Don't Treat Your Senior Brother as Your Boss

The differences between ordinary people and normal authors and water gods: 1. How ordinary people write: I put the battery into the flashlight. 2. The normal author's writing method: I stuffed two AA batteries into the somewhat worn flashlight. , How to write Water God: Now, I have an old-fashioned flashlight in my hand. Holding it, I felt an uneasy feeling in my heart. I looked at it and found that, like other old-fashioned flashlights, it had a cover on the hip that could be opened by rotating. When I opened the lid, as I expected, I was speechless when I faced the empty space inside. My brows furrowed tightly, and the feeling of wanting to commit suicide by throwing myself into a lake hit me from all directions. Because I was faced with a difficult choice - go downstairs and buy two batteries, or find two batteries at home. Where is life without trouble? Although it is daytime and I haven't had breakfast yet, as an old-fashioned flashlight, it doesn't have...

Light the incense first, tsk tsk, I just want to see what the author who was sacrificed looks like.

Don't treat Dadai as a boss 😏😏😏

The early setting of this book is good, but the control of plot advancement is a little weak, which makes it look a bit too hard.

Fighting, Wang Xiamo

Let me tell you how you feel. There may be something wrong with the protagonist's thinking. Why should he kidnap the person who sent the message? It's not necessary. The protagonist's idea should be to carry forward his sect and strive to be the strongest, but the court won't allow it, right? It would be better to just take the junior brothers and sisters to develop outwards. A continent cannot be just one country. There should be places that the country cannot control, and you can go and develop there to the point where you can compete with the country. It's just my own thoughts, don't comment 🙏

I came here from Lord I don't want to work overtime and read the first chapter! I just want to know, was the sacrifice to heaven successful? Is py okay? Does it hurt? A certain salted fish said that you are a victim

This book is a bit exciting to read, but the updates are a bit too slow. I hope the author will continue to work hard and not make your readers wait for your updates every day.

Vote to favorites and read the book, and I will update it by the way.

It doesn't matter if you go slower or whatever, as long as you don't rush and write words that you will regret. Slow work makes the most of careful work. "Jian Ba ​​Shan He" is really one of my favorite novels. I hope this can become the best among the best.

Such a book, I think the storyline is very good. ......(10,000 Words omitted here)

The total of 4 books is less than 1 million. I'm afraid of you, eunuch.

My head hurts and I want some kind of activity 😌

The first few chapters of the author are a little bit off, what can I say, the name is too weird, not a joke, a friend, and I really don't know how to name it. I think it's better to just use it directly in games or novels like Xianxia, ​​etc. Well, you know what to think. Don't use the name "Emperor's Sword Technique". It's too dramatic. Think about it. In the previous sentence, a man in white clothes said "Emperor's Sword Technique". It was awkward. The name of the person is acceptable. After all, some novels use funny names as one of the highlights. The names of moves and other names are too dramatic and uncomfortable to read, but the overall theme I think is pretty good. Come on, author.

I just want no eunuchs 😄

Martial arts is really hot in 2020

The author writes well, but the characters are a bit invincible and level up too quickly. If you write like this, it is easy to get tired of reading and get tired of similar routines.

It is recommended that the first three chapters be changed. It gives people a painful feeling. The proportion of the plot is wrong. You can guess the plot just by looking at the title. It is better to just explain the background in a straightforward way.

The beast looks at the sword, haha, I won't look at it anymore

What about today's chapter? Have you been caught?