Thirty-Three Heavenly Records

From the first chapter, I was amazed! I think the author's description is very good and detailed! The copywriting is also amazing! Already collected! Come on↖(^ω^)↗

After this week, I have a certain understanding of this book and a shallow understanding of the author's writing style, so now I want to talk about some newly discovered issues. This time I only plan to put forward some opinions on this book based on my own superficial experience. First of all, everyone who is engaged in novel writing should have heard of a saying called the Three Golden Chapters. This is wrong. But as a false statement can be widely circulated, it must be said that this is ridiculous. However, if a false statement is widely circulated, then it must have a certain degree of correctness. The Three Golden Chapters are no exception. The only thing that can be said to be absolutely correct in the Three Golden Chapters is that the beginning should be attractive. As long as you can do this, the author's performance will never be bad. The beginning of this book still lacks appeal to me. So where does the problem come from? It's the author's writing style. I don't think the author actually has much problem with the description. But it can be said that the author knows nothing about character creation and overall control. The only character that makes me see hope is that the protagonist's grandfather is dead So I hope the author can work hard and try in these two aspects. I dare not give the author any advice on how to do it, because I think writing is a very talent-based thing. If you don't have talent, you can actually consider giving up writing to make a living. And having talent can only guarantee that you will not starve to death, but what you need to become a god is luck. I don't want to deny the author's great efforts, but this is an indisputable fact. There are many people with talent but no luck. Even if you know how Jack Ma became successful, you still cannot become Jack Ma. This is the reason. You don't have Jack Ma's luck. So you can't become Jack Ma no matter what. I am just a small reader, so I can't help the author much. I can only offer some of my opinions. I wish the author will get better and better results.

Please review the book! ⊙⊙ Collect and recommend some... Writing a book alone, receiving few responses, uncomfortable╯╰ Please review the book! ! ! Please give me some advice! Please try the poison...

Isn't the chapter I just updated a bit poisonous? 😰😰😰 I have been at a loss for words these past two days, so I designed this plot of Guan Xiong... Maybe this can become a foreshadowing in the future! Writing a book is not as easy as imagined, with plot and characters! They all need to rack their brains to come up with ideas... I've been a little stuck lately!

Come on! I vote for myself 5 times a day😁

Emmmm, some thoughts on the latest chapter 7 I won't mention the issues I mentioned before here I am going to talk about my feelings about the new chapter 7 first. If I use water as a metaphor, the latest chapter 7 is like a free drink to me. Why do I say that? Because these 7 chapters are too straightforward, or the author is forcing us to accept it. For example I remember there was a content where the protagonist and Blackstone drank wine, and then Blackstone thought that the protagonist was his good friend. I will express my opinion based on my humble opinion. The author didn't say why we became good friends after a drink. This is what you told us, emmmm. Maybe you don't quite understand what I mean. What I want to express is that most of the things in the book cannot be told directly by the author, because it would be very dramatic. But this book is the other way around. Most of the things in the book are told to us by the author. That's emmmm. How should I say it? The purpose of reading most of the novel is to find a sense of substitution, to put oneself into the role of the protagonist, and then to substitute it in one's own mind through reading. However, if you don't write out part of the drinking incident, then there will be no conditions for them to become friends in the readers' minds. Without conditions, you directly tell the result, which results in the lack of the sense of substitution for the readers. It will cause drama, and then the evaluation of the book will be lowered. I hope the author can understand this. In fact, as a reader, I really hate the author forcing us to accept his settings, because this will cause the illusion that the author is posing our thoughts, so I still hope the author can greatly improve in this aspect Also, the content of these 7 chapters has no ups and downs, which is actually a flaw of the book, that is to say, the ups and downs of his story are not serious, and his plot is too bland This is also different, because some plots are still bland. Literary people think that Nongfu Spring is a bit sweet, but yours is like Liangbaikai. What is missing is a sense of substitution. If you have a sense of substitution, you can make Nongfu Spring a little sweet even if you write daily novels. Novel without a sense of substitution will not get ahead in any case Okay, the above is my humble opinion this week You can see that the author has really tried to improve my previous questions this week, but I think what I said before was too vague, so I only picked some fatal points this time. The author please continue to work hard! ! ! Please believe that hard work will be rewarded. Even if these rewards are insignificant to others, this is an affirmation for those who work hard.

I have finished reading this book, and now I would like to offer some of my opinions about the author. First of all, the title of the book. The title is "The Thirty-Three Heavens", but the content is not closely related to the title. To be honest, if it were not called "The Thirty-Three Heavens", I would have thought I was reading a fantasy novel about formations Then there is Jane Introduction, if you only read the introduction without looking at the content, I think it is very well written, but if you connect the two, it feels like the author is cheating, that is, the content has nothing to do with the introduction, even if it does, it is not big Finally, let's talk about the content, the writing is good, you can It is said to be a wonderful word but its shortcomings are also obvious, that is, the control of the plot. If the plot cannot be controlled reasonably, it will give people the feeling of keeping a running account. Unfortunately, this book gave me the same feeling. In addition to the plot With good control, foreshadowing should also be a highlight of the novel. A good foreshadowing will make people want to stop, or a good chapter will make people love and hate it. Coupled with the author's pretty good writing style, if updates can be guaranteed, it is not impossible for it to become a small hit. Because novels generally do not publish outlines, I will not comment on the outline Okay, this is my opinion on the hardware aspect Next, I want to talk about the software (publicity) aspect. The ancients said: The aroma of wine is not afraid of the depth of the alley, but in today's fast-paced society, the aroma of wine is afraid of the depth of the alley It doesn't matter if the alley is just a little deeper, the key is The wine is not too fragrant. It can only be said that it is of average appearance, but it lives in a back alley. The result is needless to say So, regarding this book, the author not only needs to work hard on the hardware, but also on the software (publicity) There are not many places about publicity in the starting point. Most of them rely on the guidance of great gods to promote single chapters in great gods' books or casual mentions by great gods, attracting a lot of attention. Some traffic readers Or you can rely on the Qidian red envelope, send a red envelope, and stuff the book into the bookshelf of those readers who grab the red envelope, and then it will be deleted or left in the dust. However, if you send a red envelope that unlocks reading, the situation may be better. If you meet a reader who catches your eye, then it is naturally good, but the reader harvest ratio of this method is too low. Even 10:1 is good Furthermore, it is a relevant point Promote the circle, find people to test the poison, in order to achieve the purpose of attracting traffic As for the official recommendation from the starting point, the author should just go to bed I have published all the relevant suggestions and ideas about this book. As for whether the author will accept it, this should be adjusted based on his own situation and the outline of the novel Okay, that's it