Struggle in the New Red Building

Content aside, there is a big problem with paragraph layout. It is best not to exceed three or four lines in a paragraph, and consider blank lines to separate paragraphs.

I hope to write something new, keep at it, come on!

There are very few comments on this article, but I will read every one of them carefully. One is to improve writing, and the other is to understand the interests of readers. The two complement each other. So I am particularly looking forward to book friends can point out the problem in detail. Let me know where I am lacking. Then write a plot that is interesting to book friends. For example, some book friends think: Ethnic fighting does not suit the psychological age of the protagonist; Jia Huan should go directly to his father to learn Bagu; The brothel murder case, the plot conflict is too far-fetched; The image of Feng Ziying, the description in this article goes against the public impression... These opinions are all valuable! I will discuss it with my book friends and then improve it in my writing. Here, I would like to thank all the book friends who commented and gave their opinions. Thank you all for your encouragement! Finally, everyone is welcome to leave comments!

The beginning of this article is about the historical context. It can also be said that it also introduces the land of Jinling. However, there are very few poets in the Ming and Qing Dynasties, and you can't copy it as much as you want.

This is the harem article "The Harem of the Red Mansion". Qin Keqing wrote it to death so early 😭😭😭

It is easy for books about Red Mansions to have some surprises. The author's book has not caught me off guard so far, which is commendable. Keep up the good work.

Come on, author, I have saved it and voted for it. I feel it is better than what I wrote. It is also easier to intersperse the characters in the Red Mansion and deduce the plot. My protagonist is still outside the Red Mansion😄.

Received, let's carry forward the Red Mansion Circle together

Come on, give me your recommendation vote, you have more comments than me.

Newcomers and new books are not famous to begin with. If your updates are not stable, it will be difficult to get ahead.

Persistence is the greatest victory, support you

How long will it take for the Brothel plot to end? I'll watch it again after it's over

Have you been reborn as a child?

This incident of beating people to death in a brothel has the charm of a cool article written 7 or 8 years ago. I hope the author will think carefully about it in the future and not do it again.

As long as you don't become a scholar at a young age later, you won't be poisonous to others. It's good to be a scholar now. At least you can enter the circle of scholars by becoming a scholar. Otherwise, like Jia Zheng, you will always be able to enjoy yourself, but no Confucian scholar will take him seriously. At most, he will treat others as stupid and rich, and ask for money from him.

Actually, I was just thinking, how old are Baoyu and the protagonist now? Can you do it? So how come children can think about all these things? Even if the protagonist is not a child at heart, the other maids are. Does he smelt copper?

It's very interesting, not too bad, and it's very comfortable to read. It's just that the word count is a bit short, and it's gone as soon as I get into it. Come on, author! !

A fight in a brothel is a bit far-fetched. But you are not writing a serious novel! As long as it doesn't make sense or make no distinction between ancient and modern times, that's fine! It is enough for ancient people to act according to the behavior of ancient people!

I hope the author will update more, the best of Red Mansions

Some opinions and thoughts on the early stage of this book (don't spray) First of all, although it is old-fashioned to be a literary official, it is the most realistic way. Think about it, even Jia Daihua asked his son Jia Jing to take the imperial examination. This is the expectation of the son of a military figure, and it is also the choice made by the founding monarchs and ministers of the dynasty. The governance of the world depends on scholars. Secondly, since this book is the beginning of history, let us make a major premise first. The Jia family can be mapped to the Cao family to the greatest extent, and the emperors and emperors in this book, especially before they ascended the throne, reacted to Kangxi and Yongzheng. I personally agree that the Cao family is on the wrong side. It was a mistake, and the economic reasons were secondary (think about how the Cao family rose). Yongzheng became emperor in his forties. The Cao family was a proper princeling. How could Yongzheng make it easier for him? Thinking of this, I suddenly had a little idea. Can I use this angle to explain why Jia Jing practiced Taoism? (Jia Jing is a second-generation official, a second-generation rich man, and a top student. It's not like he grew up crooked in Jiajing.) The emperor in this book abdicated. The emperors abdicated before the founding of the People's Republic of China. Jia Jing only became a Taoist after passing the Jinshi examination. Jia Jing is the leader of the Jia family. He is a military figure, and he is basically the one who takes action in politics, so can you think of it this way? Jia Jing ran into Taoism because he knew that he was on the wrong political side and would be liquidated sooner or later Having said so much, he also assumed this So many, what I actually want to draw out is the label of the protagonist's Rongfu origin. Although it is easier to use than ordinary people, it is difficult to get close to the center of power. Think about it, Zhang Juzheng also worked on the bench for decades before he rose to the ninth day. He is innocent and has no reason. The protagonist is from the Rongfu. He is not in good health, so the protagonist needs a certificate of innocence to prove his innocence and marry Lin Daiyu as his wife (this is my main purpose). Think about Lin Ruhai's family background, the imperial examination beauty hunter, and the salt patrol censor (still from Jiangnan, a powerful and wealthy official) , this kind of official must be the emperor's confidant) He has the same age, disciples and old officials. The most important thing is that he is about to die. The protagonist is his son-in-law. Even the political legacy is no problem. The emperor will also love the house and the house. As for Sister Bao, although it sounds nice, An imperial merchant, but actually a slave of the emperor. She wanted to enter the palace but was rejected. The reason was largely due to family background, and she had Mrs. Wang as her legal mother. Unless you become a powerful minister in your later years, the word filial piety will crush you to death                                                                                          The death of Yuan Chun and Wang Ziteng is too sudden. Please contact me to explain the issue of lining up mentioned above, especially since Jia Yucun was able to become the Minister of War because of Wang Ziteng, it can be said that Wang Zi Teng was already powerful in the world at that time (if you want to destroy him, you must first make him crazy). There is nothing wrong with the emperor's action. In addition to the setting of this book, after cleaning up the old subordinates of the Supreme Emperor, this sword is useless

Don't you know the direction of the Red Building if you've traveled through time? Is it really him? He looks suffocated.