Fear Manipulator

Okay, let's write the characteristics of each person's character more clearly, because everyone has their own strengths and weaknesses. The book is good and well received. 👍

I have read the first three chapters. Most of the writing is good, but a few parts are inexplicably a little immature... The writing is smooth, and the story setting is average and edible. In addition, the plot of the first three chapters is a bit ordinary and not attractive, and the horror atmosphere is not strong enough... Come on

Come on

Are you reading my book? Just squeak! Squeak!

Praising the author—— When I was bored, I accidentally discovered a book of extraordinary quality. The plot is smooth and smooth, neither disjointed nor protracted. The writing is unexpectedly smooth. When I come out of the main god space, I will definitely bring someone to threaten the author to add more chapters! Lord God Space·Global Melee·Independent Battalion Station "We are still surrounded by the Ghost Scorpion Organization. The brothers below have rushed several times but failed to break through the opposite defense line, and they have suffered a lot." The adjutant looked outside through the gap in the bunker. I filled my intestines: "I can't wait any longer, the reinforcements can't come." It hurts... I can't feel it anymore. Without antibiotics... With current medical capabilities... A plague may break out. "The bridge was bombed, and the transport planes can't get through. Now we can only be passively beaten. Now we can only think of ways to seize the port and wait until our brothers from the navy come to help!" I moved my body. Fortunately the intestines didn't fall out again. "The submarine force was scattered, and the naval force did not dare to come over. I am afraid that there are not enough positions. Someone will stay, and now the ammunition and food are exhausted." "Got it, organize the brothers to withdraw, and blow up the position before leaving. We cannot leave it to the enemy." ......20 Kilometers away from the original position. Hey... The communication equipment is connected, but it is very unsmooth. The Poisonous Scorpion organization is infiltrating half of our electronic equipment. The crippled electronic countermeasures team is struggling to resist. It should not last long. "This is the No. 5 Ship of the B-type submarine formation. The global coordinates are 214.684 355.709. Please reply!" The commander's voice was faintly heard: "First...10, Tail...5!" "Apply to open the No. 6 Torpedo tube." "Float to 20 meters! Coordinate 270!" There is a battle over there. "Boom——! Bang——!" Loud noise. "The engine stalled! The waterproof compartment is damaged!" I clutched my intestines and grabbed the communication equipment: "This is the 15th Independent Battalion, global coordinates 215.602 358.710, Please reply when you receive it!" "This is the No. 5 Ship! Our air pressure is out of balance! The engine is also on fire... We are about to abandon the submarine, that is..." Busy tone... At this time, I took out a book written by the author, called The Fear Controller, and turned a few pages. A force goes straight from the top of the head to the soles of the feet. It is wonderful and endless aftertaste. The admiration in my heart is like the Yangtze River flowing eastward, and the Yellow River rushing endlessly. The picture scrolls described in the book that are full of life but without losing elegance, fun, and personality charm gradually unfold while reading... Bu Shui

Newbie, new book, if there is anything bad about it, please point it out and we will change it as appropriate. Let us grow together (don't let me play like a single player~) By the way, I will build a supplementary building. If there is a suitable one, I will add it, name, identity, and the monsters I own (but it can also be an item)

After reading the latest 12 chapters, sort out the characters who appeared Wang Yuchen: "Protagonist" Has the ability: Eye of Fear (can cause fear in others) to absorb fear, fear boiling, fear field (normally 20 meters in diameter). But if the one eye keeps opening, the black lines will deepen, and it will be swallowed by the Eye of Fear Identity: A senior high school student in No. 8 Middle School, Nan City, Province H, when The Kneeler of Daihua Zhang Rujun: "Supporting Role" (Death) Zhang Ziqi: "Supporting Role" Ability: Unknown (first fused with "Underworld Cat" at a base) Identity: High school student in Nan City, H Province, No. 1079 Unknown old man: "Supporting Role" (one-armed) Ability: Manipulation of corpses (suspected) Corpse Transformation Technique (let the subject rot ) Identity: Unknown Hu Song: "Supporting Role" Abilities: Unknown Identity: Ghost Sword, Police Officer of N Town Warcraft Branch Gao Lingnan: "Supporting Role" Ability: Flute (slows people down when played) Identity: Director Wang Long: "Supporting Role" Ability: Unknown Identity: Wang Yuchen's father Dear Lin Feng: "Supporting Role" Abilities: Unknown Identity: Wang Yuchen's mother Bai Chenyu: "The Heroine" (suspected) Ability: Hair Control (controlling hair length, softness and hardness) Identity: Gao Lingnan's apprentice Jia Sen: "Supporting Role" Abilities: Blood Blade Technique, Extreme Speed Identity: Clown, Laughter

Do any of you want to be an operations officer? ! ! Let me know if you have any!

Collected, keep it now, come back to see it in a few days~♥

Ten votes plus one update. If you dare to vote, I will add it. I post it here as proof.

Invested, automatically subscribed, come on

I really like the character Gao Lingnan in it, he's so handsome.

I voted for the recommendation, come on, the book is very good, just use less dirty words and dirty words. After you finish writing, read it yourself and look for typos, come on!

The settings are very good, but some punctuation marks are a bit problematic. Overall, it's pretty good for a newcomer.

Return visit to "My Schizophrenia System", collected and invested

The conflict between state forces and underground forces is a bit of a joke. I hope the author can carefully construct the worldview, whether it is a corrupt government or a strong one, without any conflict. Come on.

The outline is pretty good, and the occasional rants are pretty good, but one of the schoolmates dies at the beginning. It's a bit unreasonable for the protagonist to encounter so many weird things in the woods later on.

When writing a novel, the minimum punctuation marks must be correct. I saw that the author used commas at the end of several paragraphs 😰

The author, the book is good, I am gaining weight, and then I discovered something, my name and the name of a character in the book are actually the same! ! ! 😂😂😂, No matter what, the author keeps writing.

Good luck in the college entrance examination💪🏻, continue with the next book

I also want to say that I feel that the main character in this book may be a bit *censored at the end. I don't know if it's just me personally. I hope it can be changed. Well, I can only vote for recommendation first. It's just a suggestion, not a requirement. It also depends on the author. Don't criticize me. . . .

After reading the introduction, I found that "The Young Master Bai Jie" was also written by the author. I was so excited that I put it on the shelf for a while.

The college entrance examination is difficult, but it is difficult to reach the sky!

Why do the replies to many posts show that they do not exist?

I finally installed software that allows me to post book reviews... Otherwise the author of the book reviews I posted before would not be able to see them 😭 Great author! ! (Waving)

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Forget it if you have to take the college entrance examination soon, study hard, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

Received, welcome to comment back, cheers!

There's a new book. . . . You won't see anyone when you come back.

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