The Ancestor Emerges from His Coffin

Why don't you understand that there is no future for you to write original works? Come back and write about Naruto!

Siyang's imaginative book designs are always interesting! Come on originality! But maybe it's the rhythm of the writing? Maybe it's some settings? Maybe it's because the events of the ancestor's coming out of the coffin, the player loading the file, and the demon god's reappearance happened too closely, which made the first four chapters not a good read before the world view was fully developed. It even feels a little confusing because the characters haven't been erected yet. It wasn't until the end of reading that I felt the familiar taste of Siyang, and it became more exciting. It's okay for those of us old readers who have read Siyang's original fans. But for new readers, the early pace is too fast. If you read it in a blink of an eye, you will easily lose interest and abandon the book. . After all, there is a difference between fan fiction and original work. Even if the supporting characters are not carefully written in the fan fiction, everyone can make up the image. If the original work is not successful in shaping the characters, the events will happen too quickly and it will feel a bit like gobbling up the food. Finally, I hope Siyang's new book will achieve good results, come on!

A tall building rises from the ground, a landmark building, made by me≧▽≦

Well, the introduction issue can only be corrected after seven days of review. I will correct it in two days. Thank you for your criticism and correction. Also, when it comes to publishing a single chapter in Laoshu, I thought that after changing the contract status, it has 50,000 to 60,000 words, at least everyone can invest in it after reading it, and then I will call you. Hehe, thank you for your concern.

This book can be said to be very exciting for me. Before the turning point, Chen Guang and Prince Jiang Xiang Ning, who was a loser in life, felt a kind of release of repression when they appeared. The rhythm was perfectly controlled. I was really high. What is a bit regretful is the death of the passerby character Guo Daneng. Feng Mo is a character who appears for Chen Guang, a foil, and Guo Daneng is even more of a foil. He is a character who appears to reflect Feng Mo's badness, and everything in him that has good expectations for the future will become evidence of Feng Mo's heinous crimes. But when I watched it, I just cared about the light of this supporting character. His death was too humble. He could have had a bright future with his girlfriend who loved him, but he died for this reason. Then Feng Mo died. How should I put it? Generally speaking, this kind of plot similar to revenge will make people very comfortable, but after Feng Mo died, I only felt a touch of regret and indignation (?) Feng Mo's death... It's hard to evaluate, it can be said to be death. It was so enjoyable, but I also think he shouldn't have died like this. He deserved to live on the street, be bullied, become disabled, and eventually go crazy and starve to death or die of illness (the arrangement of God the Father (accurate theory)), and even be able to show his ugly appearance before death. This kind of disgustingly evil villain dies too simply and is also unpleasant. Maybe we can only blame the monster clan for not being too fast, which caused such people and things to appear. Writing my thoughts, I don't mean to point out the author. The author must know better than me about writing books Finally, to sum up, in the past few chapters, it's really cool for her mother to open the door for Shuang. It feels so good

I found out that all the people posting here are trainees, and they even opened privacy. I came to Qidian. Com for 6 or 7 years and became a senior member or ordinary member. I watched pirated versions and came to the genuine version to fool around. 😅

"I heard that the second son of the Xia family was attacked by the Marten King!" "Yes, I heard that the Marten King was seriously injured and the Marten King took refuge with the Rat King. He originally wanted to sow the evil rat holy soul in Master Shun, but Master Shun resisted desperately and escaped..." A few people were whispering at the small tea stall. In this era of lack of entertainment, most people can only rely on gossip to relax themselves. A figure wearing a bamboo hat stopped in front of the tea stall. He was wearing a brocade robe. Although his face could not be seen, his skin was very white and his hands did not look like those who needed to work often. ——It was Xia Yi who had finished wiping out the demon spies hidden in Fushan City. "Boss, let's have a bowl of tea." Xia Yi said after putting out three copper coins. The people at the next table were still chattering, Xia Yi took a sip of tea and admitted that she was not in a good mood. As soon as I came back, I heard this kind of news... After quenching his thirst, Xia Yi hit the road again. His mood was not wonderful. Originally, Fushan City had wiped out a large number of human traitors, which made him furious. But before he got home, he heard the news that his second brother was seriously injured. I just hope everything is false and just a rumor. Unconsciously, Xia Yi sped up. "My legs hurt after sitting on a horse for a day. I wish I could make trains and steam cars someday. It's a pity that I'm not an engineering major. I only know the principles but not the methods..." After getting off the horse, Xia Yi raised his head and looked at the door of his house. "He's back, the third young master is back!" The boy who first noticed him hurriedly ran towards the house. Xia Yi ignored the happy boy and walked quickly towards the east chamber. That's the direction of the second brother's room. Although he was prepared, Xia Yi's heart sank when he saw his second brother's weak appearance. "Second brother!" He walked forward quickly, staring at the second brother's face, with a hint of gloom in his eyes. "I heard that you were attacked by the Marten King?" He asked. Xia Shun's condition is not good, he looks very weak now due to his injury. After being injured at home for many days, his skin has become whiter and he has gained weight. Just by looking at the flesh that has grown back, you can tell how long he has been injured. "I was careless." Xia Shun sighed, "The Diao King is really cunning. I originally caught a whole litter of its pups and planned to kill them, but unexpectedly it sent someone with a message saying that ten times the number of human slaves could be exchanged for those younger ones. I thought that the life of those human slaves in the demon clan must be very difficult, so I agreed to this request." As he said that, he bitterly agreed. He laughed: "I'm not surprised that most of the people were sown with the Holy Soul of the Evil Rat. I also unlocked the Holy Soul of the Evil Rat for these people. Who would have known... Many people were not forced to sow the Holy Soul of the Evil Rat at all. They were voluntary... In the end, they were stabbed by them." "The Diao King, right?" Xia Yi asked. It doesn't matter who made the mistake, just destroy the demon clan! "Don't be impulsive!" Xia Shun understood his brother's thoughts in an instant, "Your strength is limited, and you will die if you go! You don't need to avenge me! As for those humans... I also hope you don't have resentment towards your fellow humans. After all, everyone is different." "I know." I understand..." After saying that, he stood up: "I will be fine, only fools rush forward. Isn't this the first time you understand, brother, that I am such a reckless person?" "As for kindness... I will maintain my kindness for the future of mankind, but..." After Xia Shun breathed a sigh of relief, the word "but" made him think again. "I believe that the first step to being kind is to get rid of the people who make you unkind." Xia Yi walked out of the room and closed the door. "If the unkind people disappear, I believe everyone will become kind..." Xia Yi then visited her parents and returned to the shop. In the shop, smoke filled the air, and the shopkeeper was holding a cigarette, shaking his cooling fan, and leaning comfortably on a soft chair. Seeing Xia Yi coming, the shopkeeper quickly straightened his face and smoked his cigarette: "Third Young Master!" "Is there any problem with the family's business recently?" Xia Yi nodded and asked. "Nothing happened." The shopkeeper said. "Bring the account book over and let me take a look." The shopkeeper took out the account book and Xia Yi started to look through it. "Third Young Master, actually there are some small matters..." The shopkeeper spoke hesitantly. "What?" Xia Yi asked. "Now that the cigarette industry is making huge profits, many farmers have stopped growing food and started growing tobacco leaves on a large scale. The master said this is not feasible. Let us reduce the purchase of tobacco leaves and reduce the scale of cigarette processing..." "Dad is right." Xia Yi nodded. "But the profits from cigarettes are too high now. If we cut off cigarettes, the Xia family's annual income will lose more than half! At first, many people were rushing to buy those glass products, but now no one wants them..." "This is a problem." Yi narrowed his eyes, "Have you heard of mink?" "Huh?" The shopkeeper was at a loss. He knew about mink, but mink... "This is an industry that is more profitable than cigarettes, and it does not harm the interests of human beings." He smiled in confusion, "Please start spreading the news now that you want to buy mink fur at a high price. I drew some patterns and you gave it to the people in the clothing workshop to see if they can make it. Having said that, after the cheongsam, the clothing workshop has not had new products for a long time..." "But... Does anyone buy clothes made of mink fur?" The shopkeeper hesitated. Hunting mink demons is not something ordinary people can do, and a piece of clothing requires a large amount of mink skin. If used to make clothes, the cost of the clothes will become extremely high. "Look, don't ignore women's love for beauty." Xia Yi squinted his eyes, "Inform the girls in Tianxiang Pavilion and ask them to pick out the ones with better figures. I will hold a beauty contest in a month. The winner will not only get one hundred taels of gold, but also a mink coat sponsored by the Xia family." Three days later, rumors began to spread in the market that mink coats can nourish skin and make people look younger and more elegant. A month later, the beauty pageant began. No one knows that this is the beginning of a great event and the beginning of the decline of a prosperous race...

I was so confused, why did everyone leave after reading the beginning? Although the front is a bit messy, the back is okay and nothing particularly dangerous.

When I first got to know Siyang, it was the real Siyang. If you want to make an update, you will make an update, if you want to add an update, you will make an update. What now? Four, three, two, one? Encountered unexpectedly, not sure which one it was. There were even times when there were tailless sheep! The dignified Four Sheep cannot even guarantee four updates.

Hello everyone, I am your old friend Wenxu. Welcome to Tailless Sheep's new book. This is the fourth Tailless Sheep book. Character guaranteed. Speaking of, what our tailless sheep are best at is comedy. Please wait and see what happens next