Tang Ming and Qing Dynasties

I personally think this book is quite good. The concept, plot, details, and description are all good, but I hope the author can add more power struggles in the palace (it is a historical novel after all), so that readers can read it more interestingly The above are all personal opinions. If there are any differences with other book friends, please bear with me.

After reading a few pages, the segmentation is too bad. Most people read online novels on their mobile phones. A paragraph is too long and takes up half a page or even a whole page at a time, which can easily make people lose the interest of reading. The author should divide the paragraphs first. There is no need to forcefully divide a paragraph into one paragraph for online articles. The dialogue can also be divided into lines, one line and one sentence. Don't crowd all the words in a pile like this. It really discourages you to give up.

Hello, I am Xiaoji Baozai, and I am also an author who writes about history. Maybe we can communicate with each other.

The author's conception is quite good, and his writing style is also good, but the reading experience is really not very good. I hope the author can feel it in time. I wish the author a great success in completing this book!

I took a rough look at your article emmm... Let's not talk about the writing style for now. I am not qualified to comment on others. It is mainly about paragraphing. I would like to make a few simple comments. First of all, long paragraphs of text will not make people have the patience to read them, especially historical texts. Long paragraphs of text will make people feel boring. Secondly, your brackets are really abrupt, and one suddenly pops up when you look at it, which makes the reading experience very poor. Furthermore, the description is not appropriate, some places are too empty, and some places are too flashy and cumbersome In short, it is quite boring to watch. Personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it. If you want to improve the situation, I suggest you mainly change the paragraphs.

Come on! I would like to make a suggestion. You can modify the introduction to make it more powerful, and the text can be divided into more paragraphs to make it easier to read.

The description is quite good~ I can see that I have writing skills Come on

Xiao Ke's honest review is okay. I hope the author will work harder on his creation and support😁

Come on, encourage each other, and recommend a book along the way

Hello, dear readers, I am the author Ouyang Xiao. This book needs to be improved due to its writing style, segmented content, and overall view. Therefore, the book will not be updated for an indefinite period. Thank you for your support. Welcome everyone to read "Yi Wan"