Pokémon: a New Age

I cast two more recommendation votes. The writing is really good and I hope it can be updated faster! Investment, lucky bags, and recommendation tickets have been provided through one-stop service. Don't let your friends down. Come on! ! !

This book is a good collection, but there are some shortcomings in the plot. There should be a turning point later. After all, it is the first work. I hope the subsequent plots can be more exciting! Come on! ＾0＾~

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Um. It's not easy for a newbie, but as long as you persist, you will definitely achieve results! I think the writing style is more tactful, not an outline-style straightforward narrative. Stick to your own style. Come on, Oli! ! ! ↖(^ω^)↗, When it becomes popular, I will also be a veteran fan, hehehe~

We are signing a contract. God bless you, the editor will bless you, and readers will bless you.

The writing style is good, I quite like it, and I have been reading for 5 years. I think that as long as the author updates quickly, it will be a matter of time for DaDa to occupy the first place on the list. However, I also hope that DaDa can add some funny elements. After all, Pokémon fandom should have that kind of feeling (personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it). In addition, I support DaDa here.

I have never watched Pokémon, I just came here for the game classification. After reading it, I felt pretty good. For a novice writer, the writing was okay and I still had feelings for it. Of course there are shortcomings, such as the plot progressing too quickly, the atmosphere rendering not being strong enough, etc. . . . . However, I still recommend watching it. Come on, author! ! !

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If you find any typos or incorrect sentences, you can send them to this building to be checked by the author from time to time.

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Haha, very creative, come on! =¯ω¯=

These recent chapters have been so good that I have this scene in my dreams every night after reading it. Come on, author, I support you. 🐮

I suggest the author check out Character Master and Elf Master. Take a look at these two books, they may inspire you to write elvish writing obliquely. Also, it's well written, but there are some rough spots. For example, the protagonist's luck, or the battle between elves.

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There are a lot of typos. The author will correct them when he has time.

Is the author new? The writing seems a bit awkward, I suggest you improve on the speaking aspect.

It's like this, because this book is not numbered first and then released, that is to say, if it is in stock, it will be issued as it is, except when it is decided to burst the chapter. Therefore, there are some errors in the book, such as typos, inconsistent logic, and incorrect data. Please correct them and create a green book together. The errors can be written below. I will post it here as an error correction. Thank you, readers!