Rebirth of Japan: Sekiro Legacy

The author made many common sense mistakes: there are two serious ones. First, the status hierarchy in ancient Japan was very strict. An ashigaru was not qualified to live side by side with samurai. Even if Ashina country was special, this would not be the case. The status of the second ninja is very low, and even the treatment of genin is lower than that of standing or even peasant ashigaru. Therefore, even if a wealthy countryman like Ashina Isshin, whose life span is less than 50,000 koku, can hook up with a ninja, he will never let anyone do the work of a ninja casually. Even if Yamoto chops down a chicken and is a samurai alien, Takeda Shingen will not let him do it casually. Instead, he will ask to do it himself.

1. The content is generally messy and seems to be written casually. 2. The writing positioning and the intended audience are unclear. 3. The second chapter is just a make-up chapter. 4. The writing is average among the fanfics I have read. Overall, it is not strong enough. Please practice more. In summary, there is no reason to rush into the street.

It's a pretty good book about Sekiro It can only be said that it's good overall It didn't collapse the power system, nor did it mess up the overall rhythm, but it didn't have any bright spots. It can only be said to be a very ordinary book. Now let's talk about the bad points of this book. There are a lot of power systems. I am now reading chapter 127, and there are many different ability systems: Ashina, JOJO, 47, vampire and so on. . . The author is not suitable for writing emotional lines. . . . . . . . . . . The writing is generally good, but the most toxic point in the early stages is the school bullying incident, which was resolved a bit late. . . Also, a lot of strange ability systems have been added. I think only the power of a wolf can be bypassed, but there is nothing else. The following are personal suggestions Wouldn't it be better to replace the first general who appears with Yamauchi Nozenzen or Shichibongun or Matsumoto Uchizo Yu? Naomori Kawahara is really rubbish, the first samurai general, a batch of dishes, there is no sense of involvement at all The second is that the ability system is really a bit too much, which makes me a little confused. I don't watch the moon world, nor do I watch JOJO or anything like that. I feel a little uncomfortable when it comes out suddenly. I hope there will be less ability system My personal suggestion is that the author can ignore it

Why must we write about school? Sekiro is such a good theme, the result is campus I have a headache when I see the campus

The writing is pretty good, but the main book is unsatisfactory except for the unsatisfactory ending. The first is the problem of filling the hole. There are some small holes that have not been filled in, such as the gem man and the crowned puppet master. The puppet master is not important. Although the gem man did not give much ink at the beginning, his status in the plot is still not low. After all, he personally promoted the development of many events, so when he has no role at the end, it still gives people a feeling that something is missing. Then there is the problem of the plot. The overall plot is a bit top-heavy. It gives me the feeling that the author has doubled the speed of the plot after the Sekiro chapter, and the main line running through the entire novel is not clear enough. After reading it, I still don't know what is driving the development of the overall plot. I even feel that it would be better if the pitfalls of Shura and blood were removed and the story ended in the Sekiro chapter. Finally, there is the problem of the ending, which is also the part that I feel has the biggest problem (maybe because I am too stupid to understand). The ending is too ambiguous. According to the last few chapters, there should be two wishes. One is about my sister, needless to say, and the other is quiet, maybe to resurrect her and no longer be poisoned? But how to solve the problem of the protagonist turning into Shura? As mentioned before, I can only grant two wishes. Is it because I haven't written it yet before the final attack? Or is it that the protagonist's halo can grant three wishes? This is not clearly stated. The absence of the fun-loving person Bao Shiweng at the end is also a prickling thing. Finally, there is the origin of the protagonist's Shura. This pit has been dug in the previous plot and is getting bigger and bigger, but in the end there is only one chapter of description. Whether it is recovering during the battle or how to completely solve the problem of Shura in the end, these two points give people an anticlimactic feeling and are not worthy of the pit that has been dug before. The above is my personal opinion.

I've just read a few chapters, but why do I feel like the main character is like an idiot, and you still tolerate it when the other person is getting angry? Hit him, stupid protagonist

One day, a short ninja with one arm and a wooden hand got on a tram in Tokyo, and thus, Tram Sekiro began 😂

If this book does not get good grades, it will be the death of that sister.

I'm just curious as to why the protagonist wants to make a fool of himself... He first said something about 18r's book, then later said that he likes men, labeling himself inexplicably, wouldn't he reject it outright? Can't even say no? Do you have to use a special method?

May I ask how you got the recommendation of the same type and gave me the money?

After reading Chapter 14, I honestly felt that Pig's Feet was rubbish. Either you don't pretend to be bi, or you pretend to be very pleasing to the people.

The author of those chapters on campus bullying showed off my writing skills

That Qiuyue is very annoying, the protagonist is also her cousin, who has to take care of this and that, so I think it was the protagonist's wife who tried. It is recommended that the author write it to death

Sekiro mod, I personally think it's pretty cool.

I wouldn't dare to read the daily drug-inducing book without looking at the book review section

If you don't understand the logic, please feel free to ask yourself to quit.

The writing in this book is pretty good, and the character of the protagonist is acceptable. In the novels I have seen before, the protagonist always punches the bad guy in school, but this one is a bit novel, and he knows how to call the police and blame others. 🤓But the popularity is too low, and there are a lot of comments in the comment area. I also read Mo Dad's book before reading this one. I want to add a book list to help recommend, but my bad book list can't pass the review. I think it's better to wash it down and eat jelly.

I just want to ask if this wolf is in Japan. Does he take the train?

The drama on this campus is really torture! You said you don't want to watch it. The plot doesn't make sense and you won't be able to understand it later. You said that you watched this plot and it was really the King of Torture! This has nothing to do with the campus and it doesn't look good at all.

How can Sekiro defeat the second team leader? He can't do it.

This sister, the two-dimensional flavor is too strong

What is it that I cannot accept? It means that for more than 250 chapters, the protagonist is forcibly downplayed, and the family disputes and the immortal killing are forced to promote the immortal killing. Moreover, the information between the protagonist and the world is not equal. There are many things that the readers know but the protagonist does not know. The protagonist looks blank and does things that the readers do not want to accept. So I basically stopped reading it after more than 260 chapters. Of course, this does not prevent this from being a better book.

After learning Japanese, I subconsciously translated every line into Japanese and played it in my mind 😅

It made me feel extremely uncomfortable, so I gave up.

The writing is good, but the setting plot is lack

This book is not very good at Qidian. If you switch to JJ, the language may be more delicate. But Qidian's writing style is too rough, and the living space for the two-dimensional tone is too small.

Good guy, I almost looked like the Wolf of Japan (the enlarged version of Train...?)

It's over, I really can't stand it anymore! The previous dozens of photos are really crazy torture

As a book lover, I think I should be somewhat qualified to talk about this novel. How can I put it this way? In terms of writing style and compactness of the story, this novel is a relatively good-looking novel. It does not have the clichés of a novice novel, nor does it have the murderous plot of some time-travel novels. The story inside is also quite attractive, and it is not as unbearable as those in the comment area said. People who have a sense of involvement should feel more comfortable reading it. All in all, this novel is quite good and worth a read (anyway, there are free chapters, so if you feel it is not good, you can just withdraw it without any loss).

At first, this book felt like the characters and plot in the anime "Zhenzuki Tan Tsukihime". The similarity is very high, you see?