I Exorcise Demons in Tokyo

How many people are reading the book, or are you all just fattening up? 😭😭😭😭, there are no comments, no chapters, no votes, I don't know how it is written.

Opinion Building (Long Tao Building) If you have any ideas, just tell me here and let us brainstorm.

To be honest, the writing is quite good, but I think it was too rushed to put on the shelves. Since I have work, I can actually choose not to put the first book on the shelves. After all, I don't have many stable fans yet. Of course, this is just my personal suggestion... It may be that the purpose of writing the book is different...

It's a bit scattered, not very coherent, and the style, emmm, has no meaning. The style feels a bit like "Rebirth in Tokyo, Japan with Naruto" (self-feeling), and the reviews of this book are so deserted. The results are not good, and I always feel that I have to cut myself off forever. I hope it is not another novel that has been raised to death

It's very similar to Naruto's routine, Danzo, the pot king, must die

The flower of the night job, Nanase Ren, always feels that this name is very familiar.

In the recent famine, I hope this is a good work 🙂

The rhythm of the plot is a bit uneven, and some plots suddenly slow down as soon as they reach the climax. Also, the first boss in the early stage was a mixture of complaints and passion, and the change was a bit too abrupt. This is purely a personal opinion, I hope the author can take a look. The settings are pretty good, and I borrowed some of the character settings from Natsume's Book of Friends.

Such a beautiful book, why doesn't anyone read it?

Does the author have an outline? There is something wrong with what you wrote. The strength of the first protagonist is uncertain, and it takes about seconds to defeat mobs and bosses. There are too many branches in the second branch. The early system and Natsume's Book of Friends plot were clearly about recovering the big monster, but they already had the monster sword, so why was it discontinued? The organization is established later, but not established again after a few chapters. Then he gets into the preppy style, and then runs away after a few chapters. The spy also discovered the Hundred Ghost Night Parade plan and the breeding farm plan. If you want to write one thing after another, it will be very messy, okay? In Chapter 80, you can see for yourself how many characters appear. There are so many names that you can't remember them. If you open too many branches and don't continue writing, you are digging a hole.