Luo Zhiyuan of Devouring the Starry Sky

Hurry up and get Zhiyuan and Ai Chen together 😍

The newcomer is pretty good, but there are two fatal points. 1. Lack of logic: According to the time period, the Nuolanshan family fleet will invade the earth. Can you imagine that the protagonist is still a child of several years old and goes out into the universe alone, leaving the safety of the earth behind, stepping on the watermelon rind and going wherever he wants. The cosmic genius battle is even more outrageous. Luo Feng, Hong, and Lei Shen didn't participate? Luo Feng captured the golden-horned giant beast and was extremely talented. Babata would definitely let Luo Feng and the others sign up for the competition. The result? Luo Zhiyuan was the only one on earth to participate in the competition, and the child Luo Zhiyuan took Ai Chen's hand. That picture is so beautiful! 2. Lack of foreshadowing: You wrote such a thrilling match scene between geniuses in a dry manner, and there was not even a bystander shouting 666. If you think about the original work, the Black Dragon Mountain Empire's seed players were defeated one after another, creating a depressing atmosphere. When Luo Feng stood out and broke into the top 1,000 of Qianwu Universe Kingdom, the Black Dragon Mountain Empire was boiling. From the Emperor of the Black Dragon Mountain Empire to the people of the empire, everyone was cheering. Why is it so cool to see this? Foreshadowing! There is also the part about Chaos City Lord recruiting Luo Zhiyuan as a registered disciple, which was briefly mentioned. Without any foreshadowing, how can the protagonist appear to be awesome? Why does the Lord of Chaos City want to accept disciples? What is the status of the disciples of the Lord of Chaos City? Are any melon-eaters shocked? Does anyone have any comments? Have you ever been ridiculed or slapped in the face? …

I hope I can write as much as possible! The tickets have been presented.

Another eunuch that successfully devoured fellow fans.

When I saw the name Luo Zhiyuan, I thought at first that it was his father who traveled through time and became Luo Feng 😅 Later I realized that his father's name is Luo Hongguo, but the two names have the same style 😅😅

What a coincidence

In this book, the protagonist says that the food on Earth exceeds that of other worlds. I objected. But one person also refuted me that the delicacies of the earth must be better than those that swallow the stars. I don't want to say anything, I just want to say that I published something for him to see. In the original work.

The book reviews have been a lot busy these two days, which is very comfortable. Hehe~ I will try my best to write better, give me some time to grow, collect more, comment more, and vote more: P

The author currently updates about 4,000 times a day, but he still needs to practice more, since he is really not good enough. However, I still hope that the author will write better and better, and go straight to Sanjiang to reach the best products 😁😁😁

That's it? A eunuch? ? ? ?

As mentioned, I made a mistake yesterday and repeated the content in Chapter 104, causing everyone to waste money on books. I would like to sincerely apologize to everyone! I'm contacting the editor to see if I can make corrections or compensation. I'm so sorry to everyone, I'm extremely sorry!

Devouring fans are still relatively rare~~I like this kind of novel~but I feel that the protagonist is a bit silly and sweet. Learning so many skills and space skills can help his father Luo Feng~~Also, I feel that the protagonist has no trump cards at all and has revealed all his trump cards~~The protagonist also loves to show off.

Brother is on the shelves. Aren't you ready to make an update? Just one chapter is not even enough! Do you still want a monthly pass? You are making it impossible for me to vote with my monthly vote!​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​

I have to say that the fatal flaw is that Luo Zhiyuan lost his younger brother Luo Hai when he traveled back in time. Luo Feng has no descendants of his lineage and the population is thin. The descendants of Luo Feng's younger brother Luo Hua will carry forward BGI a few hundred years later. An Yuan wrote that Luo Feng's children have been born for several generations. You, my colleague, don't have any grandsons of Luo Feng at this time. I don't know how many Luo family members have been indirectly murdered. 30 Years in Chaos City is equal to 100 years in the outside world. Luo Feng's descendants were cut off whether Luo Zhiyuan or the outside world invaded here through his soul. In prehistoric terms, this is a huge cause and effect. Speaking of Luo Feng, poor man, he really doesn't have any descendants. This is a mistake. Author, have you not thought about this problem? Be careful if the future Lord Luo goes upstream to cause trouble for you. 😏

There are Emperor Cheng Yan, Wei Wen, Yang Wu, Jia Yi's grandson, Luo Kedi, and Zheng Di. Now there is another son of Luo Feng. Will there be Zhang Haobai, Luo Feng's parents, Luo Hua, Devouring Beast, Rong Jun, Wuka...

Brothers, it feels like it's been very deserted recently. Please leave more comments to make our place livelier. As long as you don't come up and curse at Lao Bai or Lao Bai's stories, I welcome them~

This introduction is poisonous to death! Anyone else watching?

This author really made me laugh when I saw this title. After watching 20 Changes of Swallowing the Starry Sky, the time travel actually happened to travel through Luo Feng's son. I couldn't stand it and made me laugh all day long.

Your introduction can poison people to death, but if you read the original author's book carefully, you will understand what "one certificate lasts forever"