My Dungeon Copy

I remember Mr. Yi Zhongtian said that serious books need to be read while sitting up, while novels need to be read while lying down. This book is undoubtedly a work that can make people feel at ease. The book does not use too much description of the characters, but everyone has a distinct personality and different personalities, so that when reading about them, a perfect image that fits the personality can be quickly sketched in the mind. As the saying goes, there are a thousand Hamlets in a thousand readers. It is this uncertain multi-facetedness that gives this book an active soul. The protagonist is not like those mindless white novels, where plug-ins are used to pretend. At least in the current chapter, I can see the growth of the protagonist, the foreshadowing of every plot, and the design of every copy. I can see the author's good intentions, just like pearls, connected by the thread called daily life, forming a necklace full of surprises. If a book is compared to a dish, the protagonist is undoubtedly the main ingredient, and each supporting role is the delicious spice. You can imagine that instant noodles without seasoning packets, no matter how high-end, would you be willing to eat it? What I really like about the whole book is his creation of supporting characters. There is no stereotyped rigidity or facial expression monotony. Every character is like a living person. You can always see the shadow of yourself or a friend in one of the characters. This invisible sense of intimacy creates the motivation for people to follow the book. Although there are still some flaws in the processing and narration of the story, at least I saw another author who is really willing to tell stories. I like a work not because of its gimmicks or its rhetoric, but because when I was struggling with life with my head down, it tapped me on the shoulder and asked me to look up at the stars. As the saying goes, a thousand pieces of gold are easy to come by, but a good book is hard to find. Maybe the next book you open will be the star that can light up the road ahead.

Just a stranger, I have something to say, and the writing is very nice. It would be better if I could update it three times a day (

The subject matter is good, but the plot is too bland. In summary, it can be summarized as downloading dungeons to upgrade. The male protagonist is too naive and I feel that the male protagonist just keeps playing dungeons without a clear goal, but overall it is still watchable.

I can also watch it, but I can't take a closer look. There is something wrong with the settings. I feel that there are some contradictions and it's a bit uncomfortable to watch

This level of pressure... I have never seen a novel that is so heavily pressured I can't get more than 6 or 7 copies of the plug-in. I have killed more than a dozen monsters with a higher level than myself, and it has been more than 20 chapters. You're still at the level of the first chapter... I admire you for writing a good monster-fighting and upgrading article into a daily romance article No wonder the plot is mediocre. If you don't write the plot of a brainless villain, you can write dozens of chapters for each level, and you can pass several dungeons for each level. It's really strange that this book can be interesting if you write a plot about a mentally retarded villain and then persuade him to quit. And this level is really just an ordinary level, not a special level that requires a solid foundation and enhanced background I predict that after 1,000 chapters of this book, the protagonist will have the most gold, maybe silver. 99% Of the time it will not be possible to complete the book until the final stage, unless the finale takes a huge step forward and completes the book directly! Put it on the bookshelf. I will come back a year later to see if my prediction is correct.

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This subject is interesting. Please increase your efforts in updating it.

I have read more than 20 chapters, and I haven't read other DNF fics, so I feel it is quite fresh, and I still have the motivation to read on. However, I really feel that there are many problems. The following is just my personal opinion: First of all, it is the upgrade problem. It clearly said that it is about to be upgraded, and then I played two or three copies, but it still has not been upgraded. However, you can fight level 2 monsters at level 1, which means there is not much difference between level 1 and level 2, but it took a long time to upgrade from level 1 to level 2! Then there was the item sales place, and he actually sold items that he could use at level 2... This is the real world. The more damage you can defend against, the more chances you have to survive. Moreover, it only sold for 100, and all the fruits were sold for 1,000. Then you can give away the fruits to others, so why not keep the equipment and sell it cheaply or give it to good friends! (Well, I just checked the circle, and some people said that they are eunuchs... No way? Then why am I typing this?) Finally, the protagonist's IQ is owed. I won't discuss it when entering the dungeon for the first time, and I don't know to pay attention to the time when entering the dungeon after that. ? At the end, give the author some cheers! Ollie here! ! !

It's well written, but too little.

I feel that when the protagonist is weak, he should not expose his special features. The protagonist is too lazy.

I haven't even finished the novel yet, but I started writing about the heroine in the third chapter. Haha, it's really poisonous.

The plot is too bland and a bit boring. If it weren't for dnf, I might not be able to watch it. Looking at the introduction, it seems that it is mainly about the skills of monsters. Will there be skills for various professions?

Why don't you write about profession when writing DNF? What's the point of miscellaneous junk skills? Isn't he handsome with the back-jumping sword aura? Isn't he handsome with cat-cat boxing? Isn't he handsome with hand-rolled nuclear bombs and rasengan?

The setting of Goldfinger is still very good, but the plot is well written. Emphasis is placed on equipment and items. If you write daily, open a shop to sell equipment, and then do DNF dungeons, would it be great? I feel like the protagonist doesn't even need to brush up on the spiritual realm.

It's a no-brainer, the main plot is completely daily, and the copy is completely excessive.

I'll just give it a try. If the novel didn't have a DNF that made me nostalgic, I might not have read it. My evaluation of the novel is that it's not particularly exciting, nor does it have any toxic plot, so it's just mediocre.

The fruit aspect is a bit confusing. I thought a strawberry, no matter how rare it is, is just something to eat. I didn't expect it to be ten times more valuable than a magic ring.

The author's writing is so picky! It's often poisonous! Goodbye!

A question comes to mind. There are no plants in the main world, so how do we get oxygen 😰.

By the author is very good, I hope to stick to it to the end like Guangre Niang.

There is a bug. If the protagonist casually asks for credit points from the government, the government will also vacate the mall. Credit points are just numbers to the government.

Skip all the emotional dramas and just read this book

I didn't even understand the first chapter. For people with professional soul training, even killing a sheep can put their lives in danger 🤔

The King's Remains

Lord Minotaur

Are you still updating it?

Can the author update it stably?

I've been writing it for almost a year, but I haven't reached 1 million words yet and I'm afraid to read it!

Damn it, if it's not behind the scenes, why add a behind-the-scenes label?

The introduction is uninspiring 😰