Quick Travel Life Mentor System

To be honest, I really don't agree with the values ​​of the wizarding world. In other words, to bring back the villain, you have to sacrifice the protagonist. How is that different from the previous protagonists? The life mentor I understand shouldn't be like this

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With four thousand updates a day, she looks like Quanqin's wife. 🤐

It's good to watch, but the stories are getting shorter and shorter. The content of the story is gone as soon as I understand it, and many of the plot names are repeated. Some stories are not explained well, and some are inexplicable. I am confused. In fact, I can make the story longer, so that I don't have to worry about the plot.

Just watching it made me want to vomit. The first chapter only talks about the values ​​of life, and the second chapter is about giving it to an innocent person. The puppet list is more terrifying than brainwashing, because it completely erases personal will. Things that only take orders from others and cannot be seen or seen. No wonder they can't take the shop before and after it. This life coach teaches really well. It's almost like watching the villain reverse the villain you handed over.

The plot is undoubtedly very good, but each short story is too short, just like reading the synopsis. I once read a quick travel book with about ten chapters in each story and felt it was quite short. However, this one is even shorter. Every time I read it with more interest, the story disappears. The tasks are so fast that they feel too simple. The author can extend the short story appropriately.

It looks good, but is it too dependent on the system?

This kind of short and quick story looks good, at least it's not tiring to read!

I never saw the value of the protagonist's so-called life mentor.

I really wanted to laugh when I saw the name of the heroine. Author, I didn't mean to target the name of the heroine in your novel, but when my brother and my dad were joking, he always said, "Jingsang, the cherry blossoms in Japan are blooming, let's go see the scenery together." Because my dad's name has the word "jing" in it. So when I see the heroine's name, I always ask me to bring Zhusang in.

It's well written, but there are always missing chapters.