Picture of the Enlightenment of the Heavens

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There are many loopholes and many shortcomings The grandmaster didn't think this is just an innate and has poison on his body, so he went to see the time traveler Huang Shang? How crazy is this? Just for a skill? This virus of yours is really fancy 🙂 A virus runs through the entire text What is this operation? A lot of readers are lost directly And the collisions deliberately created for the plot are really disgusting I can only say that the creativity of this book can be read 😒

I saw that the protagonist of the Tang Dynasty wanted to become invincible, but he was stopped by the army. I couldn't figure it out. Couldn't the protagonist have a virus? Just release some of it, just like Tianlong poisoned Shaolin. This virus can kill even the Grand Master. What's the use of having more armies that are weaker than the protagonist! How many soldiers died when encountering this virus? Why did you forget this ability?

Please change the author's introduction. It's a bit discouraging to read. I hesitated five or six times before clicking in.

After reading the Zhetian part of this book, it is eye-catching. It is better than many Zhetian fan writings. It is much better than those who only know how to upgrade with the protagonist. Promoting the evolutionary frenzy on the earth is a big highlight. I hope the author can write well. Keep up the hard work and come on!

Collection of supporting players! Reject celebrity names! When will it appear? According to the plot! (If you want to live longer, it's best to explain 😁)

Let me complain, the snake venom is written like a genetic virus. In the second volume of Datang, I saw that the chat group is a bit too poisonous. If it can bluff people, it feels like it has a home field advantage. Whose golden finger is the most powerful in whose territory?

One thing to say is that it is indeed a bit unaccustomed to read it at the beginning. Even if it is linked with the protagonist of other books, it is best to choose the one after enlightenment. First, it is so interesting and touching. Second, if you pretend to be in front of Huang Shang at the beginning, it is very likely to attract the future body of Huang Shang, who has become enlightened. Then the protagonist's own future body comes over, the two have a friendly exchange, and then erase the memory of the protagonist and leave. Now I don't want to be in the past, and now flow The only one in all the worlds, there is a group of old Thousand-layer cakes, one set after another of vests. Everyone will come and see each other without raising their heads or looking down. It is very meaningless to dress up in the past. There is also one thing to be careful about. Be careful when pretending to be someone else. Someone pretended to be someone next door and beat the Supreme Laojun to death, and pretended to be the Supreme Master to open a harem. As a result, when he was preaching, a slap came from the sky and he was directly slapped to death. The cause and effect timeline was wiped out 😏

skirt! 1057302956 I really want to complain!

Author, your timeline is so confusing. Shouldn't Dugu be the person after Tianlong and before the Divine Eagle? According to what you said, Tianlong has just begun to ascend to Dugu. So how did the Divine Eagle live until Yang Guo's period? According to Jin Yong's timeline, it was 130 years from Qiao Feng's death to Yang Guo's birth.

It's not a good start. Don't write about Dugu Qiubai if you don't prepare to use weapons. It's better to start with dragon, snake, drama, and righteousness.

In the early stages of your book, try to treat him as little as possible, because he is really not interesting. It is best not to dig holes randomly, lest you, the author, forget about you and be criticized by readers later. As for the writing style, whether it's passable or not depends on how you write it next. It's best not to have a harem, which is uncomfortable to watch. Come on! Sao Nian!

Um. . . . . The writing style is a bit novice, and the plot combination is reasonable. Protagonist feeling. . . It's hard to describe in one word. Overall, it's a readable book and barely enough.

Snake venom is unreasonable? ? ? Too fake? ? ? What is unclear is not a genetic virus infection? ? ? ?

The outline is good, but the author's writing style is a bit poor and cannot be expressed clearly.

The protagonist is poisoned and goes to fight with the little fairy to get her to take drugs. The protagonist can detoxify, and the little doctor can also increase cultivation and viruses.

Does the author not know what a poison is and what a virus is?

Come on, author, I don't have a monthly ticket, so I will vote for you with a monthly reward ticket... Just to be more precise, this is my first monthly ticket, and it is also the first monthly ticket for your hard work 😁

Water experience, the author cannot find mine🤭🤭🤭🤭

Is there a female protagonist? Preferably a single female protagonist.

Happy May (*￣3￣)╭♡❀Little flowers for you

After becoming the controller of Hongmeng, he directly created four subsidiary universes and one main universe, and slowly became the mastermind behind the scenes?

Just because of this introduction, I dare not read it,,,,,,,

Ahhhhhhhh, I have a headache (this post is purely based on water experience)

Hundreds of thousands of words, it's not easy, this is the card!

It's a bit poisonous. If I remember correctly, snake gallbladder is not poisonous, so the question is how did the protagonist get poisoned?

A group of people with golden fingers are as slow as a tortoise. Go and see Emperor Haotian of All Heavens. His golden fingers are great and his strength increases very quickly.

The most powerful one is Dugu Qiufei, the peak poison master of Pusqun Snakes, and the world's best miraculous doctor can't cure it, so it's innate. The virus is still evolving. I have never practiced Yitian martial arts, so I just picked up a few martial arts books. Can recommend new exercises

Happy Double Day! 🎁🎁🎁😁😁😁

Where is your finished book, the author?