In the Youth of Chasing the Rainbow

The writing is very good, but there are some small problems with this book. The first is that most of the current online novels are in the third person. Your first person should be less and less in the future. The second issue is the spacing. Most online novels nowadays are read on mobile phones, so it is generally best to divide two to four lines into one interval. Now it is best for you to go to Writer Assistant to rearrange the intervals of the novels you have sent. Reading two to four lines into one interval is the best. In terms of plot, because in sports novels, it is best to write about the love, concentration and passion for the sport. It would be great if you add a little literature and art. Of course, if you can't write something, it's best not to write it. Just like the heroine, few authors can write the heroine well, and it doesn't matter whether there is a heroine in sports novels, so if you can't write the heroine well, you don't have to write it. This can reduce a lot of poisonous points. Finally, I just hope you insist on not being a eunuch. The most important thing in writing online novels is persistence. Come on!