I Have an Army of Shadows

Is your profile for a female channel? Did you go to the wrong set?

The subject matter is good, and the writing is so wet

It's hard to judge. You brought a black shadow army, even if you could only summon twenty or thirty people at that time, you wouldn't be slapped in the mouth by a woman, right?

I think it's okay and has its own characteristics, but I need to practice my writing. There are many things that can be written brilliantly.