Play the Lord God

Do you know why no one reads your book? I couldn't watch it at all, and I didn't find it interesting. . . . . . . . . . .

The author has a lot of heart, but the protagonist and the plot are terrible! There are rules everywhere, and the protagonist is a madman

Can you fight game planners? Your novice mission was not written well enough. The protagonist made a cool move. What readers want to see most is to get rich overnight and try their best to turn the bicycle into a motorcycle. But in the end, the motorcycle did not turn into a motorcycle and the bicycle was gone. So you got an easter egg and let us wait for the second week of the game. Isn't this just appetizing? Only allowed to look, not eaten. Two words: disappointing

The beginning is okay, but it gets worse and worse later on. I don't know what to say. There is no beginning or end. It's incomprehensible. Is it really scientific to allocate the rice in the big pot? Everyone becomes the protagonist's loyal little brother, at the expense of oneself and others? And that female suitor has an extremely low IQ and is extremely poisonous.

I really don't see the desperate situation of the protagonist in Chapter 8. What is the thought process of taking out a weapon and killing the monster directly? But if the author is a newbie, it should be a practice. I hope to write high-quality novels in the future.

Not to mention anything else about this novel, the protagonist's character and plot development are terrible. The protagonist's attitude towards playing games determines that he is definitely a lone ranger in most games. What does it mean to form a team? It looks awkward.

Alas, this book is not good. There are too many poisonous points. I say goodbye.

To be honest, the change is not that good. First of all, you don't understand the meaning of the word (infinite). Second, you set the protagonist to be tired of the game Let him enter the infinite space. However, the main god you set is too game-like. It is not infinite at all. Third, the infinite space I understand is the main god's big ball of light It is omnipotent and omnipotent. To sum up, I am not trying to criticize you. Oh, and the writing style is average. The sense of substitution is not too strong. It's really not that good. I am willing to type so many words. I am saying this because there is still room for improvement in general. Story imagination is very important and writing style is more important.

I can't understand it at all. . Why were you so confident at first? Aren't you afraid that the Lord God is like a reincarnation paradise?

You are the main god here and there, it is obviously just a game

What do you think of the Lord God? Shouldn't the score be higher if the task is changed? All the tasks you mentioned must be according to the plan of the Lord God, and cannot be changed at all. Any change would be against the Lord God's will. You are forcing an explanation. It also writes about a main god who creates a game world specifically for games, just like an ant delusional that humans will build him a garden so that he can play games. Author, do you have any idea? &&& Will do this kind of setting. 😜

Doesn't the Lord God give you a task to perform freely? Just completing the goal? Will you get more rewards if you change the plot? After dragging down the main god infinitely, what has become of the main god?

I paid money... Just to read your book, so please don't be a eunuch, come on.

You can write well, come on!

The author is probably a newbie, so don't be discouraged if the quality of this book is not good, just think of it as a way to practice writing.

There are only 10 comments and it's normal that no one reads them.

The protagonist does a lot of tricks, but in the end the rating is the lowest. Both worlds are E. What do you think? . .

It's really a bit toxic in the early stage Even if there are foreshadowings, the changes to the plot in the early stage have resulted in low income. The low income is not enough points to increase the strength, and the strength is poor. Surviving the foreshadowing depends entirely on the author's divine pen The inventory is also a bug. A group of people always don't have enough food and water. In the inventory, do you have to put bags and bottles in it? Not a box of cookies or a bucket of water? If the author doesn't fix these bugs, he will probably drive away many new readers.

Using normal and low logic to write novels with genius logic relies entirely on forcible rounding up of plots.

What does the CS in the author's name mean? I saw several authors have this

You can't drink like this even if there's a peanut in everything!

I used my cash to get a double monthly pass for the author, but indeed, I felt that the plot of the devil was very problematic, and my interest in reading was very low. I jumped halfway to the island, and the zombie world has already begun to jump to the end. It's just that this type is rare, so support me and hope to stick to it, otherwise, it will be difficult to get up.