Sign in from the Beginning of the Curse

I have the feeling of a house of horrors. The author must be steady to succeed. The plot and atmosphere are well set out. It was a little exciting and nervous when I watched it at night. It is the details of the protagonist. Some of the characters are not well described and not established. It may be childish. You can try to let the protagonist mature slowly. You can speak more clearly and rationally. Many people don't like the part about the conflict with the Security Bureau that the protagonist is like a mad dog. I looked at it from the perspective of a reader. I am actually a little bit embarrassed. However, the protagonist's thinking and logic are not wrong, but it happened so suddenly that everyone did not react. If the protagonist has no father or mother and was raised by her uncle, then she must value her family, but will there be naughty children in school who say that the protagonist is a wild child, or even get injured, making the protagonist very indifferent to the things around her? Also, it is best for the author not to let the protagonist form a cp with his sister. I read the part about the love letter in the hospital, and I feel that the protagonist and the two have a certain atmosphere, and they are subconsciously disgusted. Although I cannot represent the hearts of most readers, but I guess a small number of readers may not like it, so I will say it. I want the author to avoid some shortcomings and cause backlash. I also have a suggestion. I suggest that the author can properly rank the strengths and weaknesses of ghosts. Otherwise, you will be confused when you look at one ghost after another. Another one can explain the origin of ghosts in the real world. Ghosts cannot appear without explanation. What are the requirements for becoming a ghost master? These are loopholes. It depends on what you can't see in the short term, but it may have a big impact in the long run. The author can also write less. The place for readers to guess, after all, everyone reads novels to make them interesting and happy. If you guess a little, you will be interested. But if you read too much, it will cause visual fatigue and resistance. Hehe, of course, the above are my personal points, because I feel that this book is really good, so I would like to mention that the author must have an outline. Without an outline, it will be very troublesome in the later stage. The protagonist must be clear and stand out to make the readers feel interesting. Come on ＾0＾~ Author, we will always be with you.

Ghost Cube (Twisted Rubik's Cube, Mixed Cube) An independent Rubik's Cube without this kind of consciousness Built a different space and is in constant exchange of positions. Just like a Rubik's Cube, the space inside is twisting and transforming in different ways. If the ghost is at the junction, it will be completely divided. But not death. If the two sides of the body come into contact again, it will return to its original appearance. People do the same thing But if they are cut too much, they will die completely. Emmmm, ghosts will not, but if they are cut too much, they will lose consciousness Built-in rules, confusion, things inside will confuse their own existence, for example, ghosts will misunderstand their own laws and make mistakes. For example, this ghost has to constantly put on shoes, and the pain becomes stronger. After the chaos, he will think that he has to keep wearing gloves to become stronger. These will become common sense to him. You can't know through reminders Ghost cars (paper boats) emmmm and the like You can go anywhere by paying a price Anyone can get on Appear anywhere randomly It is harmless to the human body if it does not violate the rules In-car rules (plus some terms) 1. The sound must not exceed a certain decibel 2. No violence 3. When the lights are on, you cannot lie 4. When something with you leaves the car, you must leave the car within three times of opening the door 5. Car. A driver is automatically selected each month who can conduct any transaction with the passenger, um, has the ability to abstract concepts. For example, lifespan, ghosts, righteous or evil hearts, love, etc. To become a driver, you must consume ten years of life, one year of life for each transaction, at least one physical transaction, and no restrictions on information transactions 6. Transactions must be equivalent. It can float up to 50%😏😏😏 Whether it is equivalent or not is judged by the TV on the ghost car 7. The driving force for driving is the life of the driver, those ten years are the starting conditions, and the remaining transactions are the growth conditions 8. While driving, the driver can disclose the terms and conditions to the passengers, which can only be judged in the form of a transaction, and the price will be determined by the car. After the driver leaves the company, he is not allowed to disclose the relevant information of the car in any form, otherwise he will die on the spot🤒 PS, passengers in the car who violate the rules will be thrown out of the bus directly and thrown into a different space. Ghost landmarks It is just a few big arrows that guide the direction you want to go. It can point to places, people, or things But it only refers to the direction that last existed when using landmarks. , If it moves, you have to use it several times Resurrect the doll Place your soul on the little doll, After the death of the body, there are seven days. Use dolls to seize bodies or repair bodies. No resurrection within seven days. Will be turned into a brainless ghost by the yin energy. Ghost Easter Egg System review A high-level ghost fetus appears randomly, or various props that can be used

Author, don't be anxious. You are just raising books. You can enjoy them by killing them together when you have fattened them up. I have only raised two copies and I can't help but start killing them. I personally feel that you are quite suitable for this type of writing. If you want to read it, I hope that the author will give you a review 🥺

The saddest thing in the world is that the author of a good book writes extremely slowly. Don't be slower just for the sake of petty profit. Oh, it hurts. Take a month off and read it again in a month. I won't read it until April has more than 100 chapters.

Come on, great writing.

The writing is good, the characterization and description are very good, and the updates are very stable. The author seems to be young? (Ignore this sentence) But this kind of supernatural, fantasy and suspense novel needs to pay attention to the control of the power system, and don't just turn it into a fantasy and immortality novel. I'm not very good at writing book reviews. Anyway, keep writing!

This protagonist is well written. He takes risks and dedicates himself to others regardless of his righteousness. That is the beautification of characters in movies or books. The main character in the book cherishes his life for the benefit, and it is true to face difficulties. By the way, isn't it a good thing for the shackles to recover? After all, she fell in love with the protagonist in the end

I hope the author will write more emotional horror films like Kayako. Horror films can't just be pure horror films. I think the core of horror films should also be salvation.

Name: Burial Ghost Ability: Forcibly put a person into a coffin box and dance crazily until the person is knocked to death Skills: Forced blockade, forced burial Ghost Weapon: Silver Box Introduction: A professional black man who overturned his car and was killed by the relatives of the deceased. He has strong resentment due to the damage to his professional reputation and will force anyone who questions his professionalism to carry the coffin

I have watched many movies of "The Grudge", and I can only say that no one who has watched the movie will think that love can influence Kayako, and she will not talk so much to the protagonist, Jiu Wai Wai Wai. She is completely different from human beings from the inside out. To her, humans are just slaughtered pigs. To influence Kayako? Only Only a fool would think so, and Kayako has killed so many innocent people and destroyed so many beautiful families. They should have lived happily, but Kayako has ruined everything. Looking at the curse, I am not only afraid, but also angry. This dehumanizing monster is the ending she deserves.

I just read the latest chapter and let me share my personal thoughts (don't comment if you don't like my personal opinions). I really like this novel. First of all, it's the creation of the protagonist. At first, I felt that the male protagonist is just ordinary and has no special characteristics. Then I wrote that the male protagonist is very handsome in appearance, which makes me resonate very much. (Funny). When the male protagonist decisively attacks and kills four security guards, he will feel that he suddenly becomes a bit ruthless. But after all, he is a person possessed by a ghost, and the opposite person is obviously not a good person. You can watch it when you deliberately didn't come to the community 602 in front. When it comes out, the problem is not big. In other places such as Factory, Kayako, and The Shining, I can feel that the male protagonist's character is gradually changing. It may be that the author wants to write about the growth of the male protagonist and the impact of ghost possession on the male protagonist. I think we should pay attention to the male protagonist's emotional handling of Kayako. At present, because the author is making trouble, it seems that the relationship between the male protagonist and Kayako is a racing point. Most viewers probably also like to watch the friendship between humans and ghosts, but it still needs to pave the way for the change in the male protagonist's attitude. As for his ability, I feel that it can be added or not. Now that he has finally entered the locked state, the male protagonist should These two ghosts alone can usher in a wave of major enhancements. The author's outline for the ghost abilities that will be added later should be similar. However, the male protagonist initially looked for ghosts to protect himself. Now he can finally check and balance each other. There is no special reason, and he will not be stupid enough to think that there are no consequences. Strong, I personally look forward to adding a young lady like Sadako Rikuchi-chan to watch two ghosts or even multiple ghosts fight over love and jealousy. The male protagonist is trembling on the side and dare not speak. The scene will definitely be fun. As for the supporting characters, if this book follows the style of fighting for hegemony and forming a team I will still pay attention to it when I download the copy, but it seems that it doesn't matter if I don't have this idea. The origin of the system is also very important. If the origin is not explained clearly at the beginning, there will be more places to make an issue. What are you thinking about other worlds, behind-the-scenes bosses, reincarnations, and main characters? God, the system battle system can be messed up with anything. It's so easy to switch to other routines in the later stage, that's all. The above are all written by me without thinking. Everyone who has different opinions can just laugh. You have more important battlefields like Zaun's Mother Hunters! (Book review of this book), I personally like this book very much, I will wait for it to be put on the shelves.

[When I come back alive, I'll see who else is there]

Come on, stick to your dreams, they will come true one day. Come on, keep working hard, everyone has unlimited possibilities.

Name: Spoon Ghost Ability: Holding a spoon, it will pester you and knock you anytime and anywhere Until you are knocked to death by the spoon Characteristics: Immortality

The book is very good. Ghost Eyes has the flavor of a talisman, but it is more helpless to rely on ghosts to fight against ghosts. There are no gods, Buddhas, or God, only pure ghosts. It is much better than conventional amulets and full of freshness.

(Ghost) Wanted Post The front of the wanted poster is like a mirror, with a ghost inside. If the wanted poster sees his face, he will be chased by the wanted poster. One at a time, he will also attract the hatred of other ghosts. The ghosts inside are unconscious Ghost Silence The body is linear, can be shaped at will, and is extremely cuttable. It is not mentioned in this chapter wherever it goes. (Mistaken as a Slow Token) Ability Evaluation: C- ~ SS+ (Ability Evaluation (Mistaken): C- ~ B- ) Let me write first The effect of being mistaken for a Slow Token Effect 1 (Mistake): The Slowness Token is uncontrollable and will absorb part of its energy to generate a light black translucent Slowness Field. In this field, all carbon-based organisms are known to fall into a state of stalemate and sluggishness, generating a large amount of resistance. Depending on the physique, the speed reduction effect is 40% to 70%. The sound generated internally cannot be transmitted to the outside. The scope of the field is not constant. It is basically centered on the token, and the radius ranges from 10 meters to 15 meters Effect 2 (incorrect): The token is indestructible, but it occasionally deforms and does not have strong stability. Known science cannot explain the cause of this phenomenon, and it is not recommended to be used for scientific research (I think some people here will say that its indestructibility is very powerful and awesome, and it will definitely be taken seriously. They say it should be used for scientific research. On the one hand, supernatural phenomena are difficult to study, and basically nothing can be studied. >On the other hand, use his indestructibility to do whatever you want. What I mean here is that it does not have strong stability. Most things need to have strong stability. It will deform. If it suddenly deforms when it is doing something, it will be over. Many things need to be very precise. If it deforms, it will basically be an incalculable loss!) PS. As for why I wrote it like this? Naturally, it's so convenient for the protagonist to get him. As for why others can't see it? On the one hand, it can be said that it is 👻 different. The perspective of high-dimensional creatures is not what you group of carbon-based monkeys can see. On the other hand, it is not worth paying attention to. A prop that has no strong energy response and has a useless effect. Very few people will use it. Even if it is used, the level of the person who uses it is not high enough, and it cannot be seen. (Squints and smiles) It's impossible for a person of too high a level to sit idle all day long and fuck among these hundreds of billions of low-level toys. Now let's talk about the role of Ghost Silence Effect 1: One-dimensional line (this thing can be said to be the essence) It is composed of one-dimensional lines. One-dimensional lines are theoretically infinitely long and have no mass. The area that spreads out is actually an extremely dense one-dimensional line. Because it is extremely thin, it can pass through the tiny distance between grams. Therefore, according to certain systems, factors, energy and other theories, the resistance it causes to each person is different. And due to the special stance of deconceptualization itself, it is partially regularized. Through its special energyization effect, it has the characteristics of indestructibility. Since it has no other objects attached to it, it has almost no energy response. (Most low-level ones are like this) Effect 2: Structure The one-dimensional line itself is very creative (plastic) The initial shallow usage can spread it as a field, without affecting itself but slowing down the speed of others (strength can see through its essence, or see through it through certain methods His essence, then this method is useless Later, it can be shaped, connected to another world, etc. Manipulate the corpse, use it as coordinates or something Ghost Festival Delete and fuse the ghosts in the body, The ghost sacrifice will also be passed into your body as a ghost, but this ghost has no consciousness, and the ghost that is forcibly fused will also shut down The Wedding Dress Ghost Mirror The Wedding Dress Ghost is a dowry when the Wedding Dress Ghost gets married. The Wedding Dress Ghost dies in front of the mirror, and the soul goes further into the mirror. After the Wedding Dress Ghost is destroyed, the mirror will be broken, and some of the forbidden fragments can be used as space containers. The elite face It can also scratch ghosts. It hurts a little Ghost tributes (vinegar, apples, soy sauce, it's a mess) Give them to increase the ghost's strength, but it will make the ghost line sleep for a certain period of time. Ghosts that are too strong will not react if they eat it, but they will also want to eat it. > It can exist as a ghost, but it has no self-awareness. What exists is a ghost's body. It can be used together. It can frequently enter the dream space and reverse the life and death of the opponent. There is a certain probability. The attack frequency is very high. For example, Frandy and other dream ghosts all belong to the same dream space. In the dream space, there is a main large dream space, and there are many small dream space fragments around it. Each dream can exist as a small dream space It is best not for every ghost to have self-awareness. I haven't seen it later. If all of them are conscious, the horror will be reduced. Well, that's how I feel

It's better to change Golden Chapter 3. The first thing you do after going to a classmate's house to see ghosts is to go home and take a shower. I won't call the police. Why are you washing away your tears? Go to bed after washing? Not searching for information online? Why don't you go to a crowded place and take shelter?

The protagonist arrived in Japan on a plane. When he met Japanese people near his house, he suddenly discovered that he could understand Japanese. This means that the cabin crew of Japanese flights do not speak, Japanese airport announcements do not exist, Japanese passers-by do not speak, and public transportation announcements do not exist.

It's not like supernatural. I thought I was just watching magic here. The dialogue between the characters is too weird.

Protagonist😳😳😳😳

Ghost Fetus: Ghost Marbles Function: Let the surrounding ghosts who can see ghost fetuses hear the marble sound. The sound will get faster and faster. The faster the sound, it will have a scaring effect on the ghosts. If used on humans, it will make people's heart beat faster and die Resuscitation: The marble sound is a file composed of a certain Morse code. When the file is typed with the marble sound, it will be revived That's right, I'm going to crowdfund today to write a book 😏😏😏. Mr. Shan thinks it's good to mention it. I'll recommend it next time if I have any ideas.

Name: Jiuyan (Ghost Bride) Gender: Female Race: Ghost Talent: Summon imps, crows Skills: Illusion, life-killing, claws, hair, hell chasing Ghost weapons: sedan chair, lantern, the sedan chair can be used as a mount. When injured, you can enter the sedan chair to recuperate and rest, the lantern can release ghost fire to burn the enemy Introduction: Abandoned by the groom during his lifetime, he committed suicide with hatred and turned into a spirit. The ghost bride, longing to be loved in the infinite world, is obsessed with the male protagonist's love words and handsome appearance, and becomes the male protagonist's master. If you see it, please reply to me, thank you The picture below is my image. If you see it, please reply {"NickName":"Book Friends 20190103145801651","UserId":326652494}

The author is the most handsome person I have ever seen, has the best personality, and is the best at playing games.

I heard that there are monthly tickets in other books that can be refined. I want to try it.

What kind of thing is written? It makes no sense at all. What we want to watch is the exorcism of Kayako, not a trash being played with by Kayako. What is the difference between that and watching a movie?

The first three chapters are really too discouraging. The ghost was beaten away by ordinary people with fists and kicks. He was too weak and incompetent.

Kayako is the heroine? Crazy? It's impossible for her to be influenced? Crazy

I'll keep it. I'll watch it together later. It's gone. The thief written in The Grudge is so good. Why is it gone?

When I read Chapter 27, the poisonous point is that the dialogue is too awkward when the protagonist interacts with non-NPCs, but it is good if he is with NPCs. NPCs refer to ghosts and the corresponding plot... Maybe the distinction is not very reasonable, but this is the first impression.

Your book is a bit messy! It's as messy as Japanese people writing Chinese!