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The text of the work is very smooth. Although the elements of books, old people, and adventures are old-fashioned, it is still very interesting to watch. I have not seen how to write delicate characters and a satisfying plot in the future. I have not seen it yet. I look forward to it.

Very well written. But I feel that it would be better to change it later. I feel that it is not good to keep using the old routine to install the full text. Come on! ! Already collected! When you have time, take a look at my article "My System Might Be a Fake System". Thank you very much.

I am the panda on Douyin, come on 😁

Read the first three chapters. The pace is good and the reading is smooth. Today's recommendation votes have been used up. I must vote tomorrow.

Come on, author, I'm looking forward to your novels

I wish I had this writing style. 😭

Investment and follow-up investment, I am optimistic about you, come on!

Sorry, I think it's early stage! It made me very embarrassed to watch it. Maybe I have seen too many fantasy routines and it didn't give me the feeling of attracting me ~ I think other things are okay, the writing and description are okay.

I was so careless in just one brushstroke, and missed a lot... Actually, there was a lot of foreshadowing, and it was written very carefully.

More slowly, I just want to send the blade to Zuocai. . . Watermelon knife...

The identity setting of the male protagonist is very unique. I support it. Come on, the author.

The book is very creative, keep it up!

Come on 😁😁

Damn it, it has been received, please return to visit "The Pearl of the Palm"

Come on 😊

Closed🌹🌹🤝

Have read five chapters. The first chapter is very attractive, the logic is very clear, and the reader is positioned accurately! However, the dialogue between the male protagonist and the old man later is always a bit strange. It can highlight the male protagonist's extraordinary talent, but it always feels a bit abrupt. It's just my little feeling, it may not be right, please come on!