Naruto Travel System
火影之万界旅游系统
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 95k Words
- Genre
- Sci-Fi
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Time Travel
- Updated
- 6y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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47Chapters
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Reform novel
After some suggestions from book friends, I am going to start improving the novel in Chapter 34. Because this is my first time writing a novel, there are many shortcomings, so I am now working hard to write the novel well. If there are any shortcomings, book friends can give me suggestions in the comment area.
A good novel is like a cup of tea, which makes people enjoy reading it. This one is like turning on the faucet to the maximum. The idea is good, but it looks hard to read. For example: He saw the other person and beat him to death when he was angry. It's over, it's too straightforward and doesn't describe much detail.
Because a chapter I just published was banned, I urgently revised it, copied it and posted it (I want to cry (T_T))
Reply [Itachi Uchiha]
Sorry, I have modified it, thank you for reminding me