I Upgraded a Martial Arts World

Let me talk about a few points: First, about the protagonist's 40-year-old mind. I think he perfectly blends into the body and is about the same age, 11 years old! Secondly, Goldfinger's improved skills are messed up and don't know how to keep a low profile. It's no problem to improve a golden bell in exchange for status and resources, but then throw out some formations, pills, etc., It's just a matter of life and death. If things are not kept secret, you will lose your virginity. If you don't know a thing about how to survive, you will get involved in everything. Third, the rhythm is not enough. This kind of cheat makes the protagonist's skills stronger than others, so what's the cool thing about it? He develops in a low profile, builds forces secretly, and turns his skills into strength, the mastermind behind the scenes. Either enter the country quickly and kill them along the way. As for you, you have a lot of skills and a series of plots, but the protagonist is still a third-rate character with little participation and no decisiveness. He is basically a spectator. How does it feel to write like this? Fourth, the writing style is a bit poor!

Can the protagonist Goldfinger's improvement technique be improved only once or can it be improved continuously? Also, the protagonist can reveal his abilities to the higher-ups in the family and tell the family that his understanding is incredible. In this way, the family will definitely regard you as a treasure, and the protagonist can grow better and become stronger. The protagonist can give improved skills to the family. As the family becomes stronger, it can better obtain the resources for the protagonist to grow and become stronger.

I found that most of the protagonists are troublemakers

After all, I lived twenty or thirty years old in my previous life, why do I act like an idiot!

I am 40 years old and dare not talk to a ten-year-old girl. I really admire her!

I can't stand it anymore. It feels like the protagonist's mind is less than 10 years old. It's so embarrassing that I feel like I have cancer.

It's so toxic that I can't stand it until the second chapter.

Do you have any comments about the work?

Let the author explain Chapter 4. As mentioned earlier, if you feel something is wrong during practice, just change it to a more comfortable position. How do you explain the thing behind the golden bell cover? I have neither practiced nor had relevant knowledge, so I just relied on my imagination to make up for it. This matter does not make sense. Those elders have no doubts at all? ? ?

This book has been scrapped since it started saving people. The first part was okay. But starting to save people, it gets worse and worse. Goodbye, abandoned.

Chapter 4 left me confused. After the three golden chapters, it is extremely poisonous.

This wisdom-reducing halo is too wide!

You are just a brat, far from 40 years old.

Apart from improving the skills, he is useless 😃 It would be better to write the protagonist as a supporting role 😁

After reading the first few chapters, I kind of didn't want to read the son of a family. Shouldn't he be taught martial arts early and then lay the foundation? He has to wait until he is an adult before he can tell me. I was speechless and I don't know what the author was thinking.

Every time I see it. Someone who is several decades old still pretends to be young like her mother. I can't stand it anymore

No one feels the water? After reading the first chapter, I had no interest in reading any more.

After reading a few chapters, the protagonist changes his style too quickly. He is a good boy at home, but he kills all kinds of people when he goes out. It gives people a feeling of being forced to pretend to be sexy, which is very dramatic. Normally speaking, when modern people travel through time, no matter what world they travel to, the legal concepts in their heads will not change easily, unless you are an indifferent person in reality. For perverted murderers who value life, it is best to arrange some kind of experience for the protagonist before he kills people, such as encountering bandits and slaughtering villages, etc., To stimulate the readers' sense of justice. Only in this way can people easily accept the killing. I have written several books, most of which are eunuchs in about ten chapters. I admire the author for being able to write 900,000 words.

I prefer novels with supporting characters that are memorable.