Stellar Laboratory

I'm a little curious whether you are writing about transformation into a substitute, or if not, why are you writing about transformation as unnecessary!

The author is a bit miserable. He has more than 500 chapters and only has a dozen posts. (Come on, author) (By the way, does the protagonist have that thing?) (I haven't read it yet)

I have just ordered and read the updated chapters of the entire book. I feel that it is pretty good overall. Although there are many problems, there are no major flaws. The results should not be so bad anyway. There are so many novels in Qidian. Among the novels with more than 1 million words, I have never seen one with a worse score than this one. Let's talk about the book. 1. The overall story is very bland. Like plain water, the plot does not have any ups and downs. From the beginning of time travel and transformation to later becoming a deputy lord, it feels a bit straightforward. 2. The plot is procrastinating and there are too many meaningless parts. Nearly 200 chapters are written about a college entrance and competition. Does this have any significance to the main plot? The key is that the content in these two hundred chapters has a sense of repetition, especially in the three secret realms, where you can find and fight monsters to get rewards. What could have been written in dozens of chapters took so long, making the reader feel very boring. I wrote more than 1 million words, but there are only two major plot points in one, the academy and the protected area, without a clear main line. 3. The positioning is unclear. The protagonist of this book transforms into a woman, but there is a spiritual puppet with a male identity. The two identities, one bright and one dark, can be described alternately. The idea of ​​this theme is very good, but there is a problem in the article. The presence of female identity is too low, or there is no sense of existence. Readers who click on this book will read the transformation story, but the characteristics of the transformation story are not reflected in the work at all. Moreover, the two identities of the protagonist are ambiguous, and sometimes it is not clear which identity is being written about. When describing the female identity, you can add some more feminine modifiers, such as the face, eyes, figure, etc. Seen from the perspective of others. I feel that the big problems are basically these three. Small problems can be ignored, but the procrastination of the plot really needs to be corrected. The writing must be detailed and appropriate, especially for a novel with a million words. I hope the author can continue to persevere, and don't forget to publicize it. The book is still good, at least it shouldn't be like this.

This book officially starts daily updating. Friends who like this book may wish to join the bookshelf to slowly fatten up.

The writing is pretty good. There is a bit too much theoretical knowledge in the beginning of the book (I haven't read the rest yet), so I suggest the author start from the story perspective when writing the book. Only by telling a story well can it attract readers to read.

Is it Lily? If yes, I will watch it

If you have any suggestions about this book, please feel free to submit them.

How should I put it,,, it will be interesting if you can read it from the beginning, but it took me several times to finish the first few chapters (ﾉД`)

Why didn't the author write anymore? Just started watching