Kamen Rider in DC

I first watched it after seeing that the theme was DC and Kamen Rider. The writing and plot were really good at the beginning. The results fell apart immediately. The Wonder Girl at the beginning was supposed to be the best moment for the knight's debut, but you gave me a weird trumpet and said "reasonable". This is not a question of whether it is reasonable or not. For example, if you look at Ultraman, the protagonist takes out the transformer and turns into Chiton. Yes, Chiton is indeed stronger than the ordinary Ultraman, and there is no time limit. Isn't this not "reasonable"? I believe that 99.99% Of people saw this kind of plot and quit without saying anything, and still paid a bad review. This is not a question of whether it is reasonable or not. Wonder Woman is defeated. What everyone wants to see is the hero's appearance. But a weirdo comes and everyone feels poisonous. I won't say much more about the female trumpet. Anyway, it's just one word, Poison! The most poisonous part in the whole book, bar none. At first, the author said he wouldn't write it anymore, but now he's involved again. Who are you fooling? Secondly, the author's own writing style is very limited. During the fighting scene, the whole process is carried out by paddling. In addition, the protagonist himself is also paddling, which makes the writing of the fighting scene feel like playing. Then there is literary opera, which is even more outrageous. The protagonist makes a belt? Passed by in one stroke. Batman is also written like a bastard. A person who can study the weaknesses of all heroes is actually suppressed by the protagonist from a verbal level. This is outrageous. What's more, it's an emotional scene. The protagonist and Barbara have only known each other for a few days? Going to first base without even saying a few words? This star chasing girl is going to cry to death in the toilet. There is also a problem with the development of this story. The knight story starts with one or two sets of armor with medium to low strength. It is used for a period of time, and then the protagonist becomes determined, determined to save others, and determined to protect the world. Only then will I get a few more sets of armor. As a result, this novel, Delta, Kato, was excited. There are so many armors written at the beginning, so urgent, why don't you go to the sky? Just after the start, the system has no sense of existence, and it starts to make its own belts. Such a picture makes people want to curse. In short, if the author does not make changes, the book will not be good at drama, literary drama, emotional drama, and story development. It will be over sooner or later. 😅😅😅

The author's cultural accumulation is not up to par! The wording and sentences are inappropriate! Too many vernacular words make it look too silky! The crooked marks are obvious! The requirements are not high, you can watch it!

Another masked monster novel, farewell

A very good book, especially to my liking. Good luck to the author! (I hope not tj)

To be honest... It feels like the female trumpet... Is quite poisonous... Can't you get a voice changer or something? By the way, the knight's armor comes with a voice changer, right? I've read a lot of knight fanfics, and you're the first to write like this.

Can't the main character's name be unified? Sometimes he's called Jim Carrey, sometimes he's called Carrey.

Oh, by the way, you'd better not add Kamen Rider villains to the DC universe, because that would be extremely confusing.

I'm going to sink you, the eldest father-in-law, and the sensitive ghost Shirakura into Tokyo Bay!

I feel that the protagonist lacks a sense of tension in the DC universe, and I feel that Batman's character is a bit broken.

There has been no update for several days. Is it a eunuch?

There is no more new book, "DC's Green Lantern of Thunder" has been taken off the shelves.

The story is incomprehensible and there is no sense of substitution. The protagonist suddenly turns into a villain! What the hell! And he is afraid of heroes every day! He is careless in battle! Rubbish! Not pretty!

Can you not mention killing when posting tasks? Most of DC's heroes have a bottom line and don't kill people.

Hey, you are wrong, knowledge is power. Look at the invincible players created by shrimp dumplings, and the ultimate god. In a universe like Marvel DC, black technology is everywhere. As the saying goes, knowledge is power. Knowledge is essential. Among the Kamen Riders, especially the card repair organization. They have a lot of black technology. Don't you have the knight system and the Pan system technology tree?

In the early stage, it is recommended to write quickly.

Why don't I feel like I'm in the DC universe? It just lacks that feeling.

Your name is a bit of a rip-off of "DC Knights"! I hope the writing is no worse than that.

When will Den-O come out? It can't be done without the Demon God. I think the Demon God is coming to DC. It would be more interesting to fight against DC characters.

Um, let's just transform the protagonist into a girl! I don't care!

Damn it, at first glance I thought it was the DC Kamen Rider. I didn't react for a long time. It turned out that I had seen it wrong.

Can I add Amazons Cell Virus? It's omega cells

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Can the protagonist use Amazon cells to kill Luthor's biochemical monster?

Are invincible players really invincible when they fight Superman?