Black Capital Thousand Years War

Draw conclusions first, a rare author with a serious attitude. Excellent work invested. (I just came to Qidian and I don't quite understand how to do this) The old rule is to suppress first and then improve, and talk about the shortcomings first. Disadvantages There is no special innovation in material selection, and it cannot catch people's attention at first glance. Personally, I prefer this type of theme. So far (Chapter 17), the setting is quite satisfactory. The settings of the books currently recommended have all kinds of weird features. I also read a little bit of it, and it was indeed eye-catching at the beginning, but in the middle of the book I felt that it lacked stamina. Putting aside the outer shell, the inside is still a traditional flow of killing monsters and upgrading. Writing this, I fell into deep thought, well, I can't find any other shortcomings. Maybe I'm not comprehensive enough, but I can assure you that there are absolutely no surprises. Now I will let go and praise. Authors who can clearly see the author's sincerity and listen to readers' opinions are good authors. The writing style is higher than other books of the same period. We all know that writing is something that consumes a lot of energy and brainpower, and online article authors are under high pressure to update. I hope that Lihuamu can maintain its current level in the future and live up to readers' expectations. Even if the story-building ability is not particularly good, it can be seen that the author has deliberately planted many foreshadowings, which is better than some authors who forget about the pitfalls they laid before writing. The author's ability cannot be seen in the character creation in such a short period of time, so I will not comment on it for the time being. Click on the author's profile to see that he is a new author (if he is not a big boss opening a small account). If he is a new person, it means that I have a good eye for pearls. If it is a big boss for a small account, it also means that I have a good eye for pearls. (Akimbo. Jpg) Only Chapter 17 has two modifications, one of which is a major modification, which shows that the author is very patient in polishing this work. I am looking forward to seeing how popular this book becomes. Above.

Gattuso: I am richer than you Ise: I can become a woman Gattuso: I am a gangster in the Black City Ise: I can become a woman Gattuso: I suffer great hatred and strive for self-improvement, which is the standard configuration of the protagonist Ise: I can change into a woman Gattuso: You have no partner Iser: Your partner is dead Gattuso vomited blood and died Gattuso is too difficult. As a character who currently plays almost the second male role, he does not have a character introduction! 😟

Hahahaha, everyone is a dead line warrior, and they basically wait until the end. I'm not bad either. Let me start from the front row, it's great that Ewha arranged a guest appearance! I, a crucian carp, can also perform on stage~ Is there really no one else interested? Before writing, let me say that my current progress is Chapter 22 of Volume 2. (Oh no, I really didn't mean it...) The following is only my personal experience and represents my personal opinion. My previous book review retained my evaluation of Pear Blossom's story-building and characterization abilities because it was too short at the time. Now that I have read the second volume, I think I can still talk about the previous one. The first is the story structure and rhythm. It can be seen that the author has a generally independent world view. Good reviews. But the shaping of the worldview is still insufficient. What I feel is that a thing is there because it needs to be there, not because it is there. (I think I didn't express it clearly...) As for the rhythm, my feeling is not obvious when I watch it intermittently. However, every time I watch it, I don't feel "I can't stop at all." Maybe it's a matter of personal taste, but I think this can also reflect something. There is a lot to be said about character creation . I think that, for now, the portrayal of the protagonist Iser has failed somewhat. I see that I am still confused about his character because some of his behaviors are contradictory. This is not appropriate to say. What I can feel is that the author looks at the protagonist from the author's perspective, not Yisel's own perspective. Therefore, the protagonist's behavior will be slightly strange in some places. Insert a note: I think the reasons why Iser betrayed his own race and was betrayed by his allies are too thin. The current space does not describe the past events in detail, and I always feel that the supporting points are insufficient. For the other characters, again just from what I've seen, there's not enough distinction between the characters. Kavon Heath Iser Carlos. These people feel like the same person with different professions and different backgrounds. The way of speaking and the usual actions are all the same. Different people have slightly different habits and movements, and different ways of speaking will make them more recognizable. Another point is that when writing multiple dialogues, you can delete some redundant actions. These actions are used to reduce the bluntness of the dialogue. But it increases the difficulty of reading and makes the article a little bit protracted. Such as the large dialogue in Chapter 21 of Volume 2. The summary is (language action action language language action language) switching constantly. In fact, it has been done very well. I can't suggest a solution, maybe avoid unnecessary conversations? About the above.

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When I read the early stage, I thought the writing was very delicate, but when I looked at the descriptions of fighting and weapons, I always felt that it was a boy, and the avatar was also a boy's head. Would a girl write a boy's story? . .

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It is a good-looking book, with a feeling of the end of the world, but the battle scenes and details are not perfect. I have only written the tenth chapter now, but it can be seen that the author is very careful in setting up an apocalyptic background, and hopes that the level inside will not be wasted. The investment has been made.

Ability: Shadow Transformation (increases speed) When oneself shadow transform, he is basically immune to physical damage, most spell damage, and is restrained by light abilities. Can ignore the terrain and teleport instantly (radius of fifty meters, can prompt) Can also differentiate into a shadow to wrap around and control the enemy Can also penumbra, affecting certain parts, such as hands (can pass through many things Ability: Sun Can control temperature to form extremely hot or cold areas (radius of 500 meters, can be improved), it is easier to create high temperatures, and can also control the body temperature of other people (can't think of it, it's harmful) Ability: Manipulate metal Can control metal, even strengthen metal, control metal to stretch or shorten at will (making metal more susceptible to damage) Can make metal possess yourself or even others, forming a barrier or protection Also control blood, dead bodies, Eye skills, the most basic control elements, enhance one's own speed and strength There are also sonic attacks and so on... Hope to adopt, thank you

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The boss will be awesome, the future is promising, come on, come on

The comment area is too cold, burn a villain to keep warm

This book is also called "About my transition from remote combat to melee combat"

Senior sister, I want today's extra cum

Ability: Telepathy Can read other people's thoughts and memories, and can also impose one's own brain waves on the other person, so that the other person's thinking is controlled by oneself. You can even use a special device to expand your brain wave range to the entire world, which can cause almost all humans to die in an instant, which is very terrifying. Ability: Control the weather This ability can control the wind and rain, summon all kinds of weather, and control it freely. It can range from strong winds and heavy rain to severe snowstorms, lightning and thunder, and even tornadoes. Ability: Turn wishes into reality You can turn almost any wish of yourself or others into reality, but you have to pay a heavy price for it. For example, if you wish others good luck, you will get bad luck yourself. Ability: Geological control (or magnetic control? Similar to Magneto) Can control earth objects, such as stones on the ground, or cause crustal movement, causing earthquakes. The more people with superpowers around you, the more powerful their abilities will be. They can even make an entire town disappear, leaving only a pit... That's all I can think of. I hope the author can adopt it😁

Come on, Mr. Lihuamu! I will always be your fan!

Mr. Gattuso, from the fourth family in the Black City to the third family, entering the top level of power in the Black City, I think you must have a lot to say, right? When you stand on a high-rise building and look at the bright lights of the dark city, you will be addicted to the smell of power. I know, as a young and promising person, how could you stop here. King of the Black Capital, I look forward to the day when this will be your title! When that day comes, I will offer you thousands of fireworks.

I came across this book from the sea of ​​thousands of books He is light It is also the wind I read between the lines experience the taste of life Those who are watched by fate Floating in the sea of ​​suffering

I hope the protagonist can be more domineering and have more children

It can be seen that Bartuso is a very affectionate young man. Maybe life is playing tricks on him, but his infatuation, his confusion, his determination, and even a trace of his fear of his wife are the endearing features of this character. These cannot stop him —————————— <b r

God's control can manipulate elements, animals, plants, etc., And can also restore life. It is basically omnipotent and omnipotent. The only weakness is mental strength, and only mental strength can resist this ability.

Ability: Elemental Escape Technique You can use the elements around you to achieve the effect of changing your body. When activated, your body will have special light particle effects corresponding to the elements.

The sky is blue waiting for misty rain, and I am waiting for you. Noreen, wait for me!

Mr. Lihuamu's comment section is so lively, it smells like taking off (sniff)

Skill: Swallow (can continuously regenerate levels, up to nine levels) Effect: You can choose the ability of a Shilain to become your own ability. You can only choose one at the first level, up to nine. Moreover, you can also improve a certain physical quality by swallowing Shilain, or you can choose to swallow Shilain to improve your existing abilities. And how to level up Devouring also depends on devouring a certain amount of Shilain. These data will be collectively measured by how many authors there are. Don't write too fast, or it will jump out later.

Magnetic control, similar to Magneto's ability, can control magnetic fields and metals.

Hillein Ability Design Competition, with the ability to travel through time and space, designed a 100% lottery winning machine.