Poker Mask Queen

I am actually the first person in the world A very interesting level setting, I never expected it to be set like this! Hurry, hurry, hurry! Keep updating!

I haven't read much of this genre, and I can't remember the setting at the beginning. The story looks good, but sometimes the progression is a bit stiff. There are also a lot of recommendation votes. There should be a lot of readers. Come on, I look forward to mutual reviews.

First of all, as a student here, it is not easy to do homework every day in online classes. At least 2,000 daily updates can be guaranteed. Thank you for your attention. Don't criticize your writing style, you will slowly correct it. This is a process of cultivation, and no one can soar to the sky. I heard it's easy to sign a contract with a female channel? I don't think so, it's just that it's not that difficult compared to male videos. Don't send me red envelopes now, especially after signing the contract. A few is enough for me, but it's not good to give me too many for recommendations. Finally, thank you to those loyal readers. I always thought that this book would be sold out and no one would read it. This book was originally written as a forward narration, but then I suddenly had a brainstorm and wrote it in reverse order, so if you don't understand anything, you can leave a message in the book review area, and I will answer it one by one! Thank you all for your continued recommendation and support. I look familiar to you!

Female channel, give me your monthly ticket, farewell

The story setting is very novel, but you threw out the story settings all at once in the first chapter, which really made me feel boring, so I didn't look at the card settings in detail. After reading a few chapters, I roughly sorted it out. I have to say that the story setting is still very interesting. However, some of the plots were baffling to me, maybe because the transitions were a little abrupt. But it's already great. After all, the story is very interesting. Come on, author, you can look forward to it in the future!

Here comes the poisonous tongue 😃 In fact, I wanted to give up after reading the beginning, but I forced myself to read three chapters. There are many questions, let me pick two to talk about - 1. It is the biggest taboo for newcomers to talk about history and setting at the beginning. You are not a master. Is your setting supported by a detailed outline of 3 to 5 million? Just like you are preparing a table of dishes for a customer, do you first tell him the recipe of each dish, and then add some melon seeds and peanuts for the customer to eat slowly and wait, or do you serve the cooked roast duck first and eat it directly, and then have the braised pork ribs right after? Suggestion: The beginning of a new story is to highlight the early attraction points and slowly reveal your story settings as the plot develops. 2. It's embarrassing to mix the East and the West. This kind of mash-up will ruin your work. It will either be a cruise like a mystery, or it will be purely oriental. No matter how you look at it, Zhou Aiqing and the King of Hearts are two worlds. Choose the world you are good at. Don't crossbreed a liger or a tigon, they are both sterile! Come on, write more, practice more and make progress👍

Emm I've only read the first two chapters. It's quite interesting but there are a few things that I find strange. 1: There are too many settings in the first chapter. As a new book, most readers will not understand every concept thrown out by the author in the first chapter. I still can't figure out what the points and attributes represent... It can be related to the work, or it can be revealed bit by bit in the plot. 2: Why do we need to add a number and a Japanese word after the year? 3: The era name is a name used by the Chinese feudal dynasty and modern Japan to commemorate the year (it can also be used to express the year), and the Western monarch's title is in the form of name + N generations, which is meaningful. Take your Ruoli XVI as an example, which means the sixteenth monarch named Ruoli in the country. But you didn't explain this in your article, so I don't quite understand. 4: Birthday, official duties, officers and soldiers, a series of words with a more ancient style are inexplicably inconsistent with this fictional world view 4: What does it mean to show some corners of your eyes? 5: "Officers and soldiers, that head" is more spoken, not as a dialogue, but as a description, which is a bit strange 6: Why do three old ladies dare to discuss the rebellion???? 7: I didn't find the sentence "A soldier is a martyrdom for restoration" in Baidu... Did you write it yourself? The same question as the fourth article, and the previous officers and soldiers felt that they were greedy for life and afraid of death, and suddenly they committed suicide by biting their tongues loyally to the Lord? My mother-in-law did not say that she wanted to kill people? That's all for now, thank you for your support, let's work together (ω) Already collected, looking forward to your future updates.

Great book! Looking forward to updates! 👍👍👍

Well, this is my first time writing a long review, and it's also my first time watching a female video. Let's talk about the advantages first. The writing is good and the plot is well understood. But if you throw out the setting at the beginning, it's really not something that anyone will take seriously. And after reading it for a long time, I didn't find any concrete manifestation of your high-end setting. Excluding those extraordinary settings, I believe you when you say that this is an ordinary female-channeled historical novel. Also, the description of the heroine gave me no sense of involvement. I personally think it would be better to add some habitual little actions or descriptions of characteristics. Anyway, come on, author~

First of all, this book has two female protagonists, and the rest are supporting characters. Today we talk about the following five characters. Ling Mo Originally she was the only heroine, and Ruo Li was just the foil. But gradually, Ruo Li had more and more roles, so she was simply assigned as the heroine. Firstly, it eases the embarrassment, and secondly, it shows Ling Mo's difficulty. Ling Mo is a fifteen-year-old girl. On her fifteenth birthday, her spiritual slowing technique failed, and her father was killed by soldiers to protect her. She left her hometown alone and prepared to go to the city to order a seal. Later, she met Li Ying and Ye Yi, and found out that they were witnesses to her birth. At the same time, Ye Yi fell in love with her, and Ling Mo also gave him her first time, even though it was just to suck blood for healing. Ling Mo has a strong character. She can get over the pain of losing her father in time. She is not as sentimental and indecisive as Ruo Li. She is also kind. Ruo Li finally launched a civil war. After Ling Mo won the victory, instead of killing her, Ling Mo wanted to give up the position of queen to compensate, even though she had indirectly killed her father before. Ling Mo's life is legendary. She was originally just a nobody, but she was the reincarnation of the golden phoenix, blessed by the golden and spiritual aces. This was part of the fun part. Through her own efforts, she defended Beicheng step by step, defeated the real rebellion on Guant Island, and won the civil war in Ruoli... And finally achieved her position as queen. She abolished slavery, abolished the poker hierarchy, and became the seventeenth generation of Zhenrenyi. Ruoli She is not cruel, but has experienced too much. After she came to power, she hunted down Ye Yi, Tang Feng, who had loved her for fifteen years, and the unidentified old double king. But after being kidnapped, Tang Feng and Ye Yi's disregard for past grudges made her feel a little better. She is a sentimental careerist who only sees power. But she was surprisingly kind to her own people - Li Ying, whom she had never met, died for her, and she could burst into tears. However, there were many people who liked her, including Tang Feng, Gui Ling Zhe and Lei Ju. However, the endings of these three people were not good - Lei Ju was killed by the Grand Master, Gui Ling Zhe sacrificed his life to make her smile. Tang Feng supported her during the civil war, but died blocking her knife when Ye Yi assassinated her. Ruoli is undoubtedly a tragic woman, pathetic and hateful. Even though she has gone through the illusion of the Rubik's Cube and experienced the cruelty of slavery firsthand, her ambition has not diminished (in layman's terms, it means that she has not changed her stubbornness). She provoked a civil war for power, occupied Zero City and most of the north, and was on the verge of wiping out Ling Mo and Ye Yi's influence in the south. In fact, no one would compete with her for the throne, but she was too sensitive, forcing Ling Mo to compete with her. Her final result was that she lamented that the world was not worth it, witnessed too much death and death, and finally committed suicide. Sad! Sad! Tang Feng Speaking of Tang Feng, there must be only one impression - eat! After kidnapping Ruoli, they had dinner with Ruoli and wolfed them down; Ruoli was poisoned by drinking tea, causing Ruoli to go to Dadeng Island to find the antidote; because of his hatred for Wang Tianshi, Wang Tianshi worked for Ling Mo, which became a major obstacle to the civil war... He is also relatively withdrawn and conceited. This can be seen from the fact that he drove away Wang Tianshi. Also, the reason why he didn't use the Soul Relief Technique to slow down his appearance was because he thought he was already handsome... Also, the reason why he didn't learn the Soul Relief Technique was because there were already five people and he couldn't learn it; but because he didn't like it... He liked Ruo Li, he had liked her fifteen years ago, but he went too far, so much so that he was willing to become Ruo Li's puppet, supporting and assisting him in the civil war, and was accidentally stabbed to death by Ye Yi. Ye Yi Compared to Tang Feng, Ye Yi doesn't attract much attention. He likes this little girl Ling Mo. They met fifteen years ago. Ye Yi avoided Ruo Li's pursuit and came to seek refuge with Li Ying, and happened to meet Ling Mo's birth. Later, he was injured by the Grand Master. Ling Mo cried for a long time and sucked his blood to heal his injuries. During the civil war, Ling Mo was kidnapped by Tang Feng. He pretended to surrender, handed over part of his military power, and was willing to suffer all the humiliation from the blackened Tang Feng just to meet Ling Mo. At the same time, this was also one of his plans. He used this to dispel Tang Feng's concerns so that he could assassinate Ruoli. In the end, he accidentally stabbed Tang Feng to death. He was extremely regretful. Like Ruoli, he understood the pain of the world and voluntarily retired to seclusion without caring about worldly affairs. The Returner He was originally the origin of mainland poker. He was born with blood wings and claws, and his appearance was astonishing. He cannot face too many people, because this will affect his skill and thus the stability of the continent. But this also played a role in the double battle. Wang Tianshi's earthquake gave him the opportunity to go to the battlefield. In this way, "a negative makes a positive" stabilized the continent, the grand master was killed, and the double victory was achieved. Finally, Guite Island invaded. In order to win, he sacrificed himself to slow down the magic weapons, allowing the four kings to use the magic weapons to stabilize the mainland and win the final victory.

Wow, Dada is really great, Dada is so imaginative! Really looking forward to the update! I will be a long-time fan once this book becomes popular. ੭ ᐕ)੭*⁾⁾

Get in touch, don't pile all the settings into the first chapter. The first three chapters, especially the first chapter, are mainly used to let people get to know the protagonist. With so many settings piled up at once, it is easy for readers to lose track of their memory. I see that your settings are very detailed and cumbersome. I suggest you explain them bit by bit as the protagonist goes through the story.

To be honest, if you are a pure reader, you will be a little put off at the beginning, and you won't want to read the long paragraphs at the beginning, but the writing style is good and suitable for careful reading. When you read it, you will have a feeling of slowly seeping from the background. But I don't think I would read the introduction section of suit, light, color, attributes, and points in detail the first time I read it. I probably won't look back until I feel confused about what I need to read later. The point where someone talks is what I want to watch and what I like to watch. Skip the beginning of the first chapter. I think the overall style and plot control are very good. It is a type that can attract people no matter which chapter you click on. I also like the setting. I think as long as I can stick to it, this book will have readers. Come on

To be honest, I think fantasy novels are difficult to write! You have to conceive of so many things in your mind, I admire you!

The setting is great, I have invested in it, and the author will give it my best, this book will be a hit

The author's writing is sophisticated and his writing style is unique. I hope you will continue to work hard.

It looks pretty good, but the word count is too few.

Already collected it, the title of the book seemed very good at first glance.

1. The author's setting is very novel, but the whole setting is too lengthy and difficult for readers to remember. It is recommended that you create a work-related article to elaborate on your setting. 2. The explanation of the background of the whole world is pretty good, but after the heroine left with the double aces, she found the old woman in the forest. I don't know if it was far away, but after the old woman was unconscious, a fifteen-year-old woman took the old woman back to her home. Do you think it is reasonable? 3. The segmentation is not very good, which greatly affects the reading experience. The grasp of details is not very good, lack of character description, and lack of description of the environment.

Judging from the chapter and title, it should be a story about the heroine's comeback. The plot and setting are novel, and it's very smooth to read. I hope it will become popular.

Back and forth😁Thank you, baby

Correction The first point introduction point after point j should be 10-3 points

It's so well written, and the characters are so delicately drawn! So fond of it!

The writing is very good. I have saved it and look forward to visiting again.

It's a bit unpleasant to write fantasy stories on female channels, but as long as you break through the soil, you can grow into a towering tree. Come on, author! Talking about the settings at the beginning will dissuade a group of people, especially the author, you built a new system by yourself, and the writing is a bit complicated. It will definitely be elusive at first glance, especially the attributes are not clear. You will understand after reading the answer to the reader's doubts, but the settings are based on points. The first-level judgment conditions, light color, attribute, and color are the second-level judgment conditions, right? In short, this is a big problem The writing is really good, it is completely the style of a veteran, profound and delicate In addition, the title of the book is very attractive