The Military Advisor Is Mighty

To be honest, the author's descriptions of war, commanders, strategies, political struggles, and business wars are very rough in many places, and there are shadows of the Romance of the Three Kingdoms in many places. Although the protagonist's commander reached 110, it took a long time to fight against more than 90 people, such as Tang Niu 110. It doesn't matter if someone who is a few points worse than him has hundreds of rounds of battles. The protagonist has 13 points more than Sima Fa 97 and suffers a lot. If you say he has high intelligence, the protagonist has 110. If I remember correctly, the intelligence of the female officer behind the protagonist should be 108 or 106. There is a book that gives her a bonus. It will not be worse than Sima Fa, but there are many cuts in the plot at the end of the novel, which gives a feeling of forcing the plot, so the design should be more reasonable at the beginning. Of course, it may be that the framework set up at the beginning is not rigorous enough, but this is also a normal phenomenon. Then, if it must be written like this, it must be Some war steps are described more clearly, so that the stagnant state of the battlefield can be more clearly reflected, and then described from multiple aspects to reflect the resistance to the protagonist's offensive. For example, political struggles, business wars, espionage wars, aristocratic families, etc. Many places that have been written before have been weakened. As for war fighting, a lot of itrelies on theology. It is really about battlefield strategy drills, military material preparation, transportation competition, etc. There are still many differences. For example, the writings on the Palace of Wei and Seizing the World are very good. The author can learn from it. In fact, you can see from the front to the back that the author is constantly revising. Come on, writing itself is a process of improving oneself through constant practice.

First of all, I have to say that I have now read Chapter 69 and can't help but come over and say a few words. Everyone comes here to read online novels, so let's be blunt: the buying point of this book is that the protagonist is not someone who has ambitions to be an emperor, but at the same time it guarantees that the protagonist will not be killed after becoming successful (Princess Shang!). But there is a problem here: the protagonist has a strong desire to control. There is no problem in Cha Yiyi, but people who have a strong desire to control are not suitable to be ministers. Why? You have to take care of everything and protect your own interests, so who will protect your lord's interests? Princess Shang is not the reason, but the protagonist's psychology and behavior are extremely dissatisfied, and the sense of disobedience is too strong (unless later on, the heroine is borrowed to gain power). It is absolutely disgusting to want to be a courtier under such circumstances. Secondly, so far (from what I have seen), the protagonist has not shown any desire for a certain thing. There is a clear goal of survival and unity. But the former cannot make readers feel worried or empathic (the author himself said that the protagonist is fine), and the latter is too high to see the edge, which makes readers feel that the protagonist is just doing whatever he wants. I can do whatever I want to do - just play games, yes, just play games. Please, write a novel about traveling through a different world. Even the game components are systematized. Can the protagonist be like a normal person? What's more, a homebody? Even if the protagonist is mentally ill at the beginning, I can accept it. What does this feeling of game life make those of us who read online novels (how many literary and wealthy people are there?) Think? Oh, I have lived for so long, and the protagonist has completely denied it? The game is just a game, and a different world is a different world. Don't be confused. (I feel so uncomfortable anyway😭) Furthermore, to put it bluntly, the upper limit of everyone's IQ in the novel is the upper limit of the author's IQ. I'm not trying to say what's wrong with the author. After all, no one is perfect. What I want to say is, can the protagonist not do something that we, the readers, can't understand at all? ——At least explain it from the protagonist's perspective! Like how it looks like doing this, but how it actually works. The author can absolutely despise the reader's IQ, as long as what you say is correct, otherwise the reader will despise you in turn. The author will bring in the protagonist when writing, so I feel that some silly protagonists are not wrong, but after a while, I will realize that it is really embarrassing, because it is impossible to really bring it in completely when bringing it in, and you need to come back to check. Otherwise, why do classics have to be changed over and over again, because bringing in will cause problems, and so will the logic. I don't know that the author is not clear about the core and selling points of his novels (to be honest, I have also written some short novels and novellas, although they are not online novels, but I still understand them in general), but my feeling is: this online article itself is a good idea, but there are many small poisonous points that constantly disgust you. In other words, the general direction is right, but many details make people feel that the author is divided and against himself, which is very contradictory and uncomfortable. So, "Why did His Majesty commit rebellion?!" ———— I saw that many chapters had readers' opinions, but it was obvious that the author didn't care (I definitely saw it, there are messages from the author and others below). The author is the master of his own novel and the tyrant of all characters. He should not be swayed by readers. But the problem is that the author must know exactly what he is doing. In some places, hey. Lightning avoidance: This is not to start a fight, this is not to vent negative emotions, please be sensible. Everyone's perception is different, please be tolerant of different ideas that are not extreme. Emotional readers are asked to take ten deep breaths before speaking. Finally: Shameless and bold in pursuit of excellence. (～￣▽￣)→))*￣▽￣*)O

Another math teacher taught by a physical education teacher! The author should be careful. In Chapter 5, the protagonist's command is 69. In Chapter 18, after adding 9 points, it becomes 72! ! ! It's wrong to say that your math was taught by a physical education teacher! ! !

The author's introduction is a bit too perfunctory. You can't tell anything just by looking at the introduction.

The author quickly speeds up the process and kills all the Liang family, asking for favors and asking for retribution. He wants everything. He almost treats the protagonist as a domestic slave. I have saved them several times, but I am still not grateful at all. I think that the protagonist, as his subordinate, will be fine if he does the right thing, but be beheaded if he does the wrong thing. Little did he know that the protagonist only stayedfor gratitude.

The protagonist, who is invincible in both intelligence and military strength, becomes a subordinate to a woman? ? ? Your woman is the emperor and the protagonist is the queen? ? ?

At the beginning of the server, he was rescued by the Liang family. There is no need to be so cruel and give others military instructions. If you don't leave even after being scolded, you're a bitch, just say goodbye.

The origin of the protagonist: Jia Zhengjin got up and walked to the corner, only to see the young man lying on the sofa with his head up and motionless. He stretched out his hand to try to breathe, but there was nothing! "This guy hasn't slept for at least four days, and his body function has reached its limit. He is hopeless!" Yin Tianguan came to him, "Such an incident happened on the first day of opening. What a bad luck!" "It doesn't matter!" Jia Zhengjin shrugged, "By the way, you knew he was going to die, so you didn't let me stop him just now?" "This is destined and cannot be changed." Yin Tianguan shrugged, "Hurry up and call the police to deal with it! The strange stories here are probably going to continue." "It doesn't matter! Anyway, I have guests from other worlds to fill the scene." Jia Zhengjin suddenly thought of something and raised the corners of his mouth slightly, "The people from the underworld shouldn't come so soon, right?" "What do you want to do?" Yin Tianguan asked. "Hehe~ Don't you think it's interesting?" Jia Zhengjin took out a wishing stone and handed it to Yin Tianguan, "You can make a cameo in DF10019 again! What a coincidence, this person seemed to have something serious on his mind, and he died suddenly here..." "Are you bored?" "Of course it's boring! How about you get out of the way and I'll do it myself." As he spoke, he pushed Yin Tianguan away and transformed into a man in a black suit. With his fingers raised, the young man's soul appeared. Soul looked confused and looked around in confusion. "Ning Ze! I am a ghost agent from the underworld, number DF10019. I came here specifically to see you today!" Jia Zhengjin smiled and waved at the other party...

The author can search for astronomy online. It was also important to observe the sky when fighting in ancient times.

I thought you knew something about Sun Tzu's Art of War, but I didn't expect that everything he wrote was a joke! And a bunch of Japanese words!

This novel is so popular that I stand on my head and eat an Ollie.

This book has few poisonous points and is attractive enough to keep reading. As for how good it is, I'm too lazy to go into detail. It can only be like this, like this, like this, Xiu'er, do you understand?

If this book is not popular, it will be intolerable to heaven. If this post is not accurate, it is a crime worthy of death.

The author should change the introduction.

If this book is not popular, it will be unacceptable This post is not worthy of death.

I couldn't stand it anymore when I saw it. Author, you made the protagonist look like a wolf. Did you just stop treating him as a human being? It feels like the protagonist is in a single-player game, and everyone is only concerned about whether it is useful or not. There is no emotion at all. I feel like I can't stand it anymore after watching it. As long as you are a normal person with upright views, you may also think about these things, but I believe that if there is some emotion in it, then you can truly live. Also, you have made the protagonist so cold-blooded, and you still have to help others to make fun of you.

If you are so awesome, why would you want to be a military advisor? Wouldn't it be nice to be a lord?

The author's book has a good beginning, and it's okay in the middle. But in the later stages, it really doesn't suit my taste. I personally think it's a bit toxic. Brothers, come on, I'll withdraw first.

Don't be foolish, it's still okay to read a harem novel, it's not too toxic, and the writing is okay. Compared with other system invincible streams that forcefully pretend to be B and get slapped in the face, this one is quite comfortable 😅😅😅

In fact, in the middle and later stages, I felt that his writing was a bit broken. I'll just look at the table of contents. Pick a directory that interests you.

I originally thought that I could become a king on my own, but I didn't expect to support a female protagonist in troubled times. It would be okay if there was a female protagonist in the article who succeeded. I have said in the article that no female protagonist has ever been emperor since ancient times. There is only one Wu Zetian in China for five thousand years. She was still in her sixties and killed many people. She only became emperor for a few years.

I'm going to go, after writing like this, there are still so many people washing the floor, I'm really convinced, I'll leave first, you can continue reading, my God

These dozens of chapters clearly show the origin, performance, and ending of "one general's incompetence burdens the three armies". In this era where aristocratic families determine the times and the royal power is extremely weak, the people are like ants, and it is rare to find a moment of peace.

Is this world low in martial arts or high in martial arts?

The writing is great But the protagonist's attitude is a bit too much hahahaha

I just read the first chapter, and the fandom isn't very high. The reviews for this chapter are true.

How should I put it? Anyway, this is the first time I have seen a book that has been paid but has not been included in the main story. I will not judge whether it is good or not. The protagonist has a high IQ but a low EQ.

The story of cultivating immortals and farming, the human race has no boundaries

Actually, apart from some minor flaws, it's still watchable. Anyway, I am short on books, and I was "impressed" by some "divine texts". Come on, author