The Pillars of Troubled Times

I fell in love with (ง •̀_•́)ง from the very beginning. Different from any family background, the protagonist comes from a poor background and comes from modern times. Even though he is like this now, he must have pride in his heart and will have fighting spirit in the future! At first, I looked at the Southern and Northern Dynasties from station b, Anzhou Mu, and I was curious about that period of history, so I searched. But the feeling is: the northern country is a hundred thousand miles away, and it is full of barbarism. Ai Ye Hao: aristocratic family, clan Lin: Hao Palace, luxurious residence. The Hu tribe in the north, the civilians who were killed by swords flowed in rivers of blood The noble tribe in the south, the civilians who suppressed them with power were ruined and their families were destroyed. So the identity of the protagonist is Even though he was born in poverty, he still has red blood, and he has Qilin in his heart, and he will achieve great things When the time comes: I will be given the title of Lin, and I will not move. At that time: Hu Dao is sharp and Hu Jiajian is not afraid. With heaven and earth in mind, I marched from the north to the south, proud of the power sword, and completely unafraid!

But Brother Mi Gaoyang still pays too much attention to his own technology reproducibility and technical dimensionality reduction, and is too entangled in whether he is an industrialist party. In Sailing Against the Current, it was his technical ability that directly crushed Yang Jian, but the problem is that success and failure also come from selecting materials. I read "Walking Against the Current" in Honor Reading, and at that time I was scolding the free chapter (Assassination of Zhou Diyu) Wen Bin's article), I didn't know why I cursed at the time. I may have figured it out later. If your protagonist (Yu Wenwen) really had such a destiny, you should not have been the emperor long ago. There is no logic in reality, but if you are dead in real history, how can you convince others if you don't seek the greatest logic in your fantasy? The biggest turning point in a character's life is written as a luck-based co-optation, which is really a pity for a good subject. And if I remember correctly about the war with Yang Jian, the protagonist never met Yang Jian before starting up and confronting him, so he couldn't take advantage of the situation or make plans. In the end, he broke the situation by rubbing technological items. I really don't understand whether you worship the greatness of the industrial chain or you are just a worshiper of the Technological Cult (Ohm Messiah). It seems that Mr. Mi Gaoyang has also closed the book, so I wish Mr. Mi Gaoyang will make money every day with his skills.

The writing is okay, but the main character takes more than 600 chapters to become emperor. Other than that, I feel very unhappy. The protagonist has been developing for more than 20 years. He has strong soldiers and horses, and epoch-making firearms and cannons, which are enough to sweep the world. But every day, he was scheming in the small country of the Southern Dynasties, and he was so forbearing that he sacrificed his daughter's happiness to marry the little emperor, and then acted like Wang Mang to usurp the Han Dynasty. The small structure is sighing. When we are born in troubled times, the emperor will fight with strong soldiers and strong horses to bring peace to the world. Those who usurp power and ascend to the throne are despicable and are shackled by the old dynasty. They are not allowed to be kings...

I really can't stand it anymore after seeing Chapter 60. The author wants to emphasize the difficulties of the bottom. It's okay, but it can't just be written about this. Over and over again, again and again, endlessly. Just watch the news about the struggles of the bottom in the great era. Why read novels?

Is this an auxiliary text? The name and introduction look like this? It is better for the Northern and Southern Dynasties to strive for hegemony. I feel that there are few unifying monarchs worthy of assistance.

There is nothing else but science and technology. 80% Of the text is about science and technology. Artillery and phonographs have been invented. Brother, don't forget that it is a historical text. The historical text should be the original version of the cold weapon era. Although it is a time travel, please do not incorporate too much modern technology and ideas.

Coming from the previous book, support the author

I can't understand these two chapters. Shouldn't the protagonist fish in troubled waters and take advantage of the chaos to develop? How can he be Guo Ziyi? What can Xiao Liang do to support him? The protagonist still doesn't understand? Still making Kongming lanterns? This thing is killing people now, let alone back then? Isn't this a white dragon fish suit? Gambling with your own life and that of the prince? Why do I feel like this so-called climax is bringing down my wits? Doesn't it turn out that he is quite stubborn?

Author, I've read about eighty chapters and I can't stand it anymore. If you write about making money, I can understand that the rest is okay. But if you write about pig's feet being slaves, you can't think of a plot to advance the plot? Nowadays, most reading books are for reasonable enjoyment! Enjoyableness comes before reasonableness, how can you make money if you always make readers unhappy! ! ! Originally, I thought I had found something I could watch, but after you reviewed this, I read the comments again and decided to give it up. The writing was acceptable, and the plot failed to find the balance between fun and reasonable. It was tasteless, and it was a pity to abandon it. It was useless.

The author has now led the turning point of this book, so you should pay attention! But don't let the protagonist try to establish a constitutional monarchy in the Northern and Southern Dynasties. Constitutional monarchy is undoubtedly suicide. There are some things, so don't invent things that are too advanced. People may not accept them, such as trains, steam engines, etc., There is no need. The author, Wang Mang's lessons learned from the past 🙂🙂🙂

I have read both books about the protagonist. I can say that the writing is good and the historical background is also good. It's just that the concept and characterization are very poor. One is that the novel is written in a messy manner, with no system. The protagonist has no idea what he is going to do. He struggles repeatedly, and is passive every time. He has little success but fails again.

I thought the author wrote this kind of opening to show that Taizu was so domineering that he dared to change the world, but I didn't expect that he would become Sima Yi as he wrote it. In other words, it was worse than Sima Yi. In that era, having no relatives was equivalent to having no basic base. If the protagonist did not move, people's hearts would be scattered. Once the protagonist died, everything would be over.

Please, author, this is a story about hegemony, not about farming. You just turned it into a story about fighting for hegemony and a story about farming. Don't you think your plot has been dragging out lately? I know you want to lay a solid foundation for the protagonist. During the Northern and Southern Dynasties, it was a troubled time. If you want the protagonist to develop, you can wait until the protagonist has mastered the highest power of Nanliang before developing. No matter what you do, I really can't read it. You can even invent cement during the Southern and Northern Dynasties. I think the author has a really big imagination.

If you want to truly reflect the tragic issues of the times in the Southern and Northern Dynasties, Pig's Feet can be written in many aspects. For example, the experiences of supporting characters can also be written out, and the same thing applies. Avoid the plot being too deep and the development being too slow. You are almost writing historical facts. You pig's feet are a master at sucking monsters. I know that the author wanted to write about a true social form of the Southern and Northern Dynasties. But you can't be so aggressive that you almost get killed by using the wolf's trotters over and over again. If it weren't for the halo of the pig's trotters, the pig's trotters would have died long ago. Are the Northern and Southern Dynasties a regression of democracy at the bottom of feudal society? In particular, the Liang Kingdom in the Southern Dynasties directly regressed to the era of slavery.

It's so cruel, life is already difficult. I can't stand it anymore!

Personally, I suggest changing the title of the book because it is too different from the introduction. Choose one of these three: raising fish in troubled times, fishing in troubled times, or selling fish in troubled times.

The writing details are quite good. The history is probably OK The specific analysis is a mess The political game is too taken for granted, thinking that it is following a "reason". The protagonist is distorted, the plot is patchwork, and the history is specious. This book is not writing history, but using history to write plot.

Sanwen bamboo tube rice, buy three get one free, is it enough for the rice? The meal is enough for an adult, at least 2 taels, plus the cost of the yellow catfish, as well as condiments, oil and salt are the most basic ones. Is this cheap? Can we still cut bamboo manually and make bamboo tubes at a cost of less than 10 yuan? Don't take many things for granted, it's too lax The protagonist, as an adult who has traveled through time, simplifies everything he does, which is completely inconsistent with the setting The author should think about it carefully

I don't know how to evaluate the author's book. I said it was well written, but the plot was too slow, fragmented, and incoherent, causing readers to lose motivation to continue subscribing. Let's talk about poor writing. This kind of writing will not make people feel tired and can keep people fresh all the time. I hope the author can find a balance between the two!

This book is a masterpiece in the early and mid-term, and it is no different from the early and mid-term of Qin Li in July. However, the book changed a little bit in the middle and later periods. The first author abandoned the rigorous setting. For example, inventions and systems were too advanced and unrealistic! The protagonist in the book became a semi-idealist, which gave me the feeling that it was a pity to throw away and tasteless chicken. The second author's writing style is good, Dahao is good, and the characters and supporting roles are good. The half-written and half-white article is not obviously obscure and difficult to understand. This is a skill that 60 to 70% of the starting point authors do not have. The various supporting characters in the book gave me a sense of realism, such as the fat boy, the eleventh son, Huang Ling and Huang's three brothers and sisters, etc. It is a pity that Qi Emperor Gaoyang's character was not well written before he was given a box lunch, which is also strange. Overall, I gave up on this book. We have a long way to go, but we will see you again when we are destined. I hope to read your next masterpiece. Come on, author, your writing style will make you a god one day.

It didn't look good in the later period, and I became a dog for the emperor.

The author just writes for his own pleasure and abuses the literary youth. No wonder he rushes to the street. Reading a little bit can make people popular.

Will the author come to open a new book again? I hope you can open a new book, but it is best not to do it full-time. You can open it when you have leisure time. It is too difficult to make money writing books full-time in the historical district.

Author, you have really faded out of sight now. Both of your books have disappeared from the rankings. Now that you publish a new book, it will definitely be a hit. You'd better work hard.

Did the author stop writing? I only started to understand the history of the Southern and Northern Dynasties after reading your book. Nowadays, most books on history focus on the Southern and Northern Dynasties.

You don't plan to publish your new book.

Technology can be improved, but we can't go too far. Otherwise, I will develop it for fifty years and everyone will have an AK47. You can fight me with a hammer 🙂

What about the new book? It's been several years. May book lovers live a long life😭

It's a pity to write about the Northern Wei Dynasty. If Emperor Xiaowen had lived longer or had one or two generations of heroes, the world would have been unified a hundred years ago.

This is the real cannibalistic society