The Rise of the Pokemon Gym
精灵之道馆崛起
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 625k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- Original ACG Fantasy
- Updated
- 6y ago
- English
- Request a translation
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307Chapters
3.1kRecommendations
10.8kFans
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The gym leaders here are pretty strong; most are over level 50, some even reaching Champion or Elite rank. The weaker ones are still around level 30, likely inheriting their skills from their elders. The older members of the family must be very skilled. When a gym is first established, you need Pokémon at least level 50 to become a gym leader.
The author wanted to go for a comedic approach, but the writing wasn't good enough, resulting in forced humor that's incredibly awkward. 😥
The author wrote fan fiction, and the gym leaders are made too weak. This isn't a game; there's no starting weak setting. The gym you challenge at the beginning might be the one someone else challenges last. Gym leaders are all incredibly strong: Viridian, Giovanni (Emperor's Gym Leader), Pewter, the Rock-type master, the old man from Crimson, Professor Xavius from Team Rocket (who caught…
I've read 30 chapters so far, and I have just one problem. Can you please cut the internal monologues? It's just a simple introduction of the headmaster, and you've given him so much internal monologue. And what about the battle with Arbok after capturing Gyarados? Onix's internal monologues are excessive! This is ridiculous! Dude.
As a new author, this is quite an achievement. I also tried writing one myself, and it took me two hours 🥵 to write one chapter, and then I couldn't continue. It's really hard; my head feels like it's going to explode.
The combat descriptions were a bit frustrating (;_;) You issue three commands in one go, and the opponent only starts acting after all three commands are executed. Even though reality isn't turn-based, are your teammates just watching while you're using your skills?!
It's well-written, but the characters constantly unleash their auras, overwhelming everyone around them. It feels like reading a fantasy novel where characters show off and get slapped in the face.