The Inheritors of Ultra's Will

Not at all, identification completed.

Is this book a bit problematic?

I just don't understand. The author just forced the setting. The male protagonist has a bright heart. He has never seen the suffering of the people at the bottom. He is more idealistic than idealistic. He has lived in darkness since he was a child. It is impossible for him to be stupid and sweet. Let alone a hero, people who can't even eat enough will only focus on whether they can eat enough for the next meal. Is this the author's debut novel? Why does it feel like the author is trying to imitate someone's style, and then imitates someone else's style? I won't talk trash here, I've trash-talked too much.

No one? 😰

The book is good, but the book review section is so deserted

Well, I feel that no one will read this book. It is entirely the author's fault and does not consider the readers' feelings. After watching a small part, I just felt baffled and just disappointed.

The author must be a girl. In fact, I think you should read the novel you wrote. In fact, I didn't see the light in your writing. I saw the darkness of the world you wrote. If there is obviously something wrong with the description and you can't write about the light in a desperate situation, then just don't write it. You see, the four characters you wrote now are completely different and you deliberately changed the plot outline to change the black one into a white one. This is not reasonable at all. You might as well just write one into black and the other into white, and then fall in love and kill each other.

I think there's also a problem with the title of your work. What's the story? The protagonist doesn't even have anyone to take the lead in teaching him. His childhood was all dark. When the outline started to work, I didn't see anyone dedicating himself to the fuse to bring about changes in the protagonist's thoughts and the tool person who continued to fly moths into the flame. Can this change the hero's thoughts? As for the heroine in your work, she is said to be very naive and arrogant, and no one has ever taught her that she just has her own way. I think in the beginning, the two protagonists were so poorly portrayed. In your later period, the male is slightly more arrogant than the female. What changes do you want to make? A thousand chapters? Don't think about the outline. I've been disappointed when I see outlines used in writing novels. Now it's not like a few years ago when unreasonable and brainless articles were read by people. In fact, even in the past, your style was still popular. Nowadays, people are looking at logic, so you, a mindless person who wants to plunder someone's master, will undoubtedly end up on the street! So I think you can take a look at what those people who write about fire write. People like you must have read too many dragons and have Jiangnan's writing style.