All the Heavens and the Underworld

The setting and characters are more attractive to readers, but I feel that the battle scenes are still lacking. It can be more handsome, for example, blood can be splashed on the protagonist's face, and then the scene of the protagonist rubbing the blood away will feel more handsome (for example). The hero's strength is very enjoyable to watch, and the theme of time travel and possession is also very interesting. However, the protagonist is not an ordinary person, which is exciting. In fact, it can reduce the frequency of pretentiousness. But in order to inadvertently show that the male protagonist is more awesome than others, the first ten chapters can talk more about the impact of the male protagonist's last time traveling through the world. It is also interesting to see how the protagonist challenges the various bosses in the world, or how to calm down troubles, especially the latter. Not only the fight scenes, but also my connections Good luck to the author for the expected development! 😁

I saw Tian Xia II in the introduction. As a disciple of Dahuang Bingxin Hall, I haven't looked back at Tian Xia for ten years. I wonder if there is still Pao Ze?

There are still idealists like the author these days... I'm convinced

I just finished reading the author's latest chapter. Overall, I feel that this book is a good one among newcomers. From the beginning, it seems that the author is indeed a newbie, but his growth rate is very fast. There are some poisonous points in the early stage, and it is easy to dissuade readers. However, by the end of the second copy, he has basically reached the level of some veteran authors. Especially when I returned to the main world for the second time, I was really amazed by the glorious antiquity of the Divine Realm that was slowly revealed, and I even vaguely felt like I was watching a lifetime. This is also the most attractive thing about new authors. Their ideas are even more unique than those of the great masters. Although their writing style may be a bit immature, these fantastic ideas make people look forward to them even more! Anyway, the author, please keep writing, I believe that as long as you can maintain this freshness, you can at least expect high-quality products in the future!

Hai Ming has been a bookworm for more than ten years, but he is new to writing books. He enjoys reading other people's books, but when he writes his own books, he finds that his claws are very numb 😭. Writing a book is purely out of interest and I am crazy during the Chinese New Year, but now that I have started writing, no matter what the results are, I will definitely finish the book 😁. If there are any problems or loopholes in the book, please point them out and Haiming will listen carefully😜. Finally, please give me a recommendation vote to encourage this newbie Haiming, thank you!

First of all, I would like to thank the editor for allowing me to be recommended in the category, and then I would like to share my thoughts on coding for more than 40 days. To be honest, for a bookworm like me who has been reading for many years, it was really painful for me to take pictures for the first time. The writing style cannot keep up with the imagination. I want to imitate the style of my favorite master, but it is easy to draw a tiger instead of a dog. I really want to write mindless and exciting articles by myself, but I can't let go of the old bookworm's insistence. It can be said to be a tangle! But no matter what, now that I have started writing it and so many friends are reading it, Heming will finish it no matter what. I will try my best to write a different Zhutianliu, I hope my friends will like it.

This is the first time I have encountered such a willful author. He has written hundreds of thousands of words and has never asked for rewards, collections, monthly votes, etc., And he does not thank anyone for being rewarded. Is the author too indifferent, or does he not care about this little money at all?

It's too difficult to write about a harem. Not only does it risk 404, but you also have to get scolded. If you don't write about it, it will look tasteless. Novels are people-centered. Without the emotional drama, there will be no feeling. It is difficult to agree with others.

I feel that even the most powerful person in this world is more powerful than the prehistoric one 🤫

It seems that on the day it was released, I ordered the first order and kept it in the bookshelf. I forgot about it. Suddenly I saw the limited fee and clicked in to read all the chapters. I still feel good about it, so I casually clicked on it. The fan value is only a few tens of points 😅😅😅. I will reward you with 2,000 coins first. If you subscribe, I will add it later 😥 If you don't keep it till you forget it 😥. Then I continue to keep it, author, cheers

This book is a bit of a pity. Many of its selling points are not reflected in the introduction and early stages. The main world is pretty well written, reminding me of Five Lolita. The system's ability to extract is also pretty good. I'm looking forward to the author's next world~

The main world has been well written recently, and it feels a bit like a supreme being. Come on!

. . . . . When I saw it today, it was finished and I was a little caught off guard. . .

When I saw the Golden Book World, I came to comment and browse around, but found that no one was discussing it? Has it been deleted? Has anyone tested it?

It feels a bit interesting to mix fantasy and fantasy worlds together. Many of them were of the same type before. I especially like the wizarding world. I hope the author can write it well and don't collapse. 🤭

The article says that the golden elixir system is not as good as the Shenzhou system. If it is a cultivating golden elixir Yuanying, it will definitely not be comparable. But the golden elixir avenue passed down by the Taiqing saints in the prehistoric times is not necessarily worse than the Shenzhou system.

The rest of this book is pretty good, but it would have been better if it didn't include the heroine. Every time I see the heroine, I get a toothache. I tried the poison myself. I suggest book friends who have just read this book skip the heroine part.

I hope you won't write about harems. If you don't know how to write about harems, but you insist on writing about them, that's just scolding. What kind of heroine do you want from a dark novel? How many popular books are about harems now?

The author said that he is a veteran, but he is obviously a newcomer in writing books. In fact, the Condor Shooting has been written badly, so why do you still write this? It is really a fixed mindset. If you ask me, wouldn't the beginning of the world of Gu Long be good? Fortunately, the writing is quite serious, especially after the first world, the level has increased. It's okay to jump and read.

? ? ? The author is passionate

Because Hai Ming has revised the previous chapters, all the paragraphs and comments in them are messed up. There is no need for readers to read it, otherwise they will find it confusing. Sorry!

When I saw the title and introduction of this book for the first time, my first impression was that the protagonist of this book should take the ultimate path of the Lord God. The great thief that Zhao Zhigao practiced on this rainy day. Deepen the boundless sea of ​​suffering and submerge all heavens and worlds.