Descendants of the Abyss

The protagonist is a schizophrenic psychopath, and the supporting role is a yandere who is tired of living. The plots of the chapters are confusing. In the first section, we just talked about the protagonist's behavior, but in the second section, he went thousands of miles away to his grandma's house. Forget it, I really don't want to complain, so let's stop here 🤫🤫

I really want to complain, why did he survive when he could destroy the original will at the beginning, and then passed his memories to the original will to make the original will smarter? That's fine. Why did he feel that he had transferred a lot of memories and knew that the original will was giving it to the protagonist? The original will was not destroyed even though the original will was preserved, and then in the end it was discovered that the original will had insidiously tricked the protagonist into getting into the huge mouth of the stomach. When the protagonist had no way to control the situation, the protagonist did not want to wait for it to come out and destroy it immediately, but to destroy it if there was no reasonable explanation. Is the protagonist the fucking Virgin? Extremely poisonous

I saw the back part today and found that I have changed again. I am a little disappointed. The writing is still good. Alas.

How do you persist in writing seven or eight thousand words a day?

Come on, although I haven't read it yet, give me some encouragement. A bunch of eunuchs can't write for 1 million. You can sign the contract if you write a few more times. Just stop being eunuchs. By the way, I don't read any new books priced under 1 million.

The biggest poisonous point I have read so far is why not kill the original consciousness and still keep it, and more importantly, let go of the restrictions on it. You must know that he is the original owner of the body. You are an outsider and do not understand the author's intention. Isn't it funny to say that the body has two consciousnesses?

"Shattered Eternity" tells the story of a creation-level consciousness exploring and traveling the universe.

Very well written Very rigorous

You have a million dollars a day, it would be a pity not to sign the contract

You can consider going to other sites. After all, I haven't signed a contract yet. I've written a million words. I can just find a site where I can sign a contract.

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The writing is good, but the person is too aloof. Can you please communicate with the readers?

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The most unacceptable thing is that Mao breaks down and yells when something happens.

An old man named Nevi plays with a soul, the protagonist, causing him to have a split personality and confused memory, causing him to suffer all kinds of suffering in the world. Then an old man named Red Moon encountered the protagonist's soul and found it very interesting. The protagonist fell into the dream weaved by Red Moon again, and then the old man Red Moon and Nevi competed for the protagonist of the toy.