Elves Come to the Real World

Energy gems are so inconsistent! Why are they called energy gems when they are obviously energy cubes?

First of all, the biggest poisonous point is the problem of the system. If the system has a personality, it is too poisonous. It doesn't mean that it can't be written like this, but let's look at your own performance. Most readers can't accept it. Secondly, it is the character of the protagonist. Although he is more passionate, readers still prefer to see him with a personality that is selfish to outsiders and selfless to his own people. Can someone like you solve all the elves' eating problems? ? ? It is normal in nature for the weak to eat the strong. Don't think about so many children. I almost saw this and came out to give you some advice. Third, I actually think this hang-up is okay. It's not as big as I imagined. Some books start with writing the system, but then the system doesn't come out for hundreds of chapters. So my suggestion to you about the system is to upgrade it step by step. No matter how many hundreds of chapters you write, the system can be used. The main thing is that the system cannot be intelligent. The last thing is, don't write about younger brothers and sisters. It's okay if you write one, but it would be too messy to write three. Author, you are not strong enough to write the feeling. Try to have as few plots as possible that you cannot control

Meow Meow is unplayable at the beginning. The commoner elves Bobo are much better than Meow Meow. If Bobo can't even be raised, then Big Sting Bee or Bad Butterfly can barely be played at first hand, but Meow Meow has no sense of expectation at all. Then the second elf is supposed to be at least the level of Yusanjia when the first one has been mixed up. If you are more ruthless, you can use the opportunity to be a quasi-god. Apart from being given a system, the protagonist here is really not much different from the soy sauce NPC on the roadside.

After reading two chapters, I saw Meow Meow at the beginning and immediately ran away. You can just choose any family bird. Before I was sure that I had a golden finger, I chose this thing to play with a hammer.

It's about classification. You've all seen that my book is actually classified into game articles. I was wondering if my grades were so bad and whether it had something to do with my classification. Therefore, I am also considering starting a new book and continuing to write it. That is to say, I will change the category and name, but the content will remain the same as this book. I'm confused ~ I'd like to ask the wise readers to give me some advice.

This book should be renamed, My interaction with the system is abnormal

Meow meow is okay, but I can't fucking accept the big-billed bird.

To be honest, I don't know much about the way the protagonist communicates with the system. The protagonist is a piece of shit if he doesn't have a system. The system trains him without asking for anything in return. I feel like the protagonist has no gratitude to the system.

Author, I think your writing is okay, but don't use too many plug-ins. If you are too stupid, you will become the Long Aotian of the elf novel. Like the ones I saw on the Internet, you will be given a quasi-god at the beginning, Yu Sanjia, and after a few months, you will evolve into a quasi-king, king, etc. I was sick to death after watching it.

The settings of the elves are missing two items: qualifications and potential, which is a bit unaccustomed to me.

Pig's feet are so naive. Is the author also so naive? Then implement it, don't put it on the shelves, and use love to generate electricity.

There are too many elves. I think we should cultivate them first, otherwise their strength will not increase, and they should not be too high-profile or they will be remembered. Because the protagonist is an ordinary person. Such a person has so many elves and they are all very good, which will naturally make people jealous.

After reading 60 chapters, I can see that the male protagonist written by the author can only make up for his thoughts and deceive his mind. Most of the content is very watery, and he feels very unconscious and easily immersed in his own world. He always feels how popular he is. There are many starting points about women, who are always blushing and shy, and have long breasts and thighs. . . . It really made me vomit. The male protagonist is written like a hungry ghost in a pornographic film. His brain is not very easy to use. It is normal to just write about the bond. It is too difficult to see a normal male protagonist these days.

Obviously it was very to my liking at the beginning, but in the next sixty or seventy chapters... Oh, let's wait for the author's next book. The system has too much presence, and the plug-in function is too powerful, especially the licking!

I think the snake pattern bear is good, it has picking up properties, and it also comes with its own treasures

I read two chapters, what the hell is this?

In fact, the writing is okay. It focuses on daily communication with the elves, but it is not very exciting. It seems that there is no passion, and the elves captured are all unpopular.

Author, do you accept a word? (Actually, I hope to accept) three sisters. The following is the solution. (I will give you a reward of 100 starting coins and two recommendation votes. People who are wise don't tell secrets) In fact, I feel that the author can use a sample to write. The protagonist is not a biological child, but was picked up. One advantage of writing like this is that your previous emotional descriptions of Yi Shu, Er Shu, and San Shu can make the three of them the heroines. After all, they are not related by blood. There is another way. The protagonist obtains bloodline (preferably grass bloodline) in the system store. The special ability: power of grass is to cleanse his own bloodline (no blood relationship), create a family, and marry three sisters. I have another situation, that is, I was intercepted on the way to participate in a competition abroad. Fortunately, the system came to help in the end, but it was still a step too late. The protagonist died. Later, a feather appeared, the protagonist was resurrected, and his bloodline also changed. However, he did not have his own bloodline before. He gained special abilities: the power of fire, created a family , and married three sisters. I also have another one. The protagonist goes abroad to participate in a competition, encounters a secret realm, and disappears for two years. The three sisters and parents shed tears every day, but in these two years, the protagonist's strength reaches the level of a king, and a wave of dragon kings return.

At the beginning, Meow Meow felt weird, and I felt Meow Meow was so ugly. .

I think the author can choose some more handsome elves. Some civilian elves are also handsome. Whether they are strong or not is one thing. Being handsome is a matter of a lifetime...

Can't it be changed to an ability cube? The gems are a bit weird.

In Sword and Shield, Larulus's legs are really long after his giant transformation. I want to lick them 😏

I don't think Eevee is better than Meow Meow.

Is there a female protagonist? Is it a single heroine?

It would be much better if you don't need system dialogue

A system without a novice gift pack is not a good system.

How to take care of too many elves? An ordinary family not only has many elves, but also cultivates them very well. Aren't you afraid of being missed? You must know that there are many bad people in the world, and as for good people, people's hearts are sinister

Your update is too slow.

The system is too verbose and watery.

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