Immortal Sword and Immortal Path

Come on, come on, I've seen it, the plot is pretty good, the author's writing style is very good, and his writing skills are not bad either. I would like to give you a suggestion. The paragraphing of the article is very important. I hope the author will pay more attention to it and divide it into more paragraphs. The visual effect will look better. Let's work together! 💪

Come on, come on, I look after you very much

Um? A new book? Take a look take a look

**Book! There is writing but no one reads it! There is a plot but no one is watching! There is logic but no one sees it! Do you think this is good-looking? It's so well written but no one reads it, huh.