From Alliance to Marvel

The writing is a bit messy, keep working hard😁

I never read novels that give superpowers to others.

Give the author a suggestion for a plot in which the protagonist does not appear and it does not change at all from the plot of the movie, so there is no need to write so much! I won't talk about the Iron Man part. You wrote tens of thousands of words when Thor appeared, but the protagonist didn't appear, and the plot didn't change much. Even if you haven't seen the movie and don't know the plot, you can Baidu Thor 1 plot introduction. Your word count is so low that it's annoying!

I am too lazy to follow the plot and force myself to follow it. I emphasize many times that I am familiar with the plot. Then, no accidents in the plot are avoidable. If I don't understand the meaning of the protagonist's existence, otherwise I will not participate in the plot. If I don't change after participating, I will stop. I emphasize over and over again that I am familiar with the plot.

I don't want to say anything unnecessary. After all, it's not easy for the author to write a book. If you don't want to read it, you can just turn it off, so I decided to abandon the book. Also, I really couldn't help but want to complain about this book. It is a typical good hand that makes you extremely bad at playing. Goodbye! ! ! !

After reading three chapters and listening to the author's introduction, I'm still confused. I didn't try to be cowardly when I was still rubbish, but I still thought about giving my abilities to others. Can you lick it so cleanly?

This book would be popular if the protagonist were a foreigner It's unrealistic for Asians to be the protagonists in European and American movies SHIELD found out, and they either sliced ​​and studied them, or killed them It didn't look realistic

It's 2020, and I feel like the era of flying with systems is over. Looking at the title of the book, it's not the content you wrote. I thought you would go to the Alliance to travel through the heroes in it, or you could just go there and write their stories, and then go to Marvel, or connect the two worlds, etc. There are still many Alliance stories. The ability can all defeat Iron Man. Hey, I don't know how to put it. It's much more interesting if you write about the Alliance, the invasion of Noxus, the Ionian Traveler, the Ranger, and the mystery of the Far North. They are all themes. No one of them is more interesting than following Iron Man. I haven't read a few chapters, but I really feel that your writing is a bit bad and you are serious. If you read your book a few times, you will find something interesting.

Giving Tony too many abilities, one is enough, but giving 5 or 6 is too much.

There are so many unimportant plots, why write so many of them? Can't we just brush them over in one go? Have more of your own stuff. For example, developing hero skills does not necessarily have to be the fixed 5 skills (plus passive) displayed by the alliance. Every hero has his own charm. It is best to write your own characteristics, and follow the plot of Marvel movies, as many as you can. Why not portray the hero in more depth. At least give yourself something to write about, not a novel. Think about it.

After reading more than ten chapters, I still don't know what the pig's feet are going to do!

It feels okay and the writing is good. Come on!

Is the author planning to write a new book? Looking forward to the new work!

Even if the doctor checks you, he won't admit that you are sick.

You haven't even signed a contract with a million words, so why use love to generate electricity😅

The front is a little wet, but the back is okay and there is progress. Come on.

This book made me bored to death

Is this a complete collection of lines from Marvel movie scripts? My God, how did the author have the courage to write it?

It's too weak to possess so many heroes. 😥

Chapters 21 to 24 were harmonized? A little bit sad

Can anyone explain? What do you mean I just want gold? '