Arknights Atonement

Let me start with a side note, well, how should I put it, I moved to Qidian in recent days, although I still maintain the paid Qidian, so I am half an old bookworm The writing style of this fanfic is one of the more outstanding ones I have read for many years. I am quite puzzled as to why I didn't sign the contract. After all, it is rare for fanfics to be written with love and have such achievements. I After flipping over and over, I feel like there are a few things I should tell new readers of this book (although I just read it today and stayed up late to read it) 1. This book is from a first-person perspective, which is easier to stir up emotions 2. The time span is huge. In the early stages, the descriptions were constantly staggered in different timelines. This is a dissuasion point. After all, it is difficult to read, but I also admire that nothing is too obvious. Obvious flaws 3. The author wrote this book a year ago, so it may be slightly different from the original work (i. E. Arknights) 4. This book is free, I hope you can vote for it with love, and it is definitely not a waste of time 5. The author's writing style is also outstanding, and he dares to describe the reality of the original society in Terra's frequent war background. This is commendable 6. There is a knife, there is a big drop knife 7. The splitting of volumes at the beginning may be caused by the author's inexperience, but it does not affect the perception The above is my feeling after reading so far, I hope new readers will adopt it I also hope that the author can continue to bring us such good Ark fans, it is best to write more, after all, there are already few Ark fans at the starting point.

? ? ? ? ? Found this while taking a walk...

I found the character drawings of the male and female protagonists tonight when I was typing, but I don't know who the artist is (any readers who know please tell me! QWQ)

Come on, come on, get better. "There is no problem with the Pioneer card fee. I just use the Eagle Horn to cheat the Kryptonian Bagpipe. It is easy to lick and invincible. "Kua! "(Sound of preparing to draw cards), Yaoliuba (monthly search package)! Source Stone! Synthetic fish (two sounds)! ​​Do you think this bagpipe can be drawn? Give Ollie to the doctors! Just hit her and it's over!"

Let me tell you something, Wu Zhi sprained the door handle yesterday, and now he is in so much pain that he can't move. He will wait for this week to pass, and if it gets better, he will update immediately. I hope everyone understands (I will never guard the door empty-handed anymore. XX

Addicted to riding and slashing, unable to extricate himself.

With narrative writing and fragmented content, it's really hard to tell what is being written 🙂

Arknights: Atonement Book Review + After Reading Warning: Spoilers + Criticism, new readers are best to read it slowly by themselves. In general, this was originally the most promising book I have ever seen at the starting point. Unfortunately, the middle road collapsed, and it was difficult to write it in the later period. In the end, I started a new book haphazardly. My reading experience is as follows: Early period (before the academy) + middle period (Victoria Academy Chapter-Tajie Dragon Gate Invasion Chapter): 4.5 Stars (out of 5 stars) Middle period-late period: 3 stars The writing style in the early stage of this book is very eye-catching: only a few strokes , outlines the scene of the Dragon Gate, from the protagonist's situation to Chen's entrance, the writing style seems much better than some flashy works in the rankings, the first person + multiple flashbacks did cause difficulty in reading comprehension at the beginning, but in the later period the author gradually improved the structure and plot fluency, and was unambiguous about the third person approach. As Chef Chen, this book is a perfect match for me. At the beginning, I held my phone every day and couldn't put the book down, just wanting to read the story between the protagonist and Chen. After a few scenes, the flavor (knife) of Ark is basically filled to the brim, which is particularly impressive. The interweaving of memories and reality has also become much more natural, creating a complementary effect. The growth of the protagonist is also eye-catching. When I reached the main plot stage, I met Amiya, Doctor, Lynx and the others. When I entered the Dragon Gate plot, I basically knelt down to watch it, because Feng's experience and sense of substitution were so real that it almost made me think that there really is a five/six-star operator like Vindicator in the Arkworld. But as the climax of the current line comes to an end, the rhythm of all this begins to slowly collapse. The protagonist is dying to save the heroine. The heroine is uncomfortable, incompetent and furious. The main enemy is still there. The Dragon Gate invasion has not yet completely broken out. Everyone is waiting for Feng to wake up and there will be a slight turning point of Feng's "resurrection" - the atmosphere has been heightened to this point. We are all looking forward to the hero waking up and commanding everyone to turn the tide - the protagonist is trapped in memories and killed. And it's a very long memory kill. Basically, I have never gone back to the present. There are more than 150 chapters, and I have followed more than 150 chapters. In fact, I am not opposed to having a memory kill. I even think that the plot of the memory kill can be used to buffer and pave the way for the next climax - for example, a paragraph explaining the origin of "disability", or starting from the heart borrowed from the protagonist to recall the main plot - such as the scout. The heart can be completely replaced with Eeko's heart - there are knives, plots and golden fingers) and then gradually interweave reality and memories as in the beginning, with knives and climax coexisting, and even lead to the boss of the next plot - the remnant of the Independent Commission Against Corruption/the mastermind behind the scenes, etc., To complete a regrettable compensation, revenge or something. Although this is rigid, it is also good-looking. I have thought about the plot: the protagonist wakes up - replaces the heart - fights the integration movement - daily rest - the man behind the Independent Commission Against Corruption - revenge - and forgiveness from the past. Absolutely. However, no, the protagonist fell into a memory killing that lasted for more than 150 chapters, and did not return to the main line at all to let us know how it will develop next. The key is - the routine of memory killing is also very similar; learn from a master - something big happens - the protagonist is dying - Chen Weneng is furious. Looking at it from the current perspective: Good guy, Chen, it turns out that you almost lost Feng a few years ago, and you didn't mention it at all afterwards that he was in danger again? Just be incompetent and furious again? Furthermore, Eeko, as an original character, has too many close interactions with the protagonist, so much so that in the later period, Chen was purely a vase to buy jealousy. Although the fighting scenes are very good and the writing is very good, these can only be said to be extremely reluctant in the face of the urgent desire to watch a modern plot instead of rehashing the past. After the plot of the memory killing is too long, the memories are over, the climax is over, now let us return to the main plot - who still remembers it? How to substitute? Why didn't the character die with a knife? What is the connection between this memory killing and the main plot? I feel that the author is unable to do what he wants after writing this. Looking at the word count of more than 150 chapters, he really doesn't have the time or energy to fix it, so he can only tj and move to a new book. Actually, I don't blame the author. It's very impressive that he can write like this and publish it for free. He has given me a very good experience. I just feel very sorry. It is a pity that this book was not signed, which gave the author greater motivation. It is a pity that such a good work is really uninterested, and there are only a few readers. In the end, there are not even readers who can correct the author's mistakes in rhythm in time. It feels like - looking at the ancient tomb stolen by tomb robbers, you only regret that you did not discover this book a few months or a year earlier and give it support and attention at all times. I have said so much, actually just to vent my regrets. The book is a good book, but it is a pity, but we should not force the author or anything, he has already done a good job. If I have time, I might write a short side story and post it in the book review section to give Feng and Chen a happy ending in my heart. It can be considered a dream come true. Author, come on! I hope the new book can learn from the lessons and soar into the sky!

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The whole book is very well written. I only have one doubt: what was written? I don't understand a bit. 😅

Thank you all for your collection and recommendation votes. I will update it soon. However, due to the online class in a week, I may not be able to update it daily. However, as long as the Ark does not fall, I will try my best to write this book to the ending. Thank you Mina-san. QWQ

After finishing today's chase, I decided to AFK and see you after the postgraduate entrance examination I sincerely hope that the story will continue steadily and be fatter I wish the author to sign the contract as soon as possible I hope that I will come back victorious Maybe the author can look forward to my 10,000 rewards

I smoked rosemary skr

The name of this chapter is really domineering (funny)

If I get Didi, I'll come over and say something (hehehehe!)

Wow, the writing and storytelling (except for the multi-line narrative at the beginning is a bit messy), this book is the most outstanding fanfic. The protagonist now feels more like an operator of Cailiu to me😂. In terms of strength, it is six stars on the island. It is positioned as a sniper with light armor. It can fight and train troops. It can stabilize W in regular combat. If it is a life-and-death battle in guerrilla warfare, it will be a 50-50 split. I don't know who is better with Souct. However, I haven't written about the Origin Stone skill until now. The upper limit of the strength is probably locked (it shouldn't be, the gun is driven by the Origin Stone skill. The protagonist, who is not a Lateran, can use the gun so easily, so it stands to reason that the Origin Stone skill will not be bad). I don't know if the author will cover this aspect in the future. After all, the Red Sky Shadow Sky has been pulled out, and the protagonist's current strength cannot even enter the Qicheng command tower, let alone witness the Double Dragon Meeting. It is completely over. In short, I like this book very much. I am looking forward to the story of the protagonist and Chen, and I am also looking forward to the author's Arknights and the world of Terra.

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The first person perspective is really uncomfortable, at least for me.

Everyone in the book club group has been stabbed in the back. This is the new group number: 682434639, and the name is still the Victoria Office in Longmen. Hope everyone knows.

The group has exploded, please wait for the new group - Su Lei

Wuwuwu, although there is no follow-up, I still wrote down the character attributes As of Chapter 273 (I just read that) The character attributes may be a bit supermodel... But I haven't been back to Ark for a long time, so I'll see~ Maple Characteristics Heavy shooter - high-precision close range shooting Redeployment time 70s Initial deployment cost: 28→31 Attributes (Elite 2) Full level) Maximum health: 2301 Attack: 890 Defense: 252 Spell resistance: 0 Attack range: 3*3 Talent Name Condition Description Display algorithm First talent Victim Elite 0 When attacked, there is a 20% chance that the attack power of the attack will be reduced to 30% Defender When Elite 1 is attacked, there is a 20% chance that the attack power of the attack will be reduced to 30%, and the attacker's attack speed will be reduced by 4, lasting 5 seconds When Vindicator Elite 2 is attacked, there is a 20% chance that the attack power of the attack will be reduced to 10%, and the attacker's defense power will be reduced by 10%, and the attack speed will be reduced by 4, lasting 5 seconds Second Talent Martyr Elite 2 When retreating or falling down, it will cause 134% attack power damage to everyone within the original attack range, and apply stun for 2 seconds Martyr Elite 2 Potential 6 When retreating or falling down, it will cause 154% attack power damage to everyone within the original attack range, apply stun for 2 seconds, and reduce defense by 15%, lasting 5 seconds ※ When the Martyr talent affects allies, the damage will be reduced by 50%, but they will still be stunned. The additional 15% slowdown applied by potential six will not take effect on friendly forces Potential improvement In order: Potential 2 Potential 3 Potential 4 Potential 5 Potential 6 Deployment cost -1 Redeployment time -4 seconds Attack power +30 Deployment cost -1 The second talent effect is invalid for allies Skills Skill 1 (Elite 0 is open) Tiger Shot Rank III attack recovery, automatically triggered Launches "Tiger Shot", causing physical damage of 300% of attack power, attack target movement speed -20%, defense power -100 Skill 2 (Elite 1 open) Cruel Strike Rank III automatic recovery, manual trigger Manual control launches a "Tiger Shot" within the attack range, causing damage of 230% of attack power, and the "Tiger Shot" effect characteristics are not applied. Move quickly to the target landing point, and after landing, cause a second tiger shot (230%) damage to the surrounding area one block away. Transform into a special form and use a silenced pistol + dagger. Attack range 1*3, intercept target 2, damage moderately reduced, attack interval slightly reduced (-0.4), Redeployment time after retreat -30 seconds. Skill 3 (Elite 2 open) End of the Way Rank III Automatic recovery, manual trigger The attack range is changed to 4 squares in front, the attack interval is slightly expanded, each attack ignores the triggering conditions and triggers the "Martyr" talent once, and increases the talent damage by 50%, and the talent effects can be superimposed. After 4 attacks, Maple is forced to withdraw from the battlefield, and "Martyr" can still be triggered when exiting the battlefield. Logistics Skills Skill 1-Secretary Conditions: Elite 0, Room: Control Center Description: When stationed in the control center, an operator in the control center other than himself who is not in a happy mood will recover +0.55 Per hour (the highest for the same effect). If the target is Chen, the recovery effect will be an additional +0.45 Skill 2 - Core Command Condition: Elite 2 , Room: Control Center Description: When stationed in the control center, the reception room clue collection speed is +10%, and the reception room is easier to obtain clues from the Longmen Guards Bureau Related props Recruitment Contract Feng, Secretary to the Director of the Longmen Guards Bureau, stepped onto the bridge of Rhode Island without hesitation. ——Wherever she goes, I will go. So he said. Token Used to enhance Maple's potential. The clock, smeared black with gunpowder and dust, stopped turning a long time ago. One day, the sun will shine into the dark forest and judge my sins. But until then, let's stay animalistic.

🌿, I would like to make a small suggestion. I clicked on this book and didn't even know what it was about. Could you please write a little bit about it in the introduction?

Fifty draws is finally out (but I feel a bit of a loss)

Seventy draws, one Shark, one Rosemary and one Red Died, I should say it or not, I wanted Elini's in the current up pool, but the result was that they wouldn't give it to me. As a result, there was only a 30% chance that two of them would come out at once if they were not up in the current period. Is this wrong or not...

Can you write a good introduction? I was confused. After reading the comment section for a long time, I realized that the female lead is Chen and the male lead is Fei Lin.

After watching Zero to 42 all night, I wanted to know, did the protagonist just give up on Tallulah? He said clearly that no one could forget the past, but he had no idea of ​​making amends.

If only I were half as persistent as the author (sad

The writing is very good and has a lot of feeling, but I had the illusion that I was watching Naruto, it was all about memories.

Come on, author, how did you do in the exam? The writing is very good and I like it very much. Please don't let our waiting become a regret...