This... Bai Jian is dead." When Emperor Bai Yun heard this, his pen tip paused slightly but returned to its original state in just an instant, "He did not obey the command, was arrogant in the battle, led 10,000 people into the battle, and died in Broken Dragon Valley." After the eunuch finished speaking, he looked at his nose, nose and heart, and lowered his head as if this world had nothing to do with him. "Lu Zongwei... Is too much, swallow it all, hum! What a big appetite, not afraid of choking to death. Kai, Lu Zongwei killed the enemy... Forty thousand, Bai Jian killed one hundred thousand enemies. You can watch the rest and submit it to me." "Yes, Your Majesty." ........................ "Emperor brother! Where is your support? Emperor brother, Brother Wang has never failed you. Brother Wang gave up the throne to you, what else do you want! Poof!" Bai Jian held the white dragon jade spear in his hand, pulled out the sword and cut off the shaft of the eighteenth arrow that hit him, and shouted vomiting blood. Bai Yulong supported Bai Jian, "General, we still have a thousand cavalry, break out! We will protect you and you will be able to break out!" Bai Jian listened to Bai Yulong's words and looked around at the veterans who had followed him to fight in the north and south for more than ten years. There was no timidity or fear in his eyes, only determination and fighting spirit. How can I give up if you haven't given up? Bai Jian got on his horse, raised his gun and shouted angrily, "Werewolves are fearless! Shunping is fearless! All officers and men charge with me!" Bai Jian raised his gun and rushed towards the only way out of Broken Dragon Valley. "General, why are we ambushing here? Hasn't General Lu already talked with the Birdmen?" "General Lu has received a secret report that the militants in the Birdmen have bribed several people from the White Wolf tribe to pretend to be the dead Prince Baijian. It is possible that sneak attacks in the past few days will cause another war... Well, that seems to be the case, soldiers, prepare!" "Your Majesty, it seems that there are soldiers from our White Wolf Empire in front of us. We are safe!" Bai Yulong said to Bai Jian. Bai Jian nodded. He was a little confused now. Bai Jian recalled that it was like a dream that he used a thousand men to break through the blockade of 100,000 people, but now he is safe............. "Fire the arrow!"

The Blood God... The Loving Father... Tzeentch... The Lord of All Spirits... Roar! Strength! War! Destroy! The world will be brought to its end by us (by mistake)! ! ! (Acha: "Nisasa?")

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The author is Colorful Little Cow

The destroyed giant civilization, due to the war with the Zerg, disappeared in the long river of history around the year 1500 of the New Human Era. If a thousand years later, when the lost giant civilization was discovered...

The author is great, I have a new idea, I read it again, and I found a problem, now I am not as enthusiastic as I was at the beginning. I think every era should have a hero (or leader or something) and it would be very exciting to write about this hero or leader from a first-person perspective. And then, a hero, a heroic sacrifice will make you a hero🐶. Just like our nation, there will always be some leaders and heroes whose legends will continue to be passed down through the ages. Also, this will give our readers a sense of involvement. When the hero or leader dies, use the protagonist's perspective (if you write too much from the God's perspective, some people will say that you are too stupid to write the race in it, you can use the first perspective to write more). It will be more enjoyable to review what happened, and there are leaders and so on. , I think the racial leaders written in capital letters by the author seem to be all men or old men. You can write about women as leaders or recommend some smarter children as leaders, which does not seem to be common sense. Then the tribal form does not need to be a standard tribal form as a template. You can Baidu or read the news about foreign indigenous people. I think those indigenous people are very strange, and you can find inspiration in the behavior, tribal form, and religious beliefs of those indigenous people. The author has mostly written about different races, but I personally feel that (not to belittle or in any derogatory sense) is that the characteristics are not obvious. One race has only one difference from other races, which is the effect of obvious characteristics. The characteristics are obvious and can make people immediately call them out, such as the dwarves who can make weapons, the birdmen who are good at fighting (although the birdmen are written about religious beliefs, but what impressed me most is the hunting method), and the poison-spitting lizardmen. It is just a race that has one characteristic that stands out. After looking at the birdmen, I feel that they have more characteristics but they are not very outstanding. I feel that they are not outstanding if they are more prominent. Because one race has skills (or abilities, etc.) That another race is not good at, so that one race will not exterminate the other race in the later period. Just like the black slaves in the past, at least they are strong enough to be kept as slaves (like those Native Americans who have no outstanding characteristics🐶) That's about it. There may be some places where the expression is not very good, so forgive me😝

It was an interesting setting at the beginning, but it quickly became boring later on. The description of the protagonist's divine descent and interference in the development of creation is completely out of character, and it feels like he doesn't have as many things in his mind as I do. I thought it would bring some fresh ideas, but the writing just gave me a thumbs down. Not to mention the epic feeling, it almost feels like a street stall.