The Dawn of Battle

The characteristic of fan fiction is that the protagonist of the fan fiction knows about the development of the plot and makes changes to achieve the effect of bringing readers into it. The character and style of the protagonist of the fan fiction will affect the entire book. The biggest feature of the book is that the protagonist seems to know but does not seem to know. To be honest, the character is not likable. After the first 9 chapters, I feel that the protagonist created by the author is very "that" Writing a fanfic in which the protagonist does not know the development of the plot is a test of the author's writing skills, and the subsequent foreshadowing is used to show the protagonist's initiative and high IQ. The protagonist of the book is extremely passive. Passivity here means various meanings, and some settings are unclear. Even if there are suspense and pitfalls, a part should be explained appropriately. This is the most important thing at the beginning of a book, such as The purpose of the protagonist, what the protagonist does, and what special abilities the protagonist has. Especially the first six chapters just looked silly to me. I encountered the original fire at the beginning and saved Kotori, which I didn't expect. In my opinion, the protagonist you set is more suitable to save Tobi Ichi Origami, because Kotori is saved by the original male protagonist, and the protagonist does not know the plot. In that situation, it is impossible to touch the original male protagonist. The subsequent rescue will be ignored by the world. Zhiguan is even more funny. Many of the plots you designed are very unreasonable and conflict with the purpose of the protagonist. If you want to open a harem, you should set the protagonist as a time traveler and know the plot, but your purpose is for the protagonist to travel through time and find a way to resurrect people. In this case, shouldn't you design an opportunity for the protagonist to develop power in this world? The above comments are all personal opinions. If you don't like them, please don't criticize them. If you think my comments are too extreme, I apologize here.

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I think the only person who deserves to be an elf is Shido. I don't know why there are always people who think that Shido is a scumbag and think he can do it. He is an ordinary person who is forced to save elves. He risks his life every time. He cherishes every elves and tries his best to protect them. Why is he such a scumbag? Of course, if you think a male protagonist has a harem, then I have nothing to say.

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The battle looks very nice, but if you look closely, you will find that the elves will not age even if they lose their spiritual power (Eya still remains ten years old after losing his spiritual crystal), and Shido's appearance will change just one year after Tohka disappears (original work). In other words, it will not take seventy years for Itsuka Shido to age and die, and other elves will return to their original state of being hunted. The only one who can seal the elves is Shido himself. Haha, it's very interesting.

Personal opinion: The protagonist is just a support person. It's outrageous to open the door for him. Since the elf likes Shido, there is no need to write that the elf has a crush on the protagonist. Also, Tohka just appeared in the world and developed a crush on the protagonist. As a result, Kotori dismissed the protagonist with a few words and told the protagonist not to let him get close to Toka. What kind of article are you writing? Can you write it clearly? Don't even know what is written? What is the use of this protagonist?

It would be okay if the protagonist was picking up girls, but why does it feel like the protagonist is just playing support, and the girl posted him for no reason? It's really confusing. Animation doesn't need to talk about that, you can just watch the scene, but novels don't work.

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The protagonist just couldn't guess that this was a date.

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You wrote a cuckold story and you gave me a whole Valentine's Day extra. When I wrote the fourth series, I said that the protagonist was her dependence, but then she turned around and asked Itsuka Shido to kiss me. How can I become addicted to cuckoldry?

This introduction feels a bit familiar

I felt particularly uncomfortable reading this book, and I didn't really like the main character. (Personal feeling, don't spray if you don't like it)

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