I Have a Divine Keyboard

[Book Title] I Have a God-Class Keyboard [Book Review] Brand new ideas, easy and refreshing writing, a million hits [Advantages] The plot and characters are very funny, easy and refreshing writing, sufficient supporting roles, stable writing, and vivid plot [Disadvantages] Some plots and characters have traces of routines [Evaluation] A [Remarks] I hope it will be helpful to the author, please don't criticize if you don't like it.

"On How to Correctly Develop the Protagonist" Ahem, after watching part of it, I had to say something because I really couldn't hold it in! The setting of Goldfinger is so good, so you ruined it like this? First of all, I don't understand. Why are you still dawdling if you have a golden finger? Those who have parents find their parents, those who have friends find their friends, use the power of their personal network and family finances to find and get opportunities to get along with awesome people, copy their powerful talents and martial arts, and rise to prominence! Then I don't understand, why is the plot of the academy dragging on so much? School is a place for ordinary people to learn. At the same time, school is also a gold-plated tool for people with special backgrounds and special talents. If the protagonist gets a gold finger, he can already classify special talents. What else is there to do? Making full use of cheats is the first priority! Finally, I don't understand. This world has obviously begun to respect martial arts. As a person who has been educated for so many years, doesn't the protagonist understand the importance of strength? Once I got the chance to rise, I didn't write down the feeling of desire and sense of purpose at all! The feeling of starting to plan to become stronger and full of purpose was not written out! He is still living in a coed school every day, just like an ordinary person in real life, without any of the values ​​​​and worldview influenced by a world where martial arts is respected! Ahem, on the whole, it just gives people the impression that the protagonist's character creation is really unsatisfactory. He lives in a world where martial arts is respected, and he also got a chance to rise. However, in the end, he behaves like an ordinary person who has nothing in real life. The arrangement of the plot seems quite embarrassing. Well, I don't know if the author can understand what I said above. To help you understand what I want to express, let me give you a simple example. A beggar suddenly obtained a top-notch supercar and a trillion-dollar fortune. However, this beggar just changed his tattered clothes into cheap street stalls that are no longer tattered. At the same time, he still begged on the street and ate the cheapest food. What does it feel like? This is completely uncharacteristic behavior! The sense of immersion has been basically destroyed. The plot is full of embarrassment, as if you just turned up and handed over tasks. The world where martial arts is the most important thing is similar to the real life where money is the most important thing. Even if a 17-year-old boy suddenly gets a supercar and a trillion-dollar fortune, there will be huge changes. These changes are the plot lines. It is too embarrassing to make up the plot in a rigid way. Come on! I need to improve my writing skills, and I hope my next book will make great progress.

Write some book reviews based on my experience. Brief review: A brand new school, a bad student, a keyboard from 300 million years ago, learning knowledge makes me stronger.

There is a house of gold in the plate, and there is beauty like jade in the key!

Is there any mistake? Is fantasy so difficult to get into? In the current recommendation, the top three data are not followed up.

It's so strong right from the start, I can only write about it by suppressing its growth rate first.

That year, I was 9 years old and she was 11 years old. I told her that I would marry her in the future, and she replied naughtily: Okay! That year, I was 12 years old and she was 14 years old. She was a head taller than me. I raised my head and told her that I liked her. She listened blankly and said nothing, then turned her head and stopped looking at me. That year, I was 18 years old and she was 20 years old. I had been carrying cement at the construction site for a year, and she was still attending a key university. I could no longer say that I liked her, because I felt that I was not worthy of her at all. I kept what I wanted to say to her to myself, and I will tell her everything when I am worthy of her. In the next four years, I never had the chance to see her again. I heard that she was already working. What I was more concerned about was whether she was a wife and a mother. My career is gradually getting on the right track. I can be considered a small contractor, contracting some construction sites, and I am no longer embarrassed by money. When I saw her again, it was in Dongguan, in a dim room, there were only two of us, and we were silent for a long time. She spoke: Eight hundred, seeing that you are an acquaintance, I will charge you five hundred. I tried my best not to tremble. I said: Come with me. Her eyes were dull for a moment, then flickered, and then she said like a fire extinguished: I'm not worthy of you, I'm just a lady, I have guests, nothing happens, I'll leave first. She left in a hurry. Later, I saw her on TV. She was being held by two policemen, with a look of horror and distress on her face. The TV didn't even cover her face, letting her dangle in front of me, letting her bump and crash in my heart until she shattered. The last time I saw her, she came to see me. She was on the roof. I looked up at her from downstairs and just looked at her for a long time. She left without leaving a word. The next time I heard from her was a year later, when her mother called me, saying that she was ill and could not be treated, and that she wanted to see me one last time. I can't accept it. Anyway, I feel very depressed. When I arrived at the hospital, I looked at her pale face in front of her bed, looking much thinner than before. I smiled at her. I don't know how ugly that smile was. She smiled at me too, as innocently as she did when she was seven years old. She raised her hand, and I hurried over to hold her hand. The tears couldn't help but fall down. She opened her mouth and said in very soft words: You know... You know... I was sobbing at this time, and immediately continued: I know, I know your heart, mine. My heart has not changed, I will not dislike you, we... She suddenly shook her head in excitement, interrupted me, and said in her weak voice: No... I want to... Ask you... Do you know... Is there a novel called "I Have a God-Level Keyboard"? I haven't finished following the updates yet... I hope you can...

The ones on Qidian's ranking list are all nonsense that can make people vomit after reading them. However, for truly good-looking books like this, you have to rely on good luck to occasionally find one in the corner.

Commonly used commands: cat to view content ls displays file list date View time shutdown shutdown reboot restart cd switch directory tree displays tree list mkdir creates a directory cp copy rm delete mv mobile vi modification ln shortcut link touch Modify timestamp iconv View encoding enconv Modify encoding find Find df du show disk space group group useradd userdel usermod User addition, deletion and modification passwd change password telnet remote connection ssh remote connection sh shell execute script crontab scheduled tasks —— Is there any other fancy usage?

Mainly, it is not surprising that the Chinese, who have a longer history than foreign countries, use keyboards in modern times. What is strange is: in myths and legends, is the English version also used? Haha, writing is the basis of expression of civilization. Chinese mythology is written in English? Otherwise, how to operate? Secondary translation? Why does this happen? Then why isn't the keyboard Oracle or something like that in the first place? This is simply due to laziness. I have no intention of turning Chinese mythology into a vassal and annotating English history. Do you understand that it will make people subconsciously resist? [Some people say this is a burden, but who doesn't have pride in their long history? Even if you change the operation, it is better than the keyboard. Don't use the poor expression ability of English to control the Chinese system. You will find it very cheating and the expression is redundant]

Tips for novices: This book has the power to distort people's spirit and will. You will lose yourself unknowingly. It is the first evil book of 2020. Those who are not strong-willed should be careful before entering. By the way, who am I?

The book was good at first, but I decided not to read it until chapter 314. The first poisonous point is that in the face of such a powerful enemy, you have such a good thing but don't make good use of it to better strengthen yourself and the people of Xiamen, and struggle with nonsense all day long. What's even more ridiculous is that except for teachers and classmates, there seems to be no one in the world worthy of being admitted. Every day you call everyone like a dragon to fight against powerful enemies. What are you doing? Even if you want to hide yourself, don't hide your abilities. If many people are fooled by you, who will find a drop of water in the ocean? The second poisonous point is that the enemies are so powerful and seem to be everywhere. Do you have to wait until the main leg grows up, becomes capable, and arrives at the scene before causing trouble? Poisonous point three, your mother is almost dead and was assassinated. You don't pay attention to her situation at all times and are too distracted to meddle in other people's business. How big are the soles of your feet? Poison point four, your father is strong, and you seem to be strong, but you are very reckless. Others are leading you by the nose all the way. Do you have a big head for your balls? If it weren't for the author's suppression and the enemies being so stubborn, the world would have been turned upside down long ago! Poison Point 5: How useful is it to dwell on the past and reason about the past? The key is to develop your own skills and focus on the future. This kind of suspense main line narrative method has long been worn out. The readers are from God's perspective. Short stories in suspense narratives are okay. For online articles with millions or even millions of words like this, if the suspense is left for such a long time, the readers will be annoyed if you don't.

The plot is novel and I think it's pretty good. You'll have to pay it back if you come out to mess around.

Regarding the setting, plot, characters, and writing style of the book, book friends are welcome to make suggestions. Seek common ground while reserving differences and adopt selectively. Thank you book friends for your long-term support!

I came here specifically to take a look, it's very well written 😊

Guide for god-level students: Just sleep in class and copy when you get home. 🤓🤓🤓

If you learn mathematics, physics and chemistry, you will not be afraid of traveling around the world.

The invasion of foreign culture is really serious, as is the worship of foreigners and their fawning over foreigners. Even China's way of heaven has begun to worship foreign countries. Even the procedures are foreign. How funny.

New book released, please collect and invest!

It looks good. I'll give it as a reward. Please update it soon.

I don't quite understand what this copy is about. Why can't you become the most powerful person by copying? Isn't your F2 obtained by copying? Why can't the ability copied from B1 be advanced and forcibly suppress the protagonist?

What the hell are you writing? I came here quickly. It's totally wrong.

The author is self-motivated, the author is very happy, and the readers are confused.

I really agree with that sentence, I have the keyboard in my hand! Those with keyboards and those without keyboards are completely different people!

Why are you so obsessed with writing the detailed development of Han Xiaoxing? The divine perspective of heaven, the perspective of the protagonist's experience, and the perspective of the supporting character's experience. It is difficult to tell a good story from three perspectives. Why is it that with a second protagonist like Han Xiaoxing, I feel that the author can no longer control the story? Obviously the better part is the boss behind the scenes and the omniscient and omnipotent big silver coin. , But I don't write it at all... Instead, I tell a slightly dark story of patriotic struggle... I really don't understand it, and it's nondescript... I just saw it on the shelves, the subject matter is very interesting, the story-telling style is too strange, and the apparently good story is so messy If there is any improvement in the following chapters, please let me know.

In Chapter 6 of the opening chapter, I just didn't quite understand what I was trying to describe. I was introduced to it by Douyin. The introduction on Douyin was about using a keyboard to chat about this and that online. It was quite interesting and I came here. It turns out that I can't say it doesn't matter, you are totally wrong. Golden Chapter Three is not engaging at all. Come on, the purpose of writing this is to persuade people who came through the same channel to quit. Selling dog meat with a sheep's head for money

Starting today, subscribe fully, put all the recommendation votes and monthly votes into this book, and use the post as proof 😰😰😰

🙂🙂🙂

How many book clubs are there? Is there a WeChat group or QQ group?

Why do we have to live to the age of 18? Can't we just lock the data of 17 years old (●°u°●)​ "