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As a newcomer, the author also consulted some book friends and big guys, and they all suggested starting a new book and changing the vest. But I think that if you can finish a book, it will actually be the same in any account. Well, that's all.

Thank you for the invitation It was purely by chance that I passed by and read this book. Although it is still in the initial stage, there is indeed a lot to say. I would like to share my humble opinion on reading the book. Please point out if there is anything wrong Infinite flow theme. The quality of books in the same theme can be said to be uneven. This book is obviously of a certain high level. If you like this theme, you can directly add it to your collection. The following focuses on the perception of the text. In the interaction between the protagonist and the heroine at the beginning, if the dialogue is not for the sake of word count but is intentionally designed, then the role of the dialogue: on the one hand, the natural dialogue makes the description of the characters and the background softer, on the other hand, it is used to transition and lead out the plot. The dialogue atmosphere and the introduction of the plot are all good, but the long dialogue is not closely related to the formal plot, which appears here and later in the text. Taking such an example, it is recommended that the dialogue in the later text be slightly simplified and the connection with the plot is strengthened. After the main text unfolds and enters the hospital, I think the progression of the plot is well done and carefully designed, but it is a bit abrupt in some places. For example, there is a plot where two relatively unpopular worlds are entered at the beginning. There is slightly less information fed back to the reader. In fact, the story can be written more coherently to enhance the sense of immersion. In the last paragraph of Chapter 2, I don't know if I missed it. There was basically no foreshadowing or transition. Suddenly it was said that a chase was going to start. This is somewhat inappropriate in terms of writing logic. There are also some problems in this regard at the beginning and later of Chapter 3. Maybe from the author's point of view, he knows exactly what will happen next and why, and he feels that the readers also know, so he just unfolds his wings. In my opinion, clear logic is very important. It may be that the author feels that this foreshadowing is unnecessary and deliberately goes straight to the topic. In fact, there is no problem. Internet articles pay attention to fragmented reading, and it is good for the author to grasp this. If the logic of the writing is not confusing, it will be fine. Sometimes, what should be a very exciting part feels very relaxed and leisurely. Infinite Flow is limited by the subject matter, and the plot will be presented in a way similar to a unit drama. I don't know if I am right. From my own understanding, I think the rendering of the atmosphere is very important. The narrative point of view is recommended to follow the perspective of the protagonist more closely, which is currently a bit scattered. Describe the things he sees, try to be as realistic as possible, and depict an environment that can be felt by the reader better. The book is worth reading because the story is strong and makes people want to read it. From my personal point of view, I make some suggestions in the hope that it will be perfect, not that it is not good-looking in itself. I hope the author can look at it dialectically. When it becomes popular, I will make up my mind about the merits and demerits. The performance of the book was affected a lot, and it might become popular in the future. As a passerby, I hope it can be completed. I hope the author can become one of the monuments of Infinite Flow. Come on.

Thanks for Ji Da's recommendation~~~~~~~ There is also the recommendation of the fisherman of "Connor's Hogwarts"~~~ There is also a recommendation from Mr. Guan Guan in "Xiaoyao Little Governor"~~~~ Lead the guys to compete!

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I feel like this is another book worth keeping.

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