Starting from the Wandering Taoist Priest

Can the protagonist's IQ be made online? Oh, and his master, the protagonist was that old before he traveled to this world. Plus, his IQ is at least very high now, right? Moreover, his master knew that he had been frail and sick since he was a child, so he didn't stay in one place for treatment before leaving. His master didn't care about the protagonist's life or death at all. His master also said that in You Fang, he became an immortal even if he lost his life. Pig's feet have no cheats and their IQs are relatively low. I'm drunk that he can still survive until now.

This is my first comment. I really can't stand the male protagonist. It's better not to write about the male protagonist's time travel. Modern people have worn it and he's still so stupid. It's really

There is a huge gap between the writing and the story! It feels like the boss is writing a children's book, but there are some metaphors mixed in! Children cannot read it, and adults find it childish. . . I guess it was written for fun...

The protagonist has such a venomous mouth and always makes excuses for anything he says. Maybe the author wants to show the child's cleverness, but it feels like he is just a naughty child who will applaud even if he is beaten to death.

After reading Chapter 22, I was really disgusted by the protagonist's IQ. After reading the novel for sixty-seven years, I wanted to see the protagonist be played to death for the first time. This kind of sb being played to death is not unfair at all. I can only say that you deserve it, time traveler? This kind of IQ may not even be comparable to that of the country folk in the feudal era.

The protagonist is too stupid, and the protagonist's master is also stupid. He is being played around with, and he really can't stand it.

Just a little suggestion😄Don't blame me if you don't get it right If you can't write about politics well, why don't we just write about it? Why don't we just brush it off in one stroke? It not only makes the characters unfathomable, but also prevents the author's writing skills from requiring various explanations, making the entire character in the book very retarded, like a child playing house. To be honest, I skipped through the chapters of "Havoc in Heaven". Also, are you really a disciple of Tao Ancestor? Where is the magic weapon? I finally managed to assemble two magic weapons in my daughter's kingdom, but I never used them. Why do I keep them? What about giving birth? Also, I was originally looking forward to the bronze sword, but it turned out to be called the Heavenly Emperor Sword. Is this the age of not yet passing the second grade of middle school? And in front of the Jade Emperor, do you think it's appropriate to hold the former emperor's sword? As for the dignified Emperor of Heaven, would he use a man-eating demonic sword as his imperial sword? I'm afraid this is not the ancient Heavenly Court, but the Demonic Court. Even if it is called Yuantu, it is more in line with the previous setting than the Heavenly Emperor Sword I didn't hold it back for a while, sorry!

The main plot is to cause trouble and then be chased by various monsters, which is a stupid plot.

After reading Chapter 15, pig's feet are so rubbish. As a time traveler, the pig's feet do not reflect that the pig's feet are a time traveler. I might as well just write about local pig's feet.

Why is it written so depressingly? Just a quick run? If he doesn't do anything but stirs up trouble everywhere and runs away as soon as he's done, why would he be called a wandering Taoist priest? How much better would he be called Disaster Star Master and Disciple?

This kind of writing technique is not popular. After all, he is a monk, and he can also kill demons. Even at a low level, he is extraordinary. For a mortal to be so pretentious and cheat money, is it disgusting? I really can't stand it. I suggest that if the author writes for entertainment, you can do whatever you want. If you want to make money, please go check out the writing techniques of the great masters and study them carefully.

The fighting scenes are great, it's very toxic if a bastard fights with big monsters and immortals all day long and always wins.

The master is doing his best. The protagonist is still looking at the beautiful woman and commenting on the master who was beaten to death. Why don't you shed tears? It's so fake.

I feel that the master and apprentice of the protagonist are written in a silly and stupid way. Since there are pursuers who will arrive soon, why are they still wandering around? Don't you run away quickly?

I made an introduction as a time traveler, but I didn't see the benefit of establishing the character of a time traveler, just to be able to say a few modern words.

The protagonist is a waste

Can't the author revise Chapter 27? Many people probably think it is poisonous. He's so mean-mouthed.

After causing trouble all the way, is there nothing else to do?

The main character's name is real. . . As soon as I saw it, I thought of the Nobel Prize winner. I immediately acted and withdrew.

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Seeing Mo Yan reminds me of that bad old man. Can you be any more disgusting?

A good start, but it's a pity to turn to Journey to the West and continue the journey. Halfway through, I didn't want to read anymore and abandoned the book!

Something is said this and that, this and that is said. I have to add a fucking word.

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Good guy, three open? Scared, scared

It's too ugly and the words don't convey the meaning.

Did you write "Laoshan Taoist Priest"? The search jumped directly to this book. Is the author so great? He must be over 380 years old now

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It's a bit disgusting to write, and it also takes on a female apprentice, and is emotionally entangled with two other girlfriends.

The dynasty in the protagonist's world is about to collapse. It stands to reason that there cannot be monsters in cities where humans live. Can't even get in. It seems that the dynasty has run out of energy.