I Became a Strong Person After Suffering a Loss

This book is pretty good. The first part looks pretty good, but it always feels a little depressing.

To be honest, the setting is quite interesting, but the plot outline is not well written. I can see that the author wants to make the life journey of these protagonists more difficult, but there are too many conflicts in the plot arrangement, which makes the later period (not really the later period, after all, it collapsed after only 50 chapters) become a bit toxic. At present, I have read Chapter 57. After seeing the current plot, let me give you an analysis of the plots of the last few chapters. Tianyi and her brother killed the fox demon. The fox demon ran away and possessed the Yan Po Army, leaving its aura in the Yan family. They tracked it down and found that it was in the Yan family (killed them without asking? I forcefully understood that they thought the human family had demonic aura and thought it was controlled by the demon clan?). After killing the people, no trace of the fox demon was found, and they found that there were still two people from the family outside. Then it was discovered that these two people had disappeared. As a public official, would you not report this matter? Would you look for these two people? Do you suspect that they ran away immediately after receiving the news? Moreover, the setting of the butcher family is also problematic. As a top-notch combat entity, these two people As soon as people arrived at the Yan Family to kill people, they found out. Did they find the aura of the demon soul when Yan Pojun broke through? And he didn't hear about the demon clan's conspiracy at all? He didn't care about the demon clan's affairs at all? They all took out the official documents, and they didn't believe what they said in the official documents. Just think that you didn't find it, just think that it didn't happen! And because he is an official, he feels it is a bit troublesome and just ignores it? After dealing with public officials for so many years, he has no understanding at all? He also has a son in the imperial capital, a transparent person? From this point of view, his son has a low position in the imperial capital and does not have much power. Moreover, an assassin family doesn't even have a news channel of its own (she has been tracking the demon soul for more than a day, and the Tu family has not received any information. The demon clan is causing trouble, and the federation has already received the wind. Tianyi said it before, without knowing it at all), and you are a top family? Could it be that your Tu family is a spy sent by the demon clan, or you were discovered, or you stayed after being prepared to be cut off. And your Yan Pojun setting, is this not Xiaobai? They slaughtered your family, and you all know that they probably passed by, and you all know that they are separated from the fox again, and you have to hide the news about the fox spirit in you. I am afraid you are not deliberately going to be anti-government and anti-humanity. It seems that he was born to be a traitor. Also, when the fox spirit came out earlier, I gave the protagonist a hint, but he didn't react. The Tu family and others had completely forgotten about Yan Pojun's fox aura. Forget it if they didn't sense it. Gu Lingling sensed it, so she didn't say anything and just let him go. You might as well not arrange these two plots. Finally, she added that what Tianyi and she reported was to falsely accuse the Yan family! Don't you think there's no conflict when you arrange the plot this way? It's too toxic and it really takes strength to persuade him to quit.

I thought for a while that most of the protagonists in current novels are not honest people. Maybe a truly honest novel would be a breath of fresh air. Originally I thought this book would be. It seems I was wrong.

I was dumbfounded. After reading a few chapters, someone jumped in and killed someone. What kind of three views is this?

You can become stronger by suffering a loss. Take a loudspeaker and go to the street to call daddy 😁

I also feel that Yan Pojun is the serious protagonist. The most powerful characters in the novel are either pig feet or villains. Your supporting character is better than the protagonist. The author is also a talented person.

When I saw Chapter 10 and didn't get to the topic, I had no choice but to abandon the book. Who has the patience to ink with you?

It's totally okay to be an ordinary person and suffer a loss

Please collect the new book, and take care of the seedlings! If you have any comments or suggestions, please leave them!

I just watched a few of them. The setting is very interesting and the plot is good (I haven't read much, just 6 chapters to get fatter). The problem is that the protagonist is 1.81 Meters tall and 55 kilograms, which is too thin! ! The one who is 1.8 Meters tall and strong should weigh at least about 140 kilograms! Weight ≠ fat! ! Many authors have very amazing settings. I have even seen one with a height of 1.93 Meters and 60 kilograms! ! Hemp pole?

I really can't hold it anymore when I see it later. The protagonist's aura is too strong, and I can't help but beat him after several levels! The protagonist is the most awesome in the world, and the others are becoming increasingly non-existent and unable to keep up.

Haha, now I'm used to reading the comments first when reading a book. Once I come in, it's all about the author himself…

Both the protagonist and the supporting characters have incorrect views

Congratulations on signing the contract, I'm just tired 😰

Just because you are so boring, I will give you all 7 recommendations today 😁😁

Why not write about becoming a scumbag and becoming stronger? ?

😁😁😁😁

This weight. . Feels like a strong man

Be more refined and easy-going. Angry people are annoying in themselves.

The protagonist is a bit powerful at beating cows across the mountain

Discover an author who uses love to generate electricity

It's a pity. Let's change my vest and write it again.