My Apprentice Is Too Fierce

[Maybe it was because there was a picture, but it didn't pass the review. Please repost it. This is the post I participated in the event, and the one just now does not count. Come on, author. When I first saw this title, I felt it was fate. I hope it will get better and better, sincerely! Writing a book is not easy, and persisting is even more difficult. As a bookie, I sincerely hope that you will get better and better, and that you have so many true book friends who can support you like this. It is really good and a great book friend! Come on, come on, come on! Looking forward to your return after you are done!

Writing a book has always been a difficult thing. Why should I write a book? Maybe it is for the dream in my heart, but sometimes dreams and reality are not consistent. We can only talk about our dreams after eating and drinking in reality. There are many such people, many people have given up, and many people are still persisting. In short, as long as we have a dream, it is great. We can lower our heads to pick up six pennies, but we must look up at the moon in the sky. Always on the road, there will be no regrets

This period should be a period for large-scale construction, so it must be busy, tiring, and hard. We must endure this, work hard, and encourage you together! Regarding the book, I don't know the internal situation. Can we update it every three days? ? Because Duan Geng is really a slap in the face, I will try to write something if I can. There are still some regulations. First of all, you must work hard. That's the big head. If books don't allow you to eat and drink, you can ignore it first. Secondly, if you still want to write while ensuring the first item, then you have to write, as long as you can, and you can also write in small pieces. Finally, a word of blessing, as mentioned in the previous article, this time I will write some words of criticism. Since you have written a book, you must have a beginning and an end, just like doing things, you cannot give up halfway. The above are all my nonsense and jokes, don't take it seriously, just take a look. Come on 😎

No night shift, which project is it? ? ? What department is it? ? ? Thank you for your hard work, come on Then you must write without stopping. You can't stop writing. This is a taboo in writing a book. For department members, work hard, work hard, endure hardships in order to survive For cadres, work hard, think about what the leader wants, and do what the leader wants to do, don't take it too seriously For immediate superiors, if you haven't done it that far, I don't know. You should employ people in a wise way, and know people with care. Finally, I wish you success and good luck in writing books! ! !

Only you can be fully responsible for yourself, don't let yourself down. Don't be anxious, don't be negative, don't lose confidence and patience, the bad days are over and the rest are good days. Those who work hard deserve better, and life does not disappoint those who work hard. Everything will be happy in the end. If you feel painful, it's not the end yet. Everyone is actually having a hard time, and looking glamorous is actually not glamorous. Finally, I hope you and I can work from 9 to 5 and be able to wield swords across the world! I feel like I have nothing to say, so I can only drink some chicken soup 😃 Come on, author＾0＾~😁

Inspiration collection building, whether it is the abilities in Xian Xia, character plots, or even some small details. The author's inspiration is limited, but the reader's inspiration is unlimited! Looking for ideas for this book!

The author has had a headache today and will resume updating tomorrow. Diary of March 13th, life is not easy, please bear with me.

The dive took too long, I just found out about the new book.

Hello, I am a high school student who loves novels. This is the first time I read your book. There was a shortage of books before. A book friend recommended your work to me, so I came here with the mentality of testing the poison... As a result, I successfully fell into the trap. The subject matter of your work is very novel and I am deeply attracted by the plot. I know that every writer has a hard time writing a book and needs to spend a lot of time conceiving the plot. I also understand that your real work is very busy and sometimes normal updates cannot be guaranteed. However, these are small things and I have nothing more to ask for. I really like this work and I just hope you can stick to it. Come on, the future is promising. Meeting each other is fate. I look forward to becoming your fan in the future, continuing to support you, and persist in following this path of being a writer.

Is this a boys' or girls' book?

Don't stop updating. I won't recommend it anymore. If your book gets a good recommendation, it will definitely become popular. Are you afraid that there won't be anything suitable by then? This is a suggestion from a street guy...

Whether it's "Piao Miao Ren Jian Lu", or "Tai Hong", or "Great Heaven's Work", or "My Disciple is Too Vigorous", or even "Kaiyuan Dao Road" and other works, they all show your yearning and longing for this industry. Trying again and again brings success. But it is hit hard again and again. Maybe this is reality, this is life. The waiting process is relatively long, and waiting for the maturity of the fruit is even more elusive. Maybe it is survival, maybe it is a last-ditch fight. The pace of progress will not stop, and the expected vision is in the distance! Looking forward to your return, looking forward to you who are full of original intentions and unchanging confidence, Guanyu!

First of all, looking at the entire book, there are currently three time travellers, the male protagonist, the female protagonist and Liu Siyu, who is said to be the villain. Then I think there should be explanations when they appear. I don't know if more time travelers will appear. If so, I will tell you below. The male protagonist and the villain travel through time at the same time, so their relationship, and the hostile hometown people, there are too few chapters at the moment, so I can't tell anything about it, so I'll just express my thoughts, just like the title. I think the two of them alone can follow the two current popular schools, either with me or without him, or with a strong combination. The details will be analyzed later. Secondly, develop the plot according to the above. These 30 chapters have explained some background explanations, so I don't care about the outline. The single plot can start to write about the love and hatred between Liu Siyu and the protagonist, and based on these, other background content and character relationships can be slowly developed, such as normal downhill experience, slowly discovering the protagonist's previous story, and then adding new content and Liu Siyu's story, interspersed with some small bosses and the like, and slowly guiding the plot. You can fight with two people first, and then fight the bigger boss together in the end, or just kill him. He will tell you that there is a bigger boss, so you can guide him and expand the overall situation. You can even slowly unravel the mystery of time travel, why you came here, what place it is here, the protagonist's big golden finger, etc. Finally, the full text can be easily entertaining, but don't go too far. When reading a book, you should first look at the plot, and secondly look at the characters. The two can go hand in hand, so it can be relaxed but not too out of context. There is no benefit in having too strong a sense of jumping in. A normal narrative is enough, and you don't have to jump out too much. Let's talk about the characters next. The powerful forces join forces to be afraid of the Holy Mother, so I think we can let him die in the hands of the protagonist and lead out the big boss at the back. Why, there is no room for two tigers in one mountain, unless that's the case, so Liu Siyu's path has already been decided. Based on this, it can be concluded that it is not recommended to add more time travelers, because they can only die like Liu Siyu, and there cannot be too many women, and the harem will not be able to survive. Unless the reason for their time travel is added, and they find out who and what has been dead for a long time, in fact, they are time travel, and content such as unintentional or the last life that accidentally sucked them in can be added. In summary, I personally don't recommend multiple time-travelers, but it depends on the author's needs. The content of the story should not be too out of the ordinary. The content can be about experience, acupuncture, etc., And then intersperse the content. Kill Liu Siyu to lead to other bosses, and then lead to time-traveling fans. Slowly proceed like this. The above are my personal thoughts and are for reference only. I will probably write three or four articles about other characters and the final concept of the entire book. Another blessing for the fire. Come on author! ! !

There are activities starting during the author break period. Everyone is welcome to participate on April 7th. Yesterday, the review failed. 😅

The epidemic is not completely over yet, work and production are resuming everywhere, and everyone knows the hard work on the construction site. But! Dear author, I still hope you can keep updating, it doesn't need to be too much, just update every week, so that our support can see hope and stay motivated! Finally, I hope the author will pay great attention to safety, stay healthy, and work hard to update.

The subject matter of the book is okay, but it is too self-indulgent and fails to grasp the readers. I suggest you read more and read other good books.

Although this book has not been updated for a long time, the author still provides explanations every seven days, and his attitude is still acceptable. Among them, the changes made by the author to cater to the market can be seen in this book. Is it good or bad to stick to it? At the current update speed, my suggestion is 2000 chapters, two chapters a day is the best. I hope it can meet this requirement, otherwise it will not be enough. At least the number of chapters should look good, which will be better.

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​ ​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​ Out of a good impression of Chu Jing, but after this situation, her senses plummeted, the book not only has two protagonists, but also has multiple time travellers, so the writing may lose focus on the description, and a woman is still a modern person, at least the lack of respect for teachers and ethics, this is not good, even if it is changed later, it is not easy to recover if the senses are broken!        ，，，，，，，，，，，，！ If you write it for the sake of content and plot, you can add more eye-catching things, such as being more refreshing and letting people see some features worth reading. It's not that the writing is bad, but that it lacks something that attracts others! Come on! 🌹🌹

I have always been paying attention to this book. The subject matter is in line with the requirements of the time. As for the highlights, it is too casual and makes you feel like you are a friend. I suggest you stop writing and start a new book when you have time in the future. The subject matter and story of this book are good, but the highlights are not good. This is true for newcomers. It is acceptable and cherished.

I have personal experience of not being able to keep up with the latest news every day. In the past, I often added updates to book friends, maybe because someone gave me a lot of recommendation votes, or someone rewarded me with some coins. I even added updates to a reader who was serious about catching bugs for me. The most egregious thing is that sometimes I would add updates for no reason when I saw that I had a manuscript in my hand. The result is that now that I have resumed work, I am extremely busy every day. I have not saved any manuscripts and am reviewing code every day. Sometimes, I really regret my original impulse. As for the interruption of updates, it really happened before it was put on the shelves, but I remember it was probably twice. After that, it was put on the shelves, and I couldn't bear to part with it. Although it was hard to do anything with a one-month guarantee, I still stayed up until midnight every day. In the words of my wife, if you smoke a few packs of cigarettes less, you will have everything.

As the operations officer, I can say that I know the author's situation relatively well. This event is also to activate the next book. It may not be able to change the fact that the popularity of this book is too low, but I still haven't given up. At Qidian, many people come here to write books to make money, but only a few write books for love. Authors can only write books as a part-time job and as a hobby. Only when the main business is completed can I have time to take care of writing books. Everyone who writes a book can be called an author, but to become a writer you have to become a full-time writer. The prerequisite for this step is that you can earn money to support yourself by writing books. According to my statistics, the starting point is no more than 10,000. Come on! Let's see how far the author of this book can reach in the future. The author's second year of writing the book

I briefly read this book. The subject matter is good, but writing two protagonists is a mistake in itself. Maybe the author has no hope in the first place! Writing a book pays attention to the market, but unfortunately the author has not grasped it. It is recommended to imitate Xiaobai Shu and write it, and you will have different gains.