The Navy Begins With Soldier Assault

The plot and writing are good, but there's one illogical point: the protagonist is already a carrier-based pilot, someone with a license to operate from aircraft carriers. Based on that alone, it's impossible for him to be deployed to ground forces for disaster relief! This is like using gold to pave the way! It's like using an atomic bomb to kill fish! Or a Dongfeng missile to deliver packages!

I think music can be a hobby, a way to relax, and doesn't need to be written about extensively, nor should it be the main theme, since it's a military-themed story. Some elements from "Fire Blue Blade" could also be added.

I was originally planning to watch it, but after seeing someone say that carrier-based pilots were being deployed to disaster relief efforts, I lost interest. I don't need a reason; unless the main character stops flying fighter jets, it's just bad news.

I'm currently on chapter 27. This book is a military-themed story, but embarrassingly, it doesn't make good use of precognition. Especially the part where Old A is tricked by Yuan Lang—he knows Fan Tiankeng knows about the testing, but he has no good countermeasures; all that information overload from later generations seems wasted. The Xia family part is truly cringe-worthy.

Good start, keep it up!

Do you even know what the navy does? You don't even know the most basic things about the navy, yet you dare to write about it. You're something else.

I couldn't continue after reading the first chapter; this protagonist is an idiot.

I can't take it anymore! This is toxic! Someone who's been on the battlefield and seen death actually got mentally unstable because of a plane crash? How fragile are you? And you're even writing military-themed articles? Pilots who can take off and land on aircraft carriers are people with exceptional mental fortitude. I understand people aren't as upset as you, but you're practically a deserter! Where were you all this time?

This is utterly nonsensical! I can't stand reading it!

You're basically attributing all the main characters from American movies to the main characters in novels!