Lingfu Continent

Newbie, new book, corrections welcome.

After reading three chapters, my thoughts after reading. First, the writing is pretty good Second, the story is a bit cliche and lacks imagination. Third, the author should not bring his own preference into the protagonist, which will make him look childish. Fourth, although the supporting characters are tool men, they are not easily brought out to slap them in the face. This routine looks very embarrassing. Add more intelligence to the supporting characters and the plot will be more reasonable.