Ten Thousand Years Before God

Wow, the big boss who has already signed a contract, Xiaobai is trembling. The following only represents my personal views: Features: Characters: The character creation is very delicate and the wording is accurate. Plot: Similar to the setting of Lord of Mysteries, the beginning is an extraordinary event. Environment: The environment description is very detailed and the rendering is in place. Suggestion: The writing is very good, but some are too detailed and seem wordy. Contents that are not related to the main line can be omitted as much as possible. It can be seen that the author may want to imitate the squid and write about the delicacy of life, but I can't say why. Maybe it's because he doesn't have the aura of a great god, so the effect is not that good. The progress of the plot is a bit slow. I hope the pace can be speeded up. After all, I am a newcomer and do not have a fan base. Many people may have given up after reading the first seven or eight chapters without getting any enjoyment out of it. Although Lord of Mysteries describes a lot of details, most of them are related to the main plot and are intertwined. The protagonist's strength develops very quickly and he experiences many events. There are also some places that I don't understand very well. For example, why do you have to spend one penny to buy a cup of boiling water? Can't you give change? What did the two children's reactions at the train station mean? Why are you crying? In addition, the extraordinary weirdness is not clearly highlighted, which can be strengthened. Come on, boss!

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It's so beautiful, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง. If you have nothing to do, you might as well come and read my book, give me some advice, and let's work together😊

The book cover is very nice (*๓´╰╯`๓)♡

I'm back for a visit, it's already on the bookshelf, waiting for more updates from King Tyrant!

Already voted! After reading some, the author has a strong writing skills, and the preliminary work should be in place. Of course fantasy is not my favorite genre, so I haven't read a lot of it, but I support your work, keep it up!

Awesome, keep up the good work!

Very creative, new books are waiting for you, keep up the good work

The writing is clear and smooth, and the writing style is vigorous and powerful. Come on

Received, Purple Ears, I'm here to cheer you on

Very beautiful background! Not bad! I guess it's been changed a lot, haha. Signing a contract has not yet entered Lao Ge's agenda. . .

In fact, people have been reading your books...

Whether you finish this book or not, the next one will be even more exciting. I will continue to support you!

Not on the shelves? Finish the book directly? Damn 🐮🍺

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

? ? ? I'm still keeping books waiting to be put on the shelves, why don't you just kill them? ? ? 😭😭😭