Luo Meng Fanhua

The author's writing style is very good, and the description of the scenery is beautiful, but I feel (personally) that the plot is not very complete. Why is the heroine missing when it is written? And the coherence is not very good, I think the most important thing is that the sad theme is quite good, and it always exaggerates the feelings of separation, but it seems that the two just met by chance and it is not such a heart-wrenching love (maybe I don't understand it very well?) And the ending is not very good, there is no clear and complete explanation, why didn't the heroine come? What will happen to the male protagonist after the female protagonist does not come? It might be better if we write about the lives of the two of them that have no intersection after a few years. Finally, I feel that the setting of this plot is a bit vulgar. It always involves the general going to the battlefield and then the heroine abandoning him when he comes back. I hope there are better ideas!

Hmm... Am I looking for something wrong? ... The author, don't mind. If you feel unhappy with me, I will delete it. I saw you in the assistant and felt that it was very sad that you didn't comment (because I... Didn't have many comments), so I came here. Dad, please don't be angry if I said something bad.