When the Villainess Started Taking Things Seriously

Keep it up, author! I came from the last book, now I'm here to read the official version! Mwah! ^3^

Please, why do you have to use idiotic supporting characters to highlight the female lead's intelligence?! It's not impressive at all! It's suffocating!

Talking to myself, at least the beginning of the previous book focused on the plot, but the beginning of this book, like the latter part of the previous book, has a messy plot and is full of lines like "Do you understand?" Is this an insult to the reader's intelligence? Okay, I really don't understand this kind of erratic way of expressing myself.

The plot development is a bit chaotic, making it a headache to watch. For comedic films, I suggest you consider the plot structure more and let it unfold gradually, otherwise it will be very confusing to watch.

I suggest the author reduce the amount of internal monologue in this story. It leaves readers feeling somewhat speechless, and phrases like "Yes, that's right! That's exactly it!" Are quite annoying. Also, the excessive use of profanity, such as "*" and "fuck," is very uncomfortable and makes the female lead seem ill-mannered. I hope the author can make some minor revisions.

The writing is immature, rambling, and unpleasant to read.

I finished watching it without even realizing it, and I loved it! I love your writing style! Si Ru is my absolute favorite character in the quick transmigration genre! I've been looking forward to your new novel, and this one is really good too 😊 Keep it up! 😊

There's so much nonsense going on. Her inner monologues far outweigh her spoken words; I'm losing patience. At first, I thought she was a pro, and I figured if she was a pro, she couldn't be too bad. But the higher my expectations, the bigger the disappointment. She rambles on and on without getting to the point. And forget about revenge; she just seems like she's there to be tortured. Ugh, can't you read the comments? Seriously, reading this will drive you crazy!

I've read twenty chapters... It's unbelievable! I can hardly believe this was written by the author. I suspect the author hired a ghostwriter. The writing is childish, the plot is chaotic, and the protagonist's intelligence is questionable.

Congratulations on your work being highly recommended by the editor-in-chief! Investment returns have increased. I'm casting my vote today! Author, keep up the good work! I hope this book continues to update steadily, achieves even greater success, and shines brightly soon! (By the way, I highly recommend the anime Attack on Titan.