Signing In from The Grudge

The writing is good, the characterization and description are very good, and the updates are very stable. The author seems to be young? (Ignore this sentence) But this kind of supernatural, fantasy and suspense novel needs to pay attention to the control of the power system, and don't just turn it into a fantasy and immortality novel. I'm not very good at writing book reviews. Anyway, keep writing!

This protagonist is well written. He takes risks and dedicates himself to others regardless of his righteousness. That is the beautification of characters in movies or books. The main character in the book cherishes his life for the benefit, and it is true to face difficulties. By the way, isn't it a good thing for the shackles to recover? After all, she fell in love with the protagonist in the end

I hope the author will write more emotional horror films like Kayako. Horror films can't just be pure horror films. I think the core of horror films should also be salvation.

Name: Burial Ghost Ability: Forcibly put a person into a coffin box and dance crazily until the person is knocked to death Skills: Forced blockade, forced burial Ghost Weapon: Silver Box Introduction: A professional black man who overturned his car and was killed by the relatives of the deceased. He has strong resentment due to the damage to his professional reputation and will force anyone who questions his professionalism to carry the coffin

I have the feeling of a house of horrors. The author must be steady to succeed. The plot and atmosphere are well set out. It was a little exciting and nervous when I watched it at night. It is the details of the protagonist. Some of the characters are not well described and not established. It may be childish. You can try to let the protagonist mature slowly. You can speak more clearly and rationally. Many people don't like the part about the conflict with the Security Bureau that the protagonist is like a mad dog. I looked at it from the perspective of a reader. I am actually a little bit embarrassed. However, the protagonist's thinking and logic are not wrong, but it happened so suddenly that everyone did not react. If the protagonist has no father or mother and was raised by her uncle, then she must value her family, but will there be naughty children in school who say that the protagonist is a wild child, or even get injured, making the protagonist very indifferent to the things around her? Also, it is best for the author not to let the protagonist form a cp with his sister. I read the part about the love letter in the hospital, and I feel that the protagonist and the two have a certain atmosphere, and they are subconsciously disgusted. Although I cannot represent the hearts of most readers, but I guess a small number of readers may not like it, so I will say it. I want the author to avoid some shortcomings and cause backlash. I also have a suggestion. I suggest that the author can properly rank the strengths and weaknesses of ghosts. Otherwise, you will be confused when you look at one ghost after another. Another one can explain the origin of ghosts in the real world. Ghosts cannot appear without explanation. What are the requirements for becoming a ghost master? These are loopholes. It depends on what you can't see in the short term, but it may have a big impact in the long run. The author can also write less. The place for readers to guess, after all, everyone reads novels to make them interesting and happy. If you guess a little, you will be interested. But if you read too much, it will cause visual fatigue and resistance. Hehe, of course, the above are my personal points, because I feel that this book is really good, so I would like to mention that the author must have an outline. Without an outline, it will be very troublesome in the later stage. The protagonist must be clear and stand out to make the readers feel interesting. Come on ＾0＾~ Author, we will always be with you.

I have watched many movies of "The Grudge", and I can only say that no one who has watched the movie will think that love can influence Kayako, and she will not talk so much to the protagonist, Jiu Wai Wai Wai. She is completely different from human beings from the inside out. To her, humans are just slaughtered pigs. To influence Kayako? Only Only a fool would think so, and Kayako has killed so many innocent people and destroyed so many beautiful families. They should have lived happily, but Kayako has ruined everything. Looking at the curse, I am not only afraid, but also angry. This dehumanizing monster is the ending she deserves.

I just read the latest chapter and let me share my personal thoughts (don't comment if you don't like my personal opinions). I really like this novel. First of all, it's the creation of the protagonist. At first, I felt that the male protagonist is just ordinary and has no special characteristics. Then I wrote that the male protagonist is very handsome in appearance, which makes me resonate very much. (Funny). When the male protagonist decisively attacks and kills four security guards, he will feel that he suddenly becomes a bit ruthless. But after all, he is a person possessed by a ghost, and the opposite person is obviously not a good person. You can watch it when you deliberately didn't come to the community 602 in front. When it comes out, the problem is not big. In other places such as Factory, Kayako, and The Shining, I can feel that the male protagonist's character is gradually changing. It may be that the author wants to write about the growth of the male protagonist and the impact of ghost possession on the male protagonist. I think we should pay attention to the male protagonist's emotional handling of Kayako. At present, because the author is making trouble, it seems that the relationship between the male protagonist and Kayako is a racing point. Most viewers probably also like to watch the friendship between humans and ghosts, but it still needs to pave the way for the change in the male protagonist's attitude. As for his ability, I feel that it can be added or not. Now that he has finally entered the locked state, the male protagonist should These two ghosts alone can usher in a wave of major enhancements. The author's outline for the ghost abilities that will be added later should be similar. However, the male protagonist initially looked for ghosts to protect himself. Now he can finally check and balance each other. There is no special reason, and he will not be stupid enough to think that there are no consequences. Strong, I personally look forward to adding a young lady like Sadako Rikuchi-chan to watch two ghosts or even multiple ghosts fight over love and jealousy. The male protagonist is trembling on the side and dare not speak. The scene will definitely be fun. As for the supporting characters, if this book follows the style of fighting for hegemony and forming a team I will still pay attention to it when I download the copy, but it seems that it doesn't matter if I don't have this idea. The origin of the system is also very important. If the origin is not explained clearly at the beginning, there will be more places to make an issue. What are you thinking about other worlds, behind-the-scenes bosses, reincarnations, and main characters? God, the system battle system can be messed up with anything. It's so easy to switch to other routines in the later stage, that's all. The above are all written by me without thinking. Everyone who has different opinions can just laugh. You have more important battlefields like Zaun's Mother Hunters! (Book review of this book), I personally like this book very much, I will wait for it to be put on the shelves.

[When I come back alive, I'll see who else is there]

Name: Spoon Ghost Ability: Holding a spoon, it will pester you and knock you anytime and anywhere Until you are knocked to death by the spoon Characteristics: Immortality

Come on, stick to your dreams, they will come true one day. Come on, keep working hard, everyone has unlimited possibilities.