Great Martial Arts

The writing is really rubbish, a complete anecdote, and copied the plot of the movie. If you look at the plot, I will look at you? Not recommended, not worth your time.

The writing of one person's martial arts world is very unsatisfactory. The wonderful thing about Feng Yuxiu in the original work is that he is a pure person, a martial arts idiot, who is divided into life and death, as well as superiority and inferiority, and uses his own life to fight for excellence. The protagonist has passed away, has become more scheming, and has a way out. It is not very pure, of course, this is okay, but the protagonist has become Feng Yuxiu, and the plot is the same as the original version. In this way, there is a contrast. The charm of the protagonist is completely overwhelmed by the original characters, making the protagonist seem inferior.

Feng Yuxiu and Xia Houwu, one on one, a fair duel, who is stronger? In the movie, Xia Houwu could have killed Feng Yuxiu, but he held back because he didn't want to kill anyone, so Feng Yuxiu overturned the plot. In the end, Feng Yuxiu was shot to death.

During the Republic of China, you had been living rough for decades, but after returning to China, you changed your mind? , It takes so much effort to seal Yu Xiu and Aji? Still injured? At least he has the magnanimity to dominate the Republic of China for decades. He should be able to kill Feng Yuxiu with ease. When his shirt is cut by Ah Ji, when he says a classic line from Motora, he is taken away in a straight wave, and he comes up in an instant. Looking at what you have written now, I feel that the decades of pig's feet in the Republic of China are not worth it.

It's really rubbish written like a running account

... Author, are you copying the plot or writing a novel?

I speak with conscience, the author just copied the movie, and added a protagonist into it, it was too blunt

Volume 1, not bad! Damn it! I can't understand the second volume! I don't know what he said!

Speaking from my conscience, the author's writing is really good.

Wasn't the Republic of China chapter written too intoxicatingly? I looked at it and saw that there was no main character, and then skipped to read it. The sequelae was that there were many places where the main character was. I only read the entire Republic of China chapter in two or three chapters. Then I reached the end and started reading, but I couldn't stand it anymore, forcing people to abandon the book.

This novel is like writing a novel version of a movie. People who like it will like it, and people who hate it will like it. . . I personally like the description of martial arts. To be honest, not many people can write so carefully just by watching movies. (This is the author's ability and cannot be denied) If the author continues this style, I am not sure whether this book will be popular. Because the plot is too close to the original work. But writing about other martial arts in the future will be very successful.

The volume of the Republic of China was disgusting... The author wanted to integrate various legendary movies and TV shows of the Republic of China, with the integration of northern and southern martial arts as the main line, but it was still fragmented by various plots. The idea is good, but the level is limited.

Personally I think it's pretty good, just try your best.

Not only do you have fewer introductions, but you also have fewer updates. One update a day is enough.

Why doesn't the author let the protagonist use a gun? A gun is also a weapon, but it's just a hot weapon. Since it's a weapon, why do samurai reject guns?

The Ming Dynasty Volume is well written, come on, the next part is very difficult to write, using consortiums to make money, black money infiltrating the police world, and finally infiltrating the political world. Based on the warriors, we discovered the secondary gunner team and the hot and cold weapons special forces. Money and fists and guns ultimately support the fight against Japan

I don't understand why there are so many blackmails. I think the writing is quite good. I can see that the author put his heart into it.

There is no need to write about the main world, just let the protagonist go to the next world to wander