Lin's Department Store in the Prehistoric World

There are too many things written about reality, just skip it, you have to distinguish the important from the important.

How should I put it? The biggest problem is that there is no sense of immersion. The protagonist always looks aloof and aloof from the world, and the plot is too bloody. After reading Chapter 10, I suddenly felt so tired from reading~~ Writing a novel is also a technical job

When I read Chapter 10, I thought, what a mess, the various plots are too abrupt, what role does the person named Wu play in this book?

To be honest, I'm getting more and more unwatchable, the plot is very confusing, the plot has no sense of immersion, and many chapters are completely meaningless.

The name is attractive, but after reading it, I feel it is not very attractive.

This book is not prioritized, it doesn't capture the important things to write about, and it's a bit off topic! I suggest the author read it from the beginning. As a reader, the problem is too obvious.

Get the author's first blood 😍

Isn't it a prehistoric world? It starts with the Tang Dynasty

Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on